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    Before the Fall – Nine

    Story written on January 28, 2007 by Speed_Racer.
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    If you loved someone how far would you go, to get them to love you back? What if they never loved you?

    “Oww,” Alice shrieked.

    “There you go Bette,” Jenny said lifting the pillow again for another swing. “We’ll teach Alice never to lie to you again. Because your hair looks like shit.”

    Jenny swung the pillow again and Alice blocked it with her forearm and then tried to wrest it away from Jenny.

    “Give me a pillow,” Alice yelled. “I need to protect myself!”

    The pillow flew from Jenny’s hands and hit Laura in the face.

    “Did you do that on purpose?” Laura asked slowly getting to her feet.

    Jenny made a noise and ducked behind Alice.

    “Alice did it. You know she doesn’t like you, Laura.”

    “Dana control your woman,” Alice ordered.

    “You hit her in the face, Al.”

    “That was Jenny. Laura if you hit me I will hit you back. Harder. Maybe. Okay, maybe not harder but I will hit you. And perhaps even hurt you.”

    “Will you?” Laura asked seriously as she stood legs spread and tossed the pillow from one hand to the other.

    “I will,” Alice declared prying at Jenny’s hands around her waist.

    “Good to know,” Laura said and turned swinging the pillow at Shane. “That’s for leaving Alice alone with Bette!”

    “Fuck,” yelled Shane. “I thought we were friends, Laura? Fucking hitting me,” Shane muttered as she grabbed another pillow accidentally hitting Carmen when she flung her arm back.

    “Oh it’s fucking on,” Carmen muttered grabbing the pillow from an apologetic Shane and swatting Dana with it.

    Soon an all out pillow fight was in progress.

    Bette could only sit and watch in amusement.

    “You guys maybe we should just eat,” she called out after a bit.

    It seemed like everyone turned to look at her at once.

    “Um…I’m injured. So don’t even,” Bette muttered rolling herself backwards.

    “Grab her,” Alice yelled.

    Bette tried to wheel herself away but couldn’t as someone grabbed her chair and halted her progress.

    She covered her head with her arms expecting an attack of pillows any second.

    Instead all she heard was laughter.

    “You should have seen the look on your face, Bette,” Alice said bent over with laughter.

    “It’s a good thing you didn’t have Al do your make up too, because then you’d look ridiculous,” Dana said laughing along with everyone else.

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    Comments

    1. Wow! It would be so strange having no memory of the past and then have it all come rushing back at you like that. Thanks for the update–looking forward to the next!

    2. oh my god! Oh my god! All the memories came flooding back? That’s going to be really intense. What’s going to happen? Why? How? When? Amazing, Speedy, you write stuff close to my heart. Lovely writing! Thanks for the soon update! I’m so glad to read it! It’s perfect! :D

    3. You do know that I was meaning to write that I like the friendship between everyone right? The middle part was hillarious! Then the suddenly gaining back memory part just took my breath away. hehe

    6. This was good…really good. Will Bette let everyone know that she got her memory back right away? Will she call Helena? Will Helena come back to LA? Bette can’t travel right now. More please.

    7. wow Speedy this was soo cool. i really feel for Bette getting all your memories back like that. I loved the pillow fight and how the friends all stick together.PPS

    8. Your writing is great as usual. You gave us some laughter, the dedication of friends, as well as self awareness on one’s self. You are an excellent writer and it’s a pleasure to read your stories. Thank You!

    11. Oh come on!!! You didn’t stop there!! You’ can’t stop there!!! It’s so not fair!!! I becam e addicted to this story!!! Speedy, post an update as soon as possible, please!!!!

    12. Oh come on!!! You didn’t stop there!! You’ can’t stop there!!! It’s so not fair!!! I became addicted to this story!!! Speedy, post an update as soon as possible, please!!!!

    13. I am on the edge of my seat here, i cannot believe you just stopped there!! Meanie! You are one incredible writer, truly in awe of your style, love it! Thank you, pps.

    14. oh hell i’m a tibetter cheering for bette to get her brain back and make it good with helena!!!! damn u r good…pps…i’m on the edge of my seat…..yeah, i do feel 4 Tina but she should go get her a woman who truly loves her, shes too nice to play 2nd best….

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