LesFan

Lesbian Fan Social Network

    Fan Fiction

    This story has been set to a rating of R. Age verification is required to proceed.

    Age Verification

    I am years of age as of today, November 12, 2026

    Enter your current age into the field provide above. Stories with a rating of R or NC-17 may contain material not suitable for children. LesFan requires that all individuals wishing to read these stories confirm they are of at least 17 years of age. LesFan uses the MPAA rating labeling system for all stories.

    LesFan will also make a best attempt to filter profane words in stories that are not rated R or NC-17 unless the individual confirms they are of at least 17 years of age.

    LesFan uses the following rating scale for stories.






    Submit

    Before the Fall – Two

    Story written on November 2, 2006 by Speed_Racer.
     Login to add story to favorites
     Login to add author to favorites
    1 vote, average: 2.00 out of 51 vote, average: 2.00 out of 51 vote, average: 2.00 out of 51 vote, average: 2.00 out of 51 vote, average: 2.00 out of 5 (1 votes, average: 2.00 out of 5)
    You need to be a registered member to rate this post.     Loading ... Loading ...
    Genre(s):
    Rating:
    fanfiction(s):
    Character(s): N/A
    Number of Comments: 16
    Words: 5107
    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=63086
    Author Notes:

    If you loved someone how far would you go, to get them to love you back? What if they never loved you?

    “What’s there to see?” she asked tiredly.

    “Megan’s your armor,” Alice said succinctly.

    “Armor? From what? Are you implying I need protection from Helena? And that I’m using Megan to achieve it?”

    “There’s the smart woman I’ve been known to love and mock! Yes!”

    “So you’re saying that I brought Megan with me so that I would be protected from Helena? That doesn’t make sense.”

    “It makes sense if you’re scared of Helena, which by the way, you are. You told me that you hate the way Helena makes you feel, Bette. You also said you came to town to specifically see her. But at the last minute you balked and brought Megan. Not to mention making up that lame excuse about visiting Peggy. Helena freaks you out. Now all you have to do is find out why that is. And thus ends my half assed psycho-analysis.”

    “No,” Bette said immediately. “No. That’s not what I am doing. I brought Megan because I didn’t want to be alone. I came to see Helena because I haven’t seen her in months, and I actually do need to talk to Peggy in person. Besides I do have an actual job to do here. I mean sure Helena’s attractive and she can get under my skin like no one I’ve known. But that does not equate with me feeling certain things for her.”

    “Certain things? Bette you make it sound so depraved! It’s okay if you like Helena. She’s all legal now. She wants you and I don’t think it would be a wild guess to say you want her too.”

    “I do find her attractive,” Bette admitted slowly. “But then again I’m attracted to a lot of people.”

    “We’re just going in circles here, Bette.”

    “Alice…when you talk to her what are you going to tell her?” Bette demanded suddenly.

    “Who says I’m going to talk to her?”

    “Alice we both know she’s going to call you. When you talk to her don’t tell her what you just told me, okay? You have to let her know that it’s never going to happen. And besides she’s too young to know what love is anyway. She’ll find someone else soon enough.”

    “I am not going to tell her that! You can tell her yourself.”

    Page 7 of 11« First‹ Previous56789Next ›Last »
    «
    FF Main Page
    »

    Comments

    2. This has got to be my new favorite Peggy Peabody line!!…….”Don’t make me pull you out of bed, Helena. You know how I detest physical labor. Sit up. Now.”…….Fabulous! Thanks!

    3. my my Ms Porter all of 26 thinks she’s a grown up??? maybe at 52 she will be!!! and is Helena 19 or 20 and what is the legal age in the USA for sex??? is it 16 or 18?…..besides my queries…this is shaping up to be a good story…

    4. Amazing… I GET this story on so many levels… now let’s see if I can learn something from Helena :) Do post soon, really loving this and your writing. Thank you

    8. Rau age of consent in the UK is 16 yrs old. And I meant to post that Helena is 19 yrs old, but she’s known Bette since she was 17 she was legal then too. Thanks for the reviews.

    10. Oh man! Come on, Bette! Hell, you’re breaking MY heart. I can SO feel what Helena is going through right now. This story just started, but I already know that it is going to be really good. These first couple of chapters just grab your attention and doesn’t let go until you run out of words to read… because the chapter has ended. LOL! I was so disappointed to see the end of this chapter. Take that a compliment, because it is one. Please, post again when you can. I am very anxious to travel on this journey with Bette and Helena. And, I LOVE Peggy. My goodness, that woman has to be the coolest person to have as a friend. I could definitely hang around with Peggy… if only to hear her talk. She is very direct and I love that!

    11. Amazing how some people can blind themselves to their own feelings… and how far they can get to prevent themselves from seeing the truth… Bette sure has feelings… and sure does not WANT to have… a long long way to go…Keep it up…

    14. *rolling my eyes at Bette* Git a grip woman!! So afraid…to love and be loved! I am thoroughly enjoying this and am anxiously awaiting the next installment of both stories.

    Leave a Reply