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Badlands – Chapter 5
Carmen let out a sigh. “Yeah… a really really really… hot… cute… sexy… heartbreaker…” Carmen said slowly. Alice looked at her friend like she’s totally losing it.
“Whoa… back up a minute here… Carmen, please tell me you’re not falling with your own housemate??? That’s just a big no-no…” Alice waved a finger at Carmen who rolled her eyes. Carmen laughed it off.
“… I’m not falling for her… she’s way too… dark, for me to handle… and please, if you have her around you 24/7… you’d be thinking the dirty too okay…” Carmen confessed.
“Oh really? So you’ve been thinking the dirty about her then??” Carmen was trapped.
“… Maybe…” Carmen smiled.
“Oh, you so have…” stated Alice.
Soon I saw Alice and Carmen joined Tina and Dana again. I was looking over at them saw Alice waved her hand at me telling me to join them. I nodded at her and finished my cigarette. I walked passed Bette and she was still focusing on her barbeque with a glass of bubbly in her hand.
I stood near the group and pulled an empty chair and sat next to Alice. She passed me a drink and I thanked her. I saw Dana looking at me weirdly. I caught her eye and gave her a smile that seemed to make her more uncomfortable, inside I had to laugh. The girl doesn’t even know anything about me and somehow she was still intimidated by me.
I’m wondering why Carmen is being so quiet to me. Is it because of what I said to her in the kitchen? She knows it was nothing. I want to hear her voice call me name, but I’m getting nothing from her and its pissing me off.
“So Shane, we didn’t get a chance to talk before at the planet… are you liking LA so far? I heard that you’re from New York…” Tina asked me. She seemed like a nice lady, very motherly. She gave me her full attention and suddenly all of them were giving me their attention.
“Yeah… uhh… LA’s good… It’s uhm, very different from New York… people are more laid back here… I’m trying to get use to the sun 24/7…” I gave my cheeky smile.
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(27 votes, average: 4.07 out of 5)
I’m not sure yet why I like this story so much.. but yeah I do like it lot. And I like the way you make it flow.. You found the right pace, you know? Great work! o/
Let’s see how many hours Carmen and Shane can remain “friends” before their chemistry draws them back to each other arms and lips… One dance BT, just one dance and the charade is all over. Hint… Hint!! Can’t wait for your next chapter.. PPS. Thanks.
so cute… but I don’t want them to be friends!! God, they just can’t!! They are meant to be, right? Please, tell me you’re going to get them together… my God, Alice is so ADORABLE&FUNNY!!!!! I think she’ll become Shane’s friend… because SHE is her friend… not Carmen! Right? Please tell me I’m right…
I loved this chapter ! PPS
riiiiiight friends….with steamy benefits. Oh the suspense is killing me 8D
This iz fuckin awesome!!! I’m lovin Alice and Shane in diz one but im ready for my gurlz Carmen and Shane to hook up or do sumtin . . . Whelp, like alwayz from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . Stank . . . Da’ one and only, chicka!!!
Real good job here, definitely looking forward to the rest of this story :)