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    Bette Forgets 11

    Story written on April 7, 2005 by rebakathy1.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=53079
    Author Notes:

    Bette gets stitches, hears a heart beat, and meets Detective Hallow.

    Uh…hello.

    Is this Tina Kennard, I hear a male voice ask

    No this is Bette Porter. I answered Tinas phone.

    *Benjamin Hallow*

    I was shocked to say the least to be hearing Bettes voice on the other end of the line. I was honestly expecting Ms. Kennard to answer the phone.

    Who is this, I hear Bette ask

    Im sorry I am Detective Ben Hallow…

    Oh you are the one working on my case, Bette says interrupting me

    Yeah I am.

    I heard you caught one of the bad guys. Good for you man.

    Yes it is very good.

    Was there a specific reason that you were calling?

    Yeah I actually wanted to talk to you but was given Ms. Kennards number. When you feel up to it I wanted for you to come down and look at a line up to identify Gracy.

    Oh…that sounds good. Dont you know its him?

    We know that its him yes but we need to go through every legal avenue.

    There is a pause on the line after I say this as Im sure she is considering what Im saying.

    When would you want me to come down and do this?

    As soon as possible so we can get this ball rolling.

    Ill have to talk to Tina but we might be able to do it within the hour.

    That would be great, I exclaim

    *Tina*

    I am waiting for them to fill the prescription for Bette and I go over to the window to check on Bette and I see her talking on my cell phone. Thats weird. I wonder whos she talking to.

    *Hallow*

    If you cant make it today just call me back and we will reschedule the thing for another time.

    I will. Thank you Detective.

    No thank you Ms. Porter.

    I hang up the phone and smile at my partner Teyla who is sitting in the chair across from my desk.

    You actually talked to her?

    Yeah Bette answered Ms. Kennards phone. She said she would hopefully be down here within the hour.

    Good.

    *Tina*

    I exit the pharmacy with the pills for Bette and see her leaning back with her face turned up toward the sky as if she is soaking up the rays. Beautiful. She looks over at me as I get in.

    Can we make a stop before we go home, she asks me

    What kind of stop?

    Detective Hallow called and wants me to come and identify the guy that they caught in a line up.

    So thats what the phone call is about.

    Do you really think thats a good idea Bette?

    I might as well get it over with right?

    Thats true.

    Come on T we can go to the station, identify this guy and then we can go home. It shouldnt take too long right?

    Right but first we need to stop somewhere and get you to a toilet and then fed.

    Youll probably have to actually do the feeding part, she comments holding up her hands, These bandages arent exactly conducive to picking stuff up.

    I would be happy to help you, I smile and that smile widens when I see a strange expression come over Bettes beautiful face, What?

    Youre going to have to help with the bathroom part too.

    TBC…We’ll stop on a light note today.

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    6. I LOVE this story line. You have a wonderful imagination. I apprecitate you taking the time to read my stories and leave comments. Your opinion means so much to me. Did I say that I LOVE this story? Sorry it is hard to concentrate after reading such a great chapter. Keep them coming. I am hanging on every one of your words.:-)

    9. I agree w/ everyone else, I love this story. And I love the ‘softer’ side of Bette. Please let her identify the right guy and I hope that you deliver some good justice to them.

    10. Congratulations on another great chapter. You move the story so well and the dialog is crisp and meaningful. I’ll say it again if I have to: I’m loving this story. Your imagination is wonderful. You’ve swept me right along with you. Thanks.

    15. This story is so well thought out and well written Bette’s so open and somewhat innocent, it’s refreshing I love this story–thanks for sharing your talents with us!

    18. Great chapter again. I like to see this different side of Bette. I will be waiting to see how Bette pieces back her life as she has lost so much time.
      The identification of the attacker is just one of the obstacles she has to get through. Will she able to accept what happen between herself and Tina? And how about the baby? Can she accept the way it was being conceived? Well, I will be waiting for all that parts to unravel then. I also liked the way you end this chapter too. It’s lighted just like you said.

      Continue on, and I will read wherever you might lead us..:)

    19. this is really good – it is heavy and intense but very well written. but please let Bette go to therapy before she has to identify the rapist please please please.

    22. I, Too, like this Bette…she has such a funny attitude…its a great change from the Bette on the show….thanx for this and please continue soon…….

    28. i dont wanna push u but: WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER???;) i am so addicted to this story and i cant stand to wait too long for the next part. I love this story, tho its pretty sad, but i have to admit that i like Bette very much and shes even funny, who would have thought:p

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