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Badlands – Chapter 10
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“He also sends Jenny Shecter to protect me; she’s my dad personal assassin; she’s not only my friend but my protector… She does all the bad stuff for my dad and she’s the best at it… She is one of my dad’s right hand advisers and also one of his loyal goons… she saved my life three times; and I’m forever grateful to her… When I came here I didn’t know how long I was going to stay here; I’m suppose to stay quiet and lay low until everything is settled in New York and only then I could make my way back over there; I was to make sure no one… absolutely no one from any other gangs knows that I’m here…… that’s why I didn’t want to go to your mom’s… it’s too dangerous for the both of us… Jenny is supposed to take care of my well being and financial needs……” I stopped again. I looked at her and I don’t think she believes any words that came out of me.
It was quiet for a while and she starts to speak; her voice in cracks.
“So; you’re like in the mafia…” She asked slowly.
“Yes… we are the mafia…” I said to her.
“Have you…… killed anybody?” That was the second thing she asked me.
“Yes; I have…” I said quietly. Her eyes wondering; taking this in slowly. Is she going to break soon? I didn’t know what to add to that. What was I suppose to say? They all deserved it?? Well; some of them did…
“Ohmygod…” She let out; her breathing short.
“Carmen??” I asked.
“Uhh… this is… this is what not what I expected…” She said; freaking out a little.
“I know… but you deserved to know the truth…” I said and she stopped and realized that I was right.
“Okay…” She looked around; don’t know how to take all of this. “So… so uhh… So; what does this all mean?? I mean… you’re in the fucking Cosa Nostra for god sake!! Shit!! You… you’ve killed people!!” She said to me. Her eyes desperate for an answer.
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I really loved and enjoyed reading this chapter. I know we shouldn’t praise violence, but nevertheless I liked the tough Shane =P I think Carmen should have thought about her descision before she says yes, but as you already said – they are too much in love. anyway…i hope you’re going to post (very) soon !
wow… i love it! your story is so different and i like it a lot… i want a happy end for them.. if i cant get it on tv, maybe i can get it here!update soon, please!
What everybody else said.. Great.
oh thank good! But I guess somethings going to happen soon or later…But please I want a Sharmen Happy End!!!Great story by the way!
Mmm… this is all good, but I’m wondering about Jenny… somehow she seems up to no good, but maybe I’m being paranoid some ?
oh! I love it soooooo much! I mean, it’s too cool… and u ARE a GENIUS! I mean, ur writing is wonderful! Shane told Carmen the truth… she was too sweet and Carmen was sweet too! Please, post soon!!!!!!! They r great together… and Alice, I just adore her… when she thought Shanw was going to propose! Well, wouldn’t be a bad idea…
awesome. this story is fantastic. thank god Carmen decided to stay with shane. great writing!
Wooo!!!! This was intense! I love Shane as a tough girl who isn’t putting up with any crap. I’m so happy Carmen knows and wants to still be with her. UPDATE QUICKLY!
Whew! Carmen knows and the world is still spinning. Even though she’s decided to stay with Shane, Carmen still needs to let this all sink in. Then there’s Jenny…who knows what’s really going through her mind. Even though she is supposed to be protecting Shane she still takes her orders from Shane’s dad, so if he finds out that Carmen knows there may be nothing Shane can do….but now I’m getting ahead of the story and actually starting to freak myself out. This story is great…it’s got my mind working overtime! PPS!
Fuckin’ genius baby!! BUT I fill somethin’ iz about to happen to my girlz Shane and Carmen . . . Like alwayz from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . Stank . . . Da’ one and only, chicka!!!