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Badlands – Chapter. 16
Carmen’s POV
I could cry with the words she says to me. How sweet her words are and how heartbreaking at the same time.
“…he won’t let someone as beautiful as you go down to hell…” The words played in my head over and over again.
I’m never am a religious person but the moment Shane stepped out of our bedroom I started praying to god that I wouldn’t hear any gun shots. And I don’t even believe in the whole religion thing…
Knowing that Escobar and Mr. J. Kensington down there in the hall; discussing things that I rather not know about. It was all too much really; I prayed that God would save Mr. Kensington life today. Whatever he has done to Shane and her family… I hoped that Shane would find it in her heart to forgive him; but my hope wasn’t strong and my curiosity of what happen got hold of me.
I turned off my laptop and put it aside and my way down to the left wing of the house; where the hall is. Where I know that this is where Shane would her meetings and so called businesses.
I tried my best taking my steps ever so lightly; not to get intention from anybody in the hall. I walked closely to the thick walls of the house and stood beside the entrance of the hall. I could hear the conversations clearly; and I could hear sniffs and little cries. The one who were speaking at that moment when I started to eavesdrop was Escobar.
“Ey Shane… you know; I’m a man of my words… and when I say I’ll have his two front teeth in my hands… I meant it…” He said and chuckled. My head was already spinning with the unusualness. I didn’t hear Shane said anything… just yet.
“Well, Well… It’s Jimmy Kensington him self… if I was Gabe; I woulda end your conniving little life long ago… you ain’t nothin’ but a greedy pig, boy!” I heard Smoky said in that definite southern accent. Still no words from Shane.
“P-Please… Shane…. I-I-I’ll do anything; please… d-d-don’t hurt me; Your father wouldn’t like it if he knows this… this little shit here has done enough!” I heard Kensington said; stuttering… angry and scared. I could only imagine.
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(33 votes, average: 3.82 out of 5)
WHY??! Why did you stop here ? =( Must have been hard for Shane to do what she did. But I agree with Carmen, she can’t force her to do what she wants – even if it’s for her safety.Anyway, thank you for posting so quickly. I was positively surprised. Post soon again =)
Awesome story..only Carmen can keep Shane sane..her life is tough..must be hard to be the boss..lots of pressure. Post soon!.
Great story, please keep writing!
Ah~~~ This is so great!! I dont like to see Shane on a dangerous line like Carmen but I cant help but fall in this tough Shane.
yeah!!! You are such an awsome writer!!!Keep going!