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    Before the Fall – Six

    Story written on December 15, 2006 by Speed_Racer.
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    If you loved someone how far would you go, to get them to love you back? What if they never loved you?

    She watched as Tina scowled for a moment and then laughed it away.

    “Of course she didn’t,” Tina muttered. “I’ve been out of town and got back a few days ago. I didn’t want to overwhelm you once I heard about your…condition.”

    “Amnesia, you mean? You can say it.”

    Tina nodded.

    “Amnesia. Okay. Well I thought I’d give you some time to just adapt.”

    “Are you one of my best friends? I’ve met all of them and Alice is my bestest-best friend.”

    “So you wonder where I fit in?”

    Bette nodded.

    “Hmmm. That’s a loaded question.”

    Bette frowned and studied Tina closer.

    What wasn’t she saying?

    “We’ve been friends for a few years. In fact–“

    “Tina what are you doing in here?” Helena asked as she came into the room and spotted Tina on the couch.

    The tension in the room seemed to sky rocket and Bette glanced between Helena and Tina.

    “Helena,” Bette said and couldn’t help but smile as Helena turned her full attention to her and smiled back at her. “I thought maybe you’d left.”

    “No. I said I’d stay remember? How are you? Are you hungry?”

    “I’m okay. Awake now. I guess we can watch some t.v. now. Or you can tell me more about my work.”

    “I can tell you Bette,” Tina said and Bette turned her eyes back to Tina.

    “Um…”

    Helena spoke as Bette couldn’t seem to think of anything to say.

    “Tina can I speak to you outside? I’ll be right back, Bette.”

    Bette didn’t say anything as Tina and Helena stepped out of the room and closed the door behind them.

    What the hell was that about? She wondered.

    How come no one had ever mentioned Tina to her? She couldn’t understand why things were so hard. Why no one was telling her things that she needed to know.

    She knew that one of the things she would need to find out about was Tina and what she meant to her life.

    ““

    “You’re just moving right on in aren’t you?” Tina snapped as she rounded on Helena glaring at her.

    Helena narrowed her eyes and shook her head.

    “What were you doing in there with her? What exactly were you telling her?” Helena asked lowly.

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    Comments

    1. Wow…Tina has a point. When Bette finds out what is going on that’s it…I love this story. Thank you for the 7 pages…I still want more. Keep posting.

    2. this is so intriguing…i wonder who will win, tina or helena or neither…it seems a coma can change a person’s enitre personality…maybe bette will chuck them all in…please post as soon as possible

    3. You know i love this story… and I can’t help but feel a little sorry for Tina. BUt everyone is talking like what if BEtte doesn’t get her memories…blah blah…BUT what if Bette does get her memories back…she will not be a happy camper knowing that she was quite literally taken advantage of…time will tell…

    4. Woah, emotional overload! lol. I think the Bette Porter we all know and love will come back in full force if she finds out that they’ve been lying to her. No wonder they’re keeping schtum! Can’t wait for the next chapter!

    5. Speedy, you’ve been one busy racer! ;) – 7 damn pages…oh mah goodnezz! I couldn’t read it all at one time. But, now that I’m done, I think that since Bette has just been awakened by Amanda, Tina’s on her way out the hospital, and Bette is not leaving until tomorrow afternoon means that Helena needs to march her pretty azz right back into that room, sit down, and tell Bette the truth. Memories or no memories, Bette is not detached from reality – she can tell that everyone is keeping something from her. Helena, along with the truth needs to tell Bette the reason behind the lie. I’d much rather see Bette pissed off now than pissed off later.

    6. I watched a TV drama before, where the husband had an affair with the mistress for YEARS. But then when he met a car accident, he completely couldn’t remember the mistress at all. Even when he saw the photos. Kind of sad really… although that can happen. In this case, I think that’s how Tina feels… I feel sorry for Tina, being the girlfriend and all that, but forgotten. I sense a war here.. It’s exciting, but I do root for Helena and Bette to be together… :D

    8. I’m with Pandamel I love this story.. God what a mess our girls are in. Perhaps Helena can tell Bette that they broke up and she was with Tina lately. So sad the Tina has known for years that Bette had feelings for Helena, everyone knew. Perhaps now is finally the time when no one is lying to Bette. Helena has always been Bette’s love. Its a part of her “embedded code”. Everyone is just finally admitting it. What a great story. Thanks for the early Christmas gift

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