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Beginnings- chapter 6
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“Hi” said Tina as she smiled down at the little girl.
“Hi” she girl responded shyly.
“Hi” said an attractive woman in her early thirties as she pulled the door open wider, the little girl standing between her legs.
“You must be Steve” she said as she extended her hand.
Taking her hand he said, “That I am and this is my client, Tina Kennard.”
Turning her attention to Tina, she shook her hand and said, “Nice to meet you. My name’s Sarah Andrews. Please come on in.”
“You have a beautiful home” said Tina as she walked into the living room.
“Thanks” she said, “we’re not happy to be leaving it.”
“Do you mind if I ask why you’re moving?” said Tina.
“No, I don’t mind” chuckled Sarah. “My partner, Tracy, has been offered a position back East that we really can’t afford to turn down. It is a wonderful opportunity, one that we’ve been waiting a long time for. It’s just that the timing couldn’t have been worse” she smiled.
“Oh, well I guess that I’m both sorry for the timing but happy for the opportunity for all of you” she smiled, nodding her head at the little girl.
“No, it’s going to be great. Don’t get me wrong, we are very excited. It’s just that we love this neighborhood and have just finished a huge remodel on this place.”
“Well, it’s gorgeous” said Tina as she really took in the room around her.
“Do you mind if we look around?” asked Steve.
“Oh God, of course not” she laughed. “We’ll just be out back” she said as she took the little girl’s hand and led her outside.
Once out of earshot, Tina said in a low voice. “I know that we haven’t seen the whole house yet, but Steve, this is it. I want it and I know that Bette will love it too.”
“Yeah, I agree. This is perfect for the two of you. Let’s have a look around, shall we?”
Going from room to room only reinforced Tina’s earlier convictions that this was the right place for them. She was mentally placing both hers and Bette’s furniture throughout the house and saw all of it fitting perfectly.
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Great chapter and it’s good to see you posting!
Welcome back Skip, anytime you’re able to post, I’ll be here to read. Buying a house together for the first time is very exciting, you captured it very well…
Yay! You posted, Skip!! It’s awesome that Bette and Tina found their dream house. Bette can’t complain about anything this time! Hehe I hope you’re able to post again soon. Thank you!!
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Excellent chapter. Love this, glad you are back. Can’t wait for more.
It’s nice to see your name on the board! Thanks for posting; this was a great chapter. Looking forward to more.
i think im skipping on clouds. lol you have posted. im thrilled, can you tell. your writing gives us everything we need. intelligence, happiness, fun, excitement. thanks so much for posting.
Skip, I’m so happy you gave us another chapter of this. I’m looking forward to more…no pressure of course :-)
wow…Just like old times to be able to curl up on the sofa enjoying one of your chapters. Loved the interraction between Bette and Tina, and I could feel her enthusism so clearly. thanks for the update
Great as usual, more really, really soon
welcome back skip….I see Tina needs to take control of the situation!
Oh I love this! It’s so happy and optimistic and cute. T is just awesome.
On a personal note, I hope that your own real estate headaches have ceased. Belated congratulations on the baby news – how wonderful!
There’s nothing like the smile I get when you post – the only downside ever is getting to the end. You write them as if I could step in and talk with them or……..thanks, Skipton!
Fabulous to see a post from you. You’ve been missed!
Wonderfully done. Thanks!
Yeaah! It’s gonna happen! I love watching someone who’s so used to leading the dance being led for once. Thanks for the update. I’ve missed you and your posts.
SKIP…. i just re read all 6 chapters… and i totally loved them all again… love the house… now make it happen… and please don’t stay away so long
That was a great chapter. Moving in together is a big step. You find out all the good and the bad,, THANKS
What a treat. Thanks for coming back to us. When I read your romantic tales I am left feeling all kinds of emotions. Today’s emotion is happiness.
Good chapter. This is going to be good and can’t wait to see what’s next. Post soon, thanks!
I’m on cloud nine, a chapter from Skipton! Glad you came back to this story, such a delight.
Can’t wait to see if Bette tries to wiggle out of this, or if she just concedes and we get to see the fun of moving in and making memories in their new home.
Yay, Skip is back. What an exciting chapter you have created. Saw a couple of Season 3 Promos tonight—the buzz I get from this show is still zzzzzzzing with the help of talented author’s like yourself. Thanks.
is juz so perfect everytime!pls…do post more often. i love everything about this story..!post soon!!
I just caught up with your wonderful story. It’s very believable with Bette having the commitment problem. I’m adding you to my favorites so that i don’t miss your next post! Kiitos!
Skipton, great story. Please post soon.
I’ve been waiting for an update since forever :) You have nailed these characters so well, I can picture them on the screen. Thanks for finding the time to continue with your fics.