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Badlands – Chapter 5
“What’s up?” She said, already know what’s coming.
Carmen was playing with the rim of her champagne glass and looked up to her friend.
“She kissed me…” Carmen let out.
“Who?” Alice said, playing dumb.
“Shane! She kissed me… and I kissed her back…” She said with a confused face.
“Ooooohhh… right… well how was it??” Alice asked.
“I’ve never had anybody kissed me like that… Ohmygod Alice… it was a fucking mind-blowing kiss!! I mean… she left me breathless…” Carmen said dramatically.
“Wow! That good huh??” Alice smiled. “Did you two talk about it since it was that good?” She said.
“We did, and she gave me these lame answers like she didn’t know what came over her and she sorry… she didn’t know what came over her…” Carmen Started. “I mean… like what the fuck Al?? We both enjoyed it… I can tell you that much….” Carmen said.
“I’m sure you did…. Did she say anything after she kissed you…?” Alice was digging up more dirt.
“Well, before the kiss I was asking her stuff and she was giving me these one word answers… and I asked her why are all your answers vague… and then she said to me… ‘Cause… you wouldn’t really wanna get to know me…’ … I mean… what the hell does that mean?!?” Carmen let out frustrated.
“Right… right, right, right…” Alice nodded with her a finger on her lips, thinking about something.
“Well Carm… maybe you should just let it go… if she said that to you… obviously, she’s saying something there…” Alice said, secretly not wanting her friend getting into any kind of trouble.
“What? W-w,wait a minute… Alice Pieszecki doesn’t give me that type of answers… she usually tells me to go for it not to ‘let it go’….” Carmen was already suspicious. “Do you know something that I don’t??” she asked and raised one eyebrow.
“What?! No… Carm… I’m just saying…” Alice was in deep trouble thinking of how to answer her friend without getting her self killed. “Look… I don’t know anything, okay? But… I don’t know, this Shane person… she seems like heart breaker don’t ya think??” Alice covered it up. Both of them took a look at Shane who was standing in a cool stand, a cigarette in one hand and another in her pants pocket.
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(27 votes, average: 4.07 out of 5)
I’m not sure yet why I like this story so much.. but yeah I do like it lot. And I like the way you make it flow.. You found the right pace, you know? Great work! o/
Let’s see how many hours Carmen and Shane can remain “friends” before their chemistry draws them back to each other arms and lips… One dance BT, just one dance and the charade is all over. Hint… Hint!! Can’t wait for your next chapter.. PPS. Thanks.
so cute… but I don’t want them to be friends!! God, they just can’t!! They are meant to be, right? Please, tell me you’re going to get them together… my God, Alice is so ADORABLE&FUNNY!!!!! I think she’ll become Shane’s friend… because SHE is her friend… not Carmen! Right? Please tell me I’m right…
I loved this chapter ! PPS
riiiiiight friends….with steamy benefits. Oh the suspense is killing me 8D
This iz fuckin awesome!!! I’m lovin Alice and Shane in diz one but im ready for my gurlz Carmen and Shane to hook up or do sumtin . . . Whelp, like alwayz from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . Stank . . . Da’ one and only, chicka!!!
Real good job here, definitely looking forward to the rest of this story :)