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Badlands – Chapter 12
Then I did the only thing I could do at that very moment at in that situation. I started laughing; just randomly. I looked at the back and saw Carmen and Alice with confused faces; even jenny was wondering why the hell I’m laughing.
“He bought me the fucking house… didn’t he?” I said in a laugh.
“He did…” Jenny smirked.
“Holy fuck!” I heard Alice yelled out.
“You’re joking right?? Your dad bought you this freaking house!” Carmen said; dragging her self to the middle of the car and pointed to the mansion in front of us. I smiled and dangle the keys in the air.
“One way to find out…” I made my way out of the car and the rest followed. My eyes scan the solid metal gate; the tall white walls covered the area around us. I saw the metal chain at the side of the gate and big lock attached to it.
I scan through the many keys in my hand and looked at the one that would match the huge padlock. I looked at my back and saw the nervous faces from Carmen and Alice; jenny however maintained her cool. The tension was killing all of us.
I made my way and put in the most suitable key; of course it went into the lock smoothly; it was the right key. I grin as I turned and unlocked it. I pulled off the metal chain and let it drop on the floor. I started pushing the heavy gate at the side. I looked at my back again.
“I wouldn’t mind a little help…” I said.
It took us a couple of minutes to push it to the side and enough for all of us to get in. And there it is. The house; the mansion… the gift that my dad gave me. It was nice… it was very fucking huge. From the outside look; I could tell there are at least seven or more rooms in that house. My eyes averted to the garage; secretly hoping something’s parked in there.
I felt Carmen’s holding onto mine. She couldn’t take her eyes off the house; so did I. “You’re dad… is extremely generous…” She muttered.
“Let’s check out the garage…” I said; we made our way there; hand in hand. It felt good… it felt right. I was happy she was right next to me. I tried a couple of the keys until I got the right one in. I pulled up the shutters and saw a car parked in there; I couldn’t tell what it was since it was covered by a silver plastics material sheets. Covered perfectly to the shape of the car.
We both looked at each other for a while; again I looked through the set of keys in my hand and there was only key that looked like it could be a car key.
“Are you gonna open it…?” She said like a kid in a candy store. We were both excited to see what it was.
“Why don’t you do it…” I said. Her face was excited and nervous. She hesitated for a little bit but I gestured my hand to the car; telling her to go for it. She finally took a few steps forward and grabbed the material with her hand. She pulled it up from the start of the car to the very last inch.
What was then revealed was a shiny new red 599 GTB Fiorano Ferrari. I heard the gasp from Carmen; she actually covered her mouth with her hand.
“Holy shit…” I heard from my back; I turned and it was Alice. Her eyes were bulging out. “You get this fucking house… and a Ferrari too!” She let out desperately. “You’re dad must really fucking love you…” She said as she walked up to us. Yeah; I guess he does. Now I only have to tell Carmen that her whole life is about to change… for the better and for the worse. Whichever way you want to look at it.
tbc… whaddaya think??
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(28 votes, average: 3.46 out of 5)
thank god you finally posted !! i got more and more impatient, please don’t let us wait too long until the next chapter
hey , took you long enough…..It was great , i love he idea with the house and the car…Waiting to see how is Carmen going to react to the news….Post soooon , dont make us wait for so long!!!!!!!!!
I loved this chapter. I can’t wait to see how Carmen reacts to this new twist.
I’d switch lives with Shane in a heart beat..haha Awesome story, this just keeps getting better and better
My apologies to the first 30 or so readers; i screwed on the editing. It’s fixed now. Enjoy!
amzing as always! I wish a had an Ferrari…Keep going on!!!
Dude, a Ferrari ? That’s so lame. Tasteful gangsters drive Lamborghinis ! ;o) pps :D
YAY, an update. Love it!
I love this story!!! PMS!!!