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Badlands – Chapter 12
One by one I saw the black cars going away. I knew jenny was standing in the living room now. I turned and felt the keys in my hand. I looked up to see my friend; I felt bad about before. All of this… I did not expect all of this… well; at least not in five to ten years.
“What are these keys for?” I asked her.
She had her hands tucked in her trench. Eyes covered with sunglasses. “Grab your things… let’s go for a ride…” She said as she walked to the door.
I told Jenny to pick up Carmen and Alice at the Planet. I kept glancing at Jenny; her eyes were fixed on the road. I wanted it to be a surprise whatever it is… whatever that my dad has bought for me; these keys. I really didn’t what it goes to… it looks like normal bunch of keys. Some are different sizes and shapes.
“So; he told you about this… whatever he is giving me…” I asked her. Carmen and Alice sat quietly at the back.
“On the phone… yes…” She said. I looked at the front and saw the street sign… “Beverly Hills” planted next to the road. We got into the posh area. Big mansions and bungalows all over with exotic cars and tall palm trees surrounding the street and houses.
It reminded my family compound in upstate New York.
“So Uhh… where exactly are we going…” Alice quipped. “I mean I know where we are.. But this place is surrounded by mansions and…” She said.
“We’re almost there…” Jenny cut her off.
And we were almost there; she slowed the Cadillac down and finally I laid my eyes on the biggest house on that street. It was a dead end street and jenny parked right outside of the gate. Okay; so we’re in front of a big old house. What’s next? He didn’t actually buy me a fucking house… a big fucking house that is.
I couldn’t see the entire house because of the tall walls and gate; but I could tell from what I can see it is an enormous size. Everybody was silent; everybody was confused except for Jenny who just turned the ignition off.
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(28 votes, average: 3.46 out of 5)
thank god you finally posted !! i got more and more impatient, please don’t let us wait too long until the next chapter
hey , took you long enough…..It was great , i love he idea with the house and the car…Waiting to see how is Carmen going to react to the news….Post soooon , dont make us wait for so long!!!!!!!!!
I loved this chapter. I can’t wait to see how Carmen reacts to this new twist.
I’d switch lives with Shane in a heart beat..haha Awesome story, this just keeps getting better and better
My apologies to the first 30 or so readers; i screwed on the editing. It’s fixed now. Enjoy!
amzing as always! I wish a had an Ferrari…Keep going on!!!
Dude, a Ferrari ? That’s so lame. Tasteful gangsters drive Lamborghinis ! ;o) pps :D
YAY, an update. Love it!
I love this story!!! PMS!!!