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Beginnings- chapter 6
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“Ok, well if she does call, will you let her know that I’m on my cell?” she asked as she looked across her desk one more time to ensure that she had everything.
“Got it. Bette, cell. I think that I can remember that.”
“Thanks” smiled Tina as she left her office.
“Good luck” Annie called out as she watched Tina walking down the hall.
Throwing her hand up over her shoulder, she just waved in return and said to herself, “I’m sure I’ll need it.”
Driving through the neighborhood that the house was in, Tina couldn’t help the feeling that was stirring in her. It felt right, it felt like home.
“Ok Tina” she said chidingly. “Let’s not put the cart before the horse here.”
Spotting Steve’s car, she pulled up behind him and looked at the house that they were here to see.
“Oh my God” she whispered under her breath. “It’s perfect.”
She slowly got out of her car and waiting for Steve to finish the conversation he was having on his cell phone, she took the opportunity to absorb everything that she was seeing. The front yard was small, but certainly afforded her the ability to have some space to garden.
The style of the home was something that both she and Bette had agreed to liking a lot. This was a place that just from the outside alone, she could see them making a home for themselves.
The location was perfect also. Close enough to Bette’s gallery that she would be just a five minute drive away and for Tina, no further than her current commute.
“Nice, huh?” she heard Steve say from behind her.
“Oh my God Steve, I love it!” she said emphatically.
“I thought you might” he smiled. “Come on, let’s go see what we have inside.”
Walking up the front walkway, Tina again could not help the feeling of this just being so right.
“God, I wish Bette were here to experience this” she thought to herself.
After ringing the doorbell, the door was opened by a young girl who looked up at them expectantly.
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Great chapter and it’s good to see you posting!
Welcome back Skip, anytime you’re able to post, I’ll be here to read. Buying a house together for the first time is very exciting, you captured it very well…
Yay! You posted, Skip!! It’s awesome that Bette and Tina found their dream house. Bette can’t complain about anything this time! Hehe I hope you’re able to post again soon. Thank you!!
K
Excellent chapter. Love this, glad you are back. Can’t wait for more.
It’s nice to see your name on the board! Thanks for posting; this was a great chapter. Looking forward to more.
i think im skipping on clouds. lol you have posted. im thrilled, can you tell. your writing gives us everything we need. intelligence, happiness, fun, excitement. thanks so much for posting.
Skip, I’m so happy you gave us another chapter of this. I’m looking forward to more…no pressure of course :-)
wow…Just like old times to be able to curl up on the sofa enjoying one of your chapters. Loved the interraction between Bette and Tina, and I could feel her enthusism so clearly. thanks for the update
Great as usual, more really, really soon
welcome back skip….I see Tina needs to take control of the situation!
Oh I love this! It’s so happy and optimistic and cute. T is just awesome.
On a personal note, I hope that your own real estate headaches have ceased. Belated congratulations on the baby news – how wonderful!
There’s nothing like the smile I get when you post – the only downside ever is getting to the end. You write them as if I could step in and talk with them or……..thanks, Skipton!
Fabulous to see a post from you. You’ve been missed!
Wonderfully done. Thanks!
Yeaah! It’s gonna happen! I love watching someone who’s so used to leading the dance being led for once. Thanks for the update. I’ve missed you and your posts.
SKIP…. i just re read all 6 chapters… and i totally loved them all again… love the house… now make it happen… and please don’t stay away so long
That was a great chapter. Moving in together is a big step. You find out all the good and the bad,, THANKS
What a treat. Thanks for coming back to us. When I read your romantic tales I am left feeling all kinds of emotions. Today’s emotion is happiness.
Good chapter. This is going to be good and can’t wait to see what’s next. Post soon, thanks!
I’m on cloud nine, a chapter from Skipton! Glad you came back to this story, such a delight.
Can’t wait to see if Bette tries to wiggle out of this, or if she just concedes and we get to see the fun of moving in and making memories in their new home.
Yay, Skip is back. What an exciting chapter you have created. Saw a couple of Season 3 Promos tonight—the buzz I get from this show is still zzzzzzzing with the help of talented author’s like yourself. Thanks.
is juz so perfect everytime!pls…do post more often. i love everything about this story..!post soon!!
I just caught up with your wonderful story. It’s very believable with Bette having the commitment problem. I’m adding you to my favorites so that i don’t miss your next post! Kiitos!
Skipton, great story. Please post soon.
I’ve been waiting for an update since forever :) You have nailed these characters so well, I can picture them on the screen. Thanks for finding the time to continue with your fics.