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Bette, Bette

James: “No Tina it is not safe for you to go in there, the place can collapse any moment. Stay here let me go and see if I can spot Bette inside.”
James ran to a window and look inside of the burning house, in the back ground I can hear the sirens of the fire truck.
James: “I can see her, Tina I can see her, she is not alone, there is someone with her, but I think they are both unconscious. I’m going to try and see if I can get in from the other side of the house. Just stay here and tell the firemen what I have told you just now.”
He run around the house and I run to the window to see if I can spot Bette. Through the smoke I see her lying on the floor, and not far away another guy. I’m not sure if this is Ben. I see James come from another room and run through to where Bette is. He try to wake her up, but nothing happens. Then he starts to untie her from the chair. I can see him start too caught.
The firemen come running towards me.
Fireman: “Mam please you have to step aside. Do you know who is inside the house?”
Tina: “Yes, my wife is inside, James went in to see if he can help her. There is another guy in there as well, but I think both him and Bette is unconscious. Please you need to help them please.”
Fireman: “We will try our best go stand there with the inspector.”
He then turns around and start with his work. Six men with oxygen mask went into the back of the house. They try to move through to where Bette was lying, but before they could reach that part of the house the roof collapse. Now they have to move, the other start to fight the fire on this side of the house. After a minute they could hear a fireman calls. Got the first guy, bring him out now. Get the paramedics to take over. It was James, he was unconscious and there was blood on his face and back. Then there was another shout. We’ve got the second guy. And then at last the call came. We’ve got the lady, she is unconscious we are bringing her out now.
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Glad to see a update, but you can’t leave us hanging here. I suspect it is Ben?
Thank you for the update!
GM! Thanks! Will this MF die SOON! Can’t wait til someone take out that nasty ass trash! PPS
I don’t know how I stumbled onto your story, Els73, and I’ve seen your comments long ago, and didn’t realize you’re a writer, either. Congratulations, this is an exciting tale. As I said, I’ve just arrived, and I’ve no idea wtf Bette did to get herself into that fiery mess, but I’ll read backwards now to see. Things fly by very fast on New Story Updates on the right side of the page, so do post on the Wall, so people will know you’re writing.
Bye for now, Blackbird
nah, pps
Left us hanging again. Please update as soon as possible. Enjoyed it, thanks
BETTE got out alive and all is well so far.Now I hope it is the inspector but if this is BEN omebody just shoot this mfker and make my day,damn.thanks
Do not tell me that this man comprimentando
Tina is the bad guy Ben! I will stay at this
expectations for the next chapter! the heart
Tibette just can not stand anxiety.
All Stars.
oh gees now who is this coming into the room, I cant take the suspense….