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Before the Fall – Eleven
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“Well,” Alice said slowly. “I’ll be damned. All this time all you needed was a good knock on the head, huh? And poof new Bette. Better Bette.”
Bette couldn’t help but laugh.
“What?” Alice asked in confusion.
“It sounded like you said better butt, Alice.”
“You’re laughing at that? Even your humor has changed. Hallelujah! Thank you Gods and Goddess for making Bette fully appreciate my humor, for it is the best damn humor she is likely to ever hear!”
“Let’s not get ahead of ourselves, Alice. Now why are we going to The Planet?”
“We’re throwing a party for you. A you survived party. You know since you didn’t die and we’re all appreciative of that.”
Bette frowned wondering how she could be okay with the sound of that. Maybe she was changing. Because before she never would have been okay with a surprise party thrown in her honor. She would have wanted to be a part of it, planned it, set it up, and the host of it.
“I’m damn glad myself. After we get out of the movie we’ll head to The Planet.”
““
“Do you remember that time we went skinny dipping?” Shane asked tipping back a beer.
“Which time?” Bette asked with a sly smile.
Shane choked on her swallow of beer.
“Oh, Bette! Oooh,” Dana sang out. “How many times have you two been skinny dipping together exactly? I never would have pictured that.”
“’Bout as many times as Alice and I have, I think, right Alice?” Bette turned to Alice.
Alice stared back at her wide eyed.
“You remember that?” she asked in a squeak.
“Yep.”
“Well…um…no one was supposed to know about that. I don’t remember,” Alice mumbled.
“About four times,” Bette stated.
“That’s about right,” Shane agreed.
“When’s my turn?” Dana demanded.
Bette leaned back in her chair.
“When I’m out of my many casts’. We’ll make a date of it.”
Dana grinned.
“Cool beans!”
“That’s so dated Dana! What have I told you about using that saying?” Alice complained.
“Any…hidden sex memories?” Shane asked.
“Hidden? What? You mean like forgotten sex memories?”
“Drunken excursions?” Laura piped in.
“One night stands?” Carmen asked.
“How about sex with me? Remember that? How awesome I was?” Alice added.
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let me be the first to say–faaaantastic! you’re developing this story in such amazing ways. i loved how you took away the jodi factor and gave us back carmen. heh. clever, you are. helena shouldn’t take no crap from bette, but bette is such a lovable control freak…they just have to reunite. pps:)
Oh I am so happy to see a new chapter of this story. Can’t wait for the next. Oh and this one was great btw, lol.
i feel like i’ve just had a refreshing coca-cola…ahhhhhh…that was good…what will helena say, will she open the letter, will she say bette do like a banana and split, will she go running like the lady in the harlequin novels, whatever she does, let her do it soon…hint-hint, please post soon..really enjoy your story.
You put the 17 Reasons Why sign to much better use than IC did. How can Helena resist contrite Bette? That letter better not go astray!
Very nice. I was very excited to see that this got updated. Post again soon please? ‘Cause I can’t wait to see what Helena’s reaction is gonna be to Bette’s letter.
Lovely chapter as always, Speedy. Alice is adorable, and its nice to see Bette so… nice :D Thanks for this!
Please don’t stay away so long again…
I love this story. I hope that you’ll continue. It is so great, and I want to know what Helena’s reaction to Bette is.
Aww, this chapter was great. So cute! I’m glad that in losing her memory and getting it back, Bette doesn’t see the point of denying her love for Helena anymore. Alice is so hilarious, and Dana is always cute of course. Post soon, Speedy. ;)
great letter…bette is so nice…NOW….PPS
yay speedy! Alice is the most adorable charcter on this show! She makes me laugh all the time and her lines in your story were lovely! The letter…that was really touching. Really really well-written. basically like everything you write :))) PPS!
The letter was so sweet! Awwwwwwwww… I hope that Helena will be as touched as I am when she reads it. :D Soooo nice update! It was a long wait! All worth it! You’re a good writer, I like the way you put the emotions in it, so raw, yet so natural. :D Keep up the great work! Thank you for writing, speedy!
I’m with rufus.I’m anxious now about what will happen with that letter. Will it actually get to Helena and how will she receive it. Is it to much too little too late. I hope not.The banter between Alice and Bette is so on spot. Greaet uptake. PPS
The letter was lovely – Helena would have to be made of stone to ignore it. This was a wonderful update.
u know I’m so NOT into helbette but I am so rooting for this couple which is a tribute to your storytelling skills..love it and more pleasz.
Bette and Alice was so cute, you portrayed them very well…. The letter was great…. I can’t wait to see what happens next, please update soon, thanks!!!
I just absolutely love this! Are you planning on continuing it? Because I’d be really sad if you don’t. I want to see where this goes. The idea is really original and your writing is superb. So,please,think about it?