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    Bette, Chapter 13.5

    Chest spreaders, I hear an authoritative voice. I open my eyes to see whos speaking and focus on the masked figure hovering above me. Hes wearing some kind of cap and a maska surgical mask. I see his gloved hands, covered in blood, bring something to my chest. I look down and see the gapping hole in my rib cage as he uses the item to separate the bones. I hear the crackling of cartilage separating from bone and other bones grinding into each other.the sound makes my skin crawl. The site combined with the sound makes me sit straight up in terror. I look around to see the surgical team still working on the table. Frantically hopping off the high platform, I almost fall when I land. I search the room for some sign of help….to no avail. Everyone in the room is focused on the table.I look to see a womans body.her chest agape with the metal guides. I pear into the incision to see something moving.her heartand lungs. I can see inside this womans chest cavity.

    Scalpel, the surgeon makes another request. What is he doing? Is he performing open heart surgery? But thats the body of a young womanwho appears to be in good shapeI wish I had a body like that. Why would she need open heart surgery?

    Okay peoplelets get this bullet out. It looks like its acting as a cork in her aortaas soon as I remove it all ***** will break loose in here and I need everyone to stay focused on me.listen to and carry out my order immediately. Is that understood? The rest of the staff nod and answer in unorganized unison. Okay.lets do it. Forceps, his statement sets off a series of events that I have trouble following. One of the other masked figures hands him what looks like an industrial set of scissor-shaped tweezers. He takes them in his blood-coated glove and reaches into the womans chest. Who is this woman? I slowly make my way up to her headbeyond the barrier curtainmy eyes still focused on the procedure in front of me. The surgeon pulls the forceps outa small object gripped in the vise. CLINK! The sound echoes as he drops the object into a metal basin. I reach the other side of the curtain to find the womanalmost unrecognizable with a tube in her mouth.her face is swelling. I take a closer look to find an injury on her head above the right eye. A blood-soaked gauze covers the woundbut its a wound nonetheless. The right side of her face is almost purple from the pooling blood and swelling.but she looks familiar. Who is this woman? And where do I know her from?

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    1. Hey, you did great. I do know that some times to relieve the pressure, the do remove part of the skull,but the do have medicine to do that also.. I believe that Bette can and will be Okay. she could have trouble with speech,walking Talking. Bette is stubborn that is not going to get her down. You did a good job on this. Thanks so much for posting.

    2. Wow, that was just like an ER episode, but better. I liked the outside-looking-in perspective from Bette–will she remember when she wakes? Yes, Bvhall, Bette should have issues (whether great or small remains to be seen) with some motor functions, but that all depends on which part of the brain swells and by how much. A friend had a massive stroke on the right of her brain and is now barely able to speak, but can walk a little (she’s only in her thirties). Great update, Perfection.

    3. MAN!!! I was twisting my face in horror. Definately vivid in the descriptions….. I guess that is what it’s like… Great chapter, perfection…… Keep em coming…..

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