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    Before the Fall – Nine

    Story written on January 28, 2007 by Speed_Racer.
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    If you loved someone how far would you go, to get them to love you back? What if they never loved you?

    Bette nodded to herself.

    “I led Helena on, didn’t I? The truth, Alice.”

    Biting her bottom lip Alice nodded.

    “Yeah. Yeah I think you did. But only because you didn’t know how not to. You couldn’t…I don’t know. You just couldn’t seem to get over whatever it was holding you back. I mean I remember when you found out Helena was in love with you. I’d never heard you sound so freaked out. It scared you. And ever since I think you’ve been running from Helena’s love. That sounds corny but it’s the truth I think. You could never let her go even when it would have made the most sense. But you’re not a bad person Bette. Complex. Unique. But not bad.”

    “That’s what everyone keeps saying. But the more you say, the more I doubt that. But thanks for telling me the truth, Alice. I really appreciate it.”

    “You wanna eat in here or out with us?” Alice asked changing the subject as she rose to her feet.

    Bette rubbed her eyes still feeling slightly tired

    “If you can stand my company I’ll join you all.”

    “Okay. Now Bette let’s do something with your hair, cuz you’re looking kinda wild.”

    Bette raised a self-conscious hand to her hair.

    “Would you…?” Bette asked.

    Alice’s grin threatened to stretch clear off her face.

    “I’d love too! You never let me touch your hair.”

    “Don’t do anything weird,” Bette warned.

    “Me? Never,” Alice swore placing a hand to her heart.

    Alice pushed Bette out into the living room and Bette realized that they’d gained company. Carmen, Dana and Laura had joined them.

    “What?” Bette asked as she noticed everyone staring at her.

    “Bette do you want us to kill her for you?” Jenny asked.

    “What?”

    “My cousin owes me a favor. No one will ever find the body,” Carmen added.

    “You guys,” Alice cried.

    “What?” Bette repeated again.

    “Your hair, Bette. It’s…horrible,” Shane said with a shudder.

    “Alice you said I didn’t need to look in the mirror!”

    “Because you don’t! These women wouldn’t know anything about good hairstyles. I mean look at them! They wouldn’t know a good hairstyle if it slapped them in the face. Bette you look wonderful.”

    Alice was suddenly slapped in the head with a pillow.

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    1. Wow! It would be so strange having no memory of the past and then have it all come rushing back at you like that. Thanks for the update–looking forward to the next!

    2. oh my god! Oh my god! All the memories came flooding back? That’s going to be really intense. What’s going to happen? Why? How? When? Amazing, Speedy, you write stuff close to my heart. Lovely writing! Thanks for the soon update! I’m so glad to read it! It’s perfect! :D

    3. You do know that I was meaning to write that I like the friendship between everyone right? The middle part was hillarious! Then the suddenly gaining back memory part just took my breath away. hehe

    6. This was good…really good. Will Bette let everyone know that she got her memory back right away? Will she call Helena? Will Helena come back to LA? Bette can’t travel right now. More please.

    7. wow Speedy this was soo cool. i really feel for Bette getting all your memories back like that. I loved the pillow fight and how the friends all stick together.PPS

    8. Your writing is great as usual. You gave us some laughter, the dedication of friends, as well as self awareness on one’s self. You are an excellent writer and it’s a pleasure to read your stories. Thank You!

    11. Oh come on!!! You didn’t stop there!! You’ can’t stop there!!! It’s so not fair!!! I becam e addicted to this story!!! Speedy, post an update as soon as possible, please!!!!

    12. Oh come on!!! You didn’t stop there!! You’ can’t stop there!!! It’s so not fair!!! I became addicted to this story!!! Speedy, post an update as soon as possible, please!!!!

    13. I am on the edge of my seat here, i cannot believe you just stopped there!! Meanie! You are one incredible writer, truly in awe of your style, love it! Thank you, pps.

    14. oh hell i’m a tibetter cheering for bette to get her brain back and make it good with helena!!!! damn u r good…pps…i’m on the edge of my seat…..yeah, i do feel 4 Tina but she should go get her a woman who truly loves her, shes too nice to play 2nd best….

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