Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of G. Age verification is required to proceed.
Bette, Bette
There is a knock on the door and in comes a beautiful lady.
Gill: “Hey James, hallo Mam I’m Gill.”
James: “Hey Gill this is Tina, she and Bette are married. Did you get anything from the house?”
Gill: “Yes I did. Ben spoke to his lady friend, Lynda and told her that he would take care of everything. He said that he will take Tim out as well. No one will know what happened, because Tim’s wife is in Cape Town and everything will happen on the farm, which is a few miles out of town. By the time someone see the smoke, everything will be over and they will both be dead.”
Inspector: “We need to find out where is this guy’s farm, phone the local police get an address for this guy Tim. We need this ASAP.
We get the address and ask the police and fire department to meet us there, we get into the SUV and speed out of town. While on our way to the farm, the inspector phoned the police station to get someone to go to Ben’s house to pick up Lynda.
We’ve been on the road for ten minutes, when I suddenly notice smoke.
Tina: “There!!! Look there is a lot of smoke. Please James you must hurry up.”
Bette’s POV:
I try to get loose, but that is an impossible job, ok well then I need to wake up Tim. I yell at him, I scream for help, but nothing. This is a hopeless case, for the first time in my life I’m out of hope.
I close my eyes and see my beautiful wife face my children, no our children the mom’s and the dog. Will I ever see them again?
I sit back in the chair there is smoke everywhere, I try to hold my breath but after a while I need air and need to take a breath. But I only inhale smoke, and start too caught. I try to get loose again but this time I lose my balance and fall to the floor. The last thing I remember is flames, and a lot of smoke…………..
Tina’s POV:
We stop next to the farm house, there is no one there, I run around the building, and on the other side of the yard I see flames and a lot of smoke. James is next to me and we both run in the direction of the second building. I scream and call out Bette’s name, but there is no answer. I run to get near to the house, but this time James stop me.
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
Bibi28 says
Glad to see a update, but you can’t leave us hanging here. I suspect it is Ben?
Thank you for the update!
cellphone48 says
GM! Thanks! Will this MF die SOON! Can’t wait til someone take out that nasty ass trash! PPS
Blackbird says
I don’t know how I stumbled onto your story, Els73, and I’ve seen your comments long ago, and didn’t realize you’re a writer, either. Congratulations, this is an exciting tale. As I said, I’ve just arrived, and I’ve no idea wtf Bette did to get herself into that fiery mess, but I’ll read backwards now to see. Things fly by very fast on New Story Updates on the right side of the page, so do post on the Wall, so people will know you’re writing.
Bye for now, Blackbird
ceetime says
nah, pps
wkm says
Left us hanging again. Please update as soon as possible. Enjoyed it, thanks
dunnthat says
BETTE got out alive and all is well so far.Now I hope it is the inspector but if this is BEN omebody just shoot this mfker and make my day,damn.thanks
mscully says
Do not tell me that this man comprimentando
Tina is the bad guy Ben! I will stay at this
expectations for the next chapter! the heart
Tibette just can not stand anxiety.
All Stars.
tibettenation1 says
oh gees now who is this coming into the room, I cant take the suspense….