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Bette Forgets 11
Oh that makes more sense. Im thinking isnt she already on the planet.
Tina smiles, She caught a taxi. Are you ready to go home?
Yeah.
Together we walked out into the sunlight and Tina helped me into the car and buckled me up.
Whose car is this, I ask finally noticing the convertible that we were in, Its nice.
Tina glances sidelong at me, This is your car Bette. Its a kick for me to drive it actually.
Did I never let you drive my car, I ask shifting slightly to look at her better
You never let anyone drive your precious car, she remarks with a smile
Well thats a little nuts.
Tina just shrugs at this comment. I turn back to watching the road and we drive in silence and every so often I look over at her. At one point she smiles at me.
What, I ask, Is my staring starting to annoy you?
No, on the contrary. Thats something you used to do when we first got together. Just look at me.
Oh, I like looking at you.
Thats what you said when I asked you why you like staring at me.
I guess some things dont change, I answered
I suppose not, Tina remarked softly, Do your hands hurt a lot baby?
Why does her calling me baby make me feel all gushy inside? Totally weird.
They are positively on fire, I answer
She looks over at me as if she werent expecting that answer.
What, I ask again
Tina shakes her head, Nothing.
No please tell me.
Tina sighs at this, Before…the attack you werent really one to freely tell anyone your emotions.
Even you?
Even me.
Wow. I wonder what happened to me between now and…uh when I was twenty two and now…or when I was forty, I pause trying to make this make sense in my head, This is confusing.
I know what you meant, Tina comments squeezing my thigh, And I dont know what could have happened. Maybe it was just life.
Yeah. Well if you want I can tell you everything Im feeling right now. As far as I understand it anyway.
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(74 votes, average: 3.62 out of 5)
I like this. It’s heavy but good. Great job!
pretty f*cking cute. ;)
great story please keep the chapters coming Thank you
I love this story :))
I like this story. Bette is so innocent and cute. Tina has such patience. Thanks
I LOVE this story line. You have a wonderful imagination. I apprecitate you taking the time to read my stories and leave comments. Your opinion means so much to me. Did I say that I LOVE this story? Sorry it is hard to concentrate after reading such a great chapter. Keep them coming. I am hanging on every one of your words.:-)
I really like this story. Just wanted to let you know, since I don’t always leave a comment.
Thanks for another great chapter. Love seeing this side of Bette. Love seeing the interaction between Tina and Bette.
I agree w/ everyone else, I love this story. And I love the ‘softer’ side of Bette. Please let her identify the right guy and I hope that you deliver some good justice to them.
Congratulations on another great chapter. You move the story so well and the dialog is crisp and meaningful. I’ll say it again if I have to: I’m loving this story. Your imagination is wonderful. You’ve swept me right along with you. Thanks.
I love this story. I can’t wait for more.
I love this story. This chapter had a really cute ending. Can’t wait for the next one!!
great story, can’t wait for more..
I LOVE THIS STORY..I WANT MORE PLEASE
This story is so well thought out and well written Bette’s so open and somewhat innocent, it’s refreshing I love this story–thanks for sharing your talents with us!
i like this… bette is so cute!!!
I love the innocence of Bette in this story. I hope seeing the suspect in the lineup doesn’t freak her out too much.
Great chapter again. I like to see this different side of Bette. I will be waiting to see how Bette pieces back her life as she has lost so much time.
The identification of the attacker is just one of the obstacles she has to get through. Will she able to accept what happen between herself and Tina? And how about the baby? Can she accept the way it was being conceived? Well, I will be waiting for all that parts to unravel then. I also liked the way you end this chapter too. It’s lighted just like you said.
Continue on, and I will read wherever you might lead us..:)
this is really good – it is heavy and intense but very well written. but please let Bette go to therapy before she has to identify the rapist please please please.
I loving Bette and Tina…and this story. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Great chapter. I really like this Bette, she is so funny and cute. Hope she be ok in the lineup. Post soon, thank you!
I, Too, like this Bette…she has such a funny attitude…its a great change from the Bette on the show….thanx for this and please continue soon…….
I just caught up reading your story. I love it! great job, please continue, soon.
I love this story.
I continue to enjoy this story. Good story line and nice relationship between B & T
This is just getting better and better as we go along. Now this is one story I would not miss…can´t wait for an update. Post soon
Bette will be able to make it through this with the support of her family.
i dont wanna push u but: WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER???;) i am so addicted to this story and i cant stand to wait too long for the next part. I love this story, tho its pretty sad, but i have to admit that i like Bette very much and shes even funny, who would have thought:p