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Badlands – Chapter 10
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“My killings don’t have to do with any of this Carmen… It means that… if you still decide to be with me and if you accept me for who i am and what i do; then your life will change…” I said rather dramatically.
“What do you mean??” She asked.
“Well; first of all… they are always people trying to get me… they’re always people trying to bring me down; kill me… especially when I’m in charge; other families will try and bring our empire down… and when they can’t catch me; they’ll try and catch people that are close to me; people that I love… like you…” I said. “So; you’ll always be in danger…” I said seriously.
“Shit… shit; shit; shit!!!” She got up and paced the bathroom; I stood up and stopped her.
“Hey; baby I need you to calm down… I know that this is a lot to take…” I said carefully.
“Way way too much… I, I don’t know what to say Shane…” She said. Her hands on her head; one second she’s be covering her face with her hands and vice versa. I went and hold her in my arms.
“Well; you don’t have to say anything but I do need you to choose… Carmen; I’ve fallen madly in love with you and even though… I know I’m not supose to…I’ve tried to convice my self to let you go but i can’t… i just can’t; here I am telling my deepest darkest secrets and that’s something I never do and not allowed to… I promise you; I will do everything in my power to keep you away from any kind of harm… but I’ll understand… if you don’t want all of this…” I stopped. I wasn’t ready for her rejection but praying to god that she wouldn’t do the latter.
“If I don’t want all of this?” She asked me with the question.
“Yeah; if you don’t want me… the risks… I’ll understand…” I said to her; looking deep into her eyes.
“And What if I do choose that???” She asked.
“Then; I’ll leave you… if you choose to never see me again; I’ll do just that… I’ll leave this house immediately…” I said to her. “And you’ll never hear about me or see me ever again……” I said.
It felt like hours until she said something else to me.
“I don’t think I can do that…. I don’t think I can leave you…” She said slowly and quietly; like hiding a secret.
“Okay then…” I nodded lightly; couldn’t help but smile.
“But Shane; I’m scared… I don’t want to lose you…” She said.
“You won’t…” I said smugly. I held her cheeks and I kissed her passionately. Like our first kiss; soft and heated. Out tongues danced the seconds away. We both broke the kiss for some air; but we are still so close to each other; we were sharing our body warmth.
She places soft and quick kiss on my lips.
“Tell me you love me now…” She whispered.
“I love you now; I love you always….” I replied to her.
Tbc…
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I really loved and enjoyed reading this chapter. I know we shouldn’t praise violence, but nevertheless I liked the tough Shane =P I think Carmen should have thought about her descision before she says yes, but as you already said – they are too much in love. anyway…i hope you’re going to post (very) soon !
wow… i love it! your story is so different and i like it a lot… i want a happy end for them.. if i cant get it on tv, maybe i can get it here!update soon, please!
What everybody else said.. Great.
oh thank good! But I guess somethings going to happen soon or later…But please I want a Sharmen Happy End!!!Great story by the way!
Mmm… this is all good, but I’m wondering about Jenny… somehow she seems up to no good, but maybe I’m being paranoid some ?
oh! I love it soooooo much! I mean, it’s too cool… and u ARE a GENIUS! I mean, ur writing is wonderful! Shane told Carmen the truth… she was too sweet and Carmen was sweet too! Please, post soon!!!!!!! They r great together… and Alice, I just adore her… when she thought Shanw was going to propose! Well, wouldn’t be a bad idea…
awesome. this story is fantastic. thank god Carmen decided to stay with shane. great writing!
Wooo!!!! This was intense! I love Shane as a tough girl who isn’t putting up with any crap. I’m so happy Carmen knows and wants to still be with her. UPDATE QUICKLY!
Whew! Carmen knows and the world is still spinning. Even though she’s decided to stay with Shane, Carmen still needs to let this all sink in. Then there’s Jenny…who knows what’s really going through her mind. Even though she is supposed to be protecting Shane she still takes her orders from Shane’s dad, so if he finds out that Carmen knows there may be nothing Shane can do….but now I’m getting ahead of the story and actually starting to freak myself out. This story is great…it’s got my mind working overtime! PPS!
Fuckin’ genius baby!! BUT I fill somethin’ iz about to happen to my girlz Shane and Carmen . . . Like alwayz from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . Stank . . . Da’ one and only, chicka!!!