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Tina, Chapter 14
Previously”
There it isstaring back at mePorter, BGSW.
Baby, you cant die on me. PLEASE! My silent pleas go apparently unanswered as a nurse walks to the board and, with a think red marked, draws a single line through Bettes name.
I want to see her, I tell him. I NEED to see heror at least her body. I have to tell her goodbye and that I love hereven though her soul may no longer be there.
Thats not possible at the moment Ms. Kennard. His sympathetic voice somehow turns evil in my head. Is he denying me the right to see her? My anger is growing once again, pushing my pain and fear aside.
. Now, the reason you cant see her right now is because shes not here anymore.
I know, I turn to face him. That nurse crossed her name offshes dead isnt she? Thats why you havent asked for consent, isnt it? You dont need my consent anymore.
Chapter 14″
No, Ms. Kennard, his voice is still calm and reassuring. Thats not it. The reason we needed your consent is because Ms. Porter seemed to be stable. At the time, we felt that obtaining informed consent would be the best approach. However, Ms. Porters condition deteriorated and we invoked something called implied consent.
What are you saying doctor? Alice finally says something.
Ms. Porter is in surgery. His words bring about another crying fit form my uncontrollable consciousness. Her name was crossed off because shes not in the ER anymore, but the information hasnt been recorded in her medical record. As soon as her info is recorded, her name will be fully erased.
You mean shes not dead, I ask him.
No, shes not, he says. But she may not see tomorrow.
But shes alive. I just need to hear the words. Please say the words. I need you to tell me shes alive.
Yes, shes alive, he finally says the only words that can reassure me. Shes a fighter, but she has one ***** of a fight to win this time.
What are the extent of her injuries, Kits asks.
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(53 votes, average: 3.45 out of 5)
Great update!! The suspense is killing me!! I am excited to read the next one!!
Well well. Miss Perfection, I see you have definately been putting alot of time and effort into this story, and it is brilliant. I hope Tina is prepared for what she is going to see.
My dear Perfection….u must post again tonight…please…before 10….
Nice work…ond most cities have a hate crime unit…just not as big as the others.
I love this and I can’t get enough of it. Keep it coming.
Please post soon! The suspense is killing me. Thanks for this story.
Deep and very intense…you really outdid yourself on this chapter…very vivid…very well written!!!
You are doing such a great job on this story. Most cities do have A HATE CRIME UNIT. Some small town dont so the use the next lagest city. Hope Tina doesnt freak out when she see Bette. It can look pretty bad.in the beginning. thanks.
wow- very good follow through- like that Tina met the priest. I’m waiting on you now.
omg common..waiting is killing me!! PLEASE, post soon!!
i dont understand allyour laws and all or the medical talk very muchbut i would really like to send Bette a beautiful flower arrangement and a get well card!!
I think you have done an excellent job of portraying how the thought of losing someone permanently puts other issues into perspective.
If they don’t have a hate crime unit then they usually have a special victims unit that hate crime would fall under.
Hey Perf. you better not let anything happen to bette. I will hunt you down. If you have to kill someone kill jenny or candace, not bette.