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Bette Exposed Ch. 34
Melvin: Bette, I know that I have been demanding on you, but I want you to know that everything I have ever done has always been with your best interest at heart. I placed high expectations on you and pushed you hard to make sure you achieved them. I accepted nothing less than perfection from you. But I did it all to prepare you for the judgmental world that we live in. My aspiration was to mold you into a strong, confident and powerful woman who would be able to stand on her own against anything that was thrown her way. I knew having an African American as your father would make your life more difficult than others, so I did everything I possibly could in an effort to prepare you to survive that difficulty with pride. As grueling as I have been on you, my intention was always to ensure that you would be given a fair chance in life. I knew the stronger and more determined you were the better chance you would have at becoming a successful individual.
Bette is sitting quietly, listening to her father. He has never opened up and talked to her about these things. Neither of them hear Tina, as she walks down the hallway with Katalina. Tina stops as she hears Melvin, thinking maybe now was not a good time to interrupt, so she listens in from the hallway.
Melvin: You may not believe it, but everything I did was to try and make your life easier, Bette. I have always wanted you to be proud of who you are and your accomplishments. And I must say that I could not be any prouder of the woman you have become. Even the lifestyle you have chosen to partake in shows the strength and determination that you have developed. And although I do not understand it or believe that it is right, I must admit that you and Tina have invested a lot of years together. You have also seemed to work through some tough issues that many relationships would end over. It is rather obvious to me that Tina must care about you very deeply to be able to move past the matter of infidelity on your part. I must say that I have been a foolish old man over the years. I have treated your choice of lifestyle as well as your partner in a manner that I am not very proud to admit. I am afraid I have placed a judgment on you that has been harsher than anything this world could put you under and I am very sorry for that. I chose to ignore a part of your life that seems to make you happy, which is all I have ever really wanted for you. I never took the time to actually see that my behavior was causing you pain, something that a father should never purposely do to a child. I hope that you can forgive this old man, as I am going to try my very best to put your happiness first. And in doing so, I must say that I hope you have learnt from your mistake and do not follow in my foolish footsteps. I was never lucky enough to be given a second chance with the woman I loved. You on the other hand have been given that as well as a beautiful little girl. I hope you realize how lucky you are and do not stray down that lonely road again.
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(53 votes, average: 3.72 out of 5)
Yes great chapter!!!! Am I first
where have you been? i missed your story very much..great to see Melvin opening his heart that means a lot to Bette and Tina as well.. now bring in on the quick elaboration..lol..great chapter as always thanks :o)oh and dont take so long to post
Shades – thanks for coming back to this story – this chapter was so meaningful for Bette to get the chance to feel loved in her relationship by her father instead of only experincing his judgment was very moving. and of course those two sex hounds would get back to business as soon as they could. Thanks for all of it.
bette so neededto hear that as did tina. hope you find your inspiration and motivation. we have missed you. thanks
Yeah shades is back!!! And you bring us another wonderful and lovely chapter. The convo between Bette and Melvin was so meaningful and long overdue. Tina hearing it made it even more special. thank you….don’t disappear again.
Hey Shades – Good to see you back…I’m sorry you are struggling with the motivation and inspiration….But if it’s any consolation, you would never have known by reading this chapter…excellent as always.
Hope your inspiration returns soon (along with the next chapter! LOL)
What a pleasant surprise to come home to this wonderful story. I can’t believe how real Melvin sounded as he discribes is loneliness and Bette’s second chance. Thanks for this road traveled.
K
wonderful as always. Love this.
GREAT JOB…..MELVIN IS LIKE A TOTALLY DIFFERENT PERSON…THANKS POST SOON..
GREAT JOB…..MELVIN IS LIKE A TOTALLY DIFFERENT PERSON…THANKS POST SOON..
Great chapter Shades, I hope you can post more often. Realy looking forward to the next chapter, should be hot!
Another great one Shades. Melvin is finally becoming a better person and having a good relationship with his family. The girls can’t get enough these days, huh? Bring it on =D
Good to see you again Shades. This chapter is WOW and beautiful and emotion, love the conversation between Bette and Melvin. Ok post soon please, thanks!
WOW That was a beautiful chapter. Write more soon
Shades,
It is great to see you back on the site and continuing this delightful tale.
If only life was like this and people, especially parents realised the error of their ways and make a genuine effort to accept and acknowledge the differences between. Everyone has to make their own choices and more importantly take responsibility for them.
Bette and Tina sizzle together in this story. Melvin is a gem having taken the time to sort out everything with Bette and Tina so that Katalina will be the real benefactor of this change of heart.
As for you motivation and inspiration please check every nook and canny because I am sure they are lurking there.
Thanks for this brilliant return.
Your Loyal Fan.
I hope the baby monitor isn’t on or within Melvin’s earshot.
I have sooo missed your story…Glad you´re back with us. Always a pleasor reading your update Shades. Waiting for the good part. Glad Bette and Melvin had their little talk….now is Tina and Bette going to talk or??? Post soon
Shades, another great chapter!!! You can’t leave us hanging on for too long, post soon.
I don’t know whats troubling you that has you feeling like you’ve lost your motivation and inspiration, but that was fantastic. If only it had actually happened on the show, what an episode that would have been. Bette and Tina finally get acceptance from Bette’s father, and Bette realizes the treasure she has. That was fantastic.
hey you are back. this was a great chapter. i wish Melvin and Bette had this conversation on the show. anyway post soon please.
Wonderful chapter. Let’s get the ball rolling. :)