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    Before the Fall – Two

    Story written on November 2, 2006 by Speed_Racer.
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    Words: 5107
    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=63086
    Author Notes:

    If you loved someone how far would you go, to get them to love you back? What if they never loved you?

    “Alice I can’t tell her that! I really fucked up. I humiliated her. I humiliated myself when I laughed and ran away! I want things to go back to the way they were. And for that to happen she has to know nothing’s going to come from me. I don’t love her like that. I don’t. We need to make like this never ever happened.”

    “That’s kinda cold Bette. She’s in love with you and you wanna break her heart. No actually you want me to break it for you.”

    “I can’t see the look on her face,” Bette whispered painfully.

    “And you think I can? Bette c’mon. You know you feel something for her. Why can’t you—“

    “Because I don’t want to! I don’t want to go down that path with Helena. I’ll only end up hurting her in the end. Better for her to get over this now, before it’s too late.”

    “Too late?” Alice echoed.

    “Before it’s too late to stop me from destroying her. Because I would, Alice. Maybe I wouldn’t mean too, and then maybe I would, and in the end it would be the same for her. Destroyed.”

    “Aww Bette. If you loved her—“

    “But I don’t.”

    “But if you did—“

    “But I don’t.”

    “But if you did, then how can you think you’d destroy her? Love’s not always a destructive force, Bette.”

    “Will you just tell her I’m not right for her, Alice? Make her understand. You know how I am. Please just make her understand.”

    Alice sighed.

    “I’ll do my best. But I still think you should give it a shot. What’ve you got to lose?”

    “Helena’s one of my best friends, Alice. I am not going to lose that because of some infatuation. I’m not going to take advantage of her like that. I’m just not doing that.”

    “It wouldn’t be taking advantage of her if she’s aware of what she’s doing.”

    “That’s just it! She doesn’t know what she’s doing. She’s so young…”

    “She’s an adult. You shouldn’t be making decisions for her like this.”

    “It’s for her own good. Please just do this for me, Alice. Please. I don’t want to lose her. I can’t lose her.”

    “Bette, you sound like you’re in love with her. If you want her to believe me you’re going to have to stop sounding like that. She’ll be looking for any little sign from you. And once she finds it she won’t give up no matter what I say to her.”

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    2. This has got to be my new favorite Peggy Peabody line!!…….”Don’t make me pull you out of bed, Helena. You know how I detest physical labor. Sit up. Now.”…….Fabulous! Thanks!

    3. my my Ms Porter all of 26 thinks she’s a grown up??? maybe at 52 she will be!!! and is Helena 19 or 20 and what is the legal age in the USA for sex??? is it 16 or 18?…..besides my queries…this is shaping up to be a good story…

    4. Amazing… I GET this story on so many levels… now let’s see if I can learn something from Helena :) Do post soon, really loving this and your writing. Thank you

    8. Rau age of consent in the UK is 16 yrs old. And I meant to post that Helena is 19 yrs old, but she’s known Bette since she was 17 she was legal then too. Thanks for the reviews.

    10. Oh man! Come on, Bette! Hell, you’re breaking MY heart. I can SO feel what Helena is going through right now. This story just started, but I already know that it is going to be really good. These first couple of chapters just grab your attention and doesn’t let go until you run out of words to read… because the chapter has ended. LOL! I was so disappointed to see the end of this chapter. Take that a compliment, because it is one. Please, post again when you can. I am very anxious to travel on this journey with Bette and Helena. And, I LOVE Peggy. My goodness, that woman has to be the coolest person to have as a friend. I could definitely hang around with Peggy… if only to hear her talk. She is very direct and I love that!

    11. Amazing how some people can blind themselves to their own feelings… and how far they can get to prevent themselves from seeing the truth… Bette sure has feelings… and sure does not WANT to have… a long long way to go…Keep it up…

    14. *rolling my eyes at Bette* Git a grip woman!! So afraid…to love and be loved! I am thoroughly enjoying this and am anxiously awaiting the next installment of both stories.

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