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Bette Exposed Ch. 34
Tears flow down Bette’s cheeks as she responds to her father.
Bette: Daddy, I am well aware of the miracle I have been given. I thank God everyday for getting a second chance with my family. You do not have to worry about me messing this up again. I love Tina more than I have ever loved anyone in my entire life. A life without her would have no meaning. Because of my own weakness I had to endure life without her once, but I will never again do anything that could jeopardize what we have worked so hard to get back. I know what I did hurt Tina deeply and I will spend the rest of my life doing everything I possibly can to make that up to her. No one will ever know the depth of how much she means to me, because it is impossible for me to put it into words. But I will spend the remainder of my life showing her. I will never take her or our love for granted again. From now on Tina and Katalina come first in my life. I will move heaven and earth to keep them both happy. Tina is one in a million daddy. She brings out the best in me. She opened up a place inside of me that no one else has ever been able to reach. My heart and soul belong to her and her alone. My actions gave her a reason to hate me forever and yet she found a way to forgive me when I couldn’t even forgive myself. I honestly don’t believe that I deserve her, but I am so glad that she didn’t give up on me. I will do whatever it takes to keep my family together and I will never give her a reason to regret giving me another chance.
Tears flow down Tina’s cheeks as she listens to Bette speak. She decides not to interrupt the conversation and instead takes Katalina back to the nursery and rocks her. Bette and her father continue their conversation.
Melvin: Bette, I want you to know that I love you and I am very proud of you. Although I am not in agreement with your lifestyle choice, you are an adult and you alone are responsible for and will have to answer to the choices you make. I have spent way too many years judging others against the standards in which I myself was raised. I do hope that you will be able to forgive this old fashioned man as I try to become more open minded.
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(53 votes, average: 3.72 out of 5)
Yes great chapter!!!! Am I first
where have you been? i missed your story very much..great to see Melvin opening his heart that means a lot to Bette and Tina as well.. now bring in on the quick elaboration..lol..great chapter as always thanks :o)oh and dont take so long to post
Shades – thanks for coming back to this story – this chapter was so meaningful for Bette to get the chance to feel loved in her relationship by her father instead of only experincing his judgment was very moving. and of course those two sex hounds would get back to business as soon as they could. Thanks for all of it.
bette so neededto hear that as did tina. hope you find your inspiration and motivation. we have missed you. thanks
Yeah shades is back!!! And you bring us another wonderful and lovely chapter. The convo between Bette and Melvin was so meaningful and long overdue. Tina hearing it made it even more special. thank you….don’t disappear again.
Hey Shades – Good to see you back…I’m sorry you are struggling with the motivation and inspiration….But if it’s any consolation, you would never have known by reading this chapter…excellent as always.
Hope your inspiration returns soon (along with the next chapter! LOL)
What a pleasant surprise to come home to this wonderful story. I can’t believe how real Melvin sounded as he discribes is loneliness and Bette’s second chance. Thanks for this road traveled.
K
wonderful as always. Love this.
GREAT JOB…..MELVIN IS LIKE A TOTALLY DIFFERENT PERSON…THANKS POST SOON..
GREAT JOB…..MELVIN IS LIKE A TOTALLY DIFFERENT PERSON…THANKS POST SOON..
Great chapter Shades, I hope you can post more often. Realy looking forward to the next chapter, should be hot!
Another great one Shades. Melvin is finally becoming a better person and having a good relationship with his family. The girls can’t get enough these days, huh? Bring it on =D
Good to see you again Shades. This chapter is WOW and beautiful and emotion, love the conversation between Bette and Melvin. Ok post soon please, thanks!
WOW That was a beautiful chapter. Write more soon
Shades,
It is great to see you back on the site and continuing this delightful tale.
If only life was like this and people, especially parents realised the error of their ways and make a genuine effort to accept and acknowledge the differences between. Everyone has to make their own choices and more importantly take responsibility for them.
Bette and Tina sizzle together in this story. Melvin is a gem having taken the time to sort out everything with Bette and Tina so that Katalina will be the real benefactor of this change of heart.
As for you motivation and inspiration please check every nook and canny because I am sure they are lurking there.
Thanks for this brilliant return.
Your Loyal Fan.
I hope the baby monitor isn’t on or within Melvin’s earshot.
I have sooo missed your story…Glad you´re back with us. Always a pleasor reading your update Shades. Waiting for the good part. Glad Bette and Melvin had their little talk….now is Tina and Bette going to talk or??? Post soon
Shades, another great chapter!!! You can’t leave us hanging on for too long, post soon.
I don’t know whats troubling you that has you feeling like you’ve lost your motivation and inspiration, but that was fantastic. If only it had actually happened on the show, what an episode that would have been. Bette and Tina finally get acceptance from Bette’s father, and Bette realizes the treasure she has. That was fantastic.
hey you are back. this was a great chapter. i wish Melvin and Bette had this conversation on the show. anyway post soon please.
Wonderful chapter. Let’s get the ball rolling. :)