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Bette Forgets 20
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Do you know any of the stuff that has happened to me this past year, I ask coming to the realization that she may not know
No, I assume memory loss has something to do with it by the way you have been talking.
I look over to Tina as she looks over at me.
A little over six months ago I was attacked.
Attacked, she asks, Youre okay though. Other then the memory loss?
Im okay now, I state, I was in a coma for three months but for the almost four that Ive been awake for have been wonderful. For the most part.
What happened, if you dont mind me asking, my mother states ducking her head slightly, I know you said you were attacked but…
It was a hate crime, I state interrupting with
Her eyes widen, Oh my god Im so sorry. Its because youre…
Gayer than *****, I smile, Yes.
She cant help but smile at the description of myself.
And Im pregnant, I declare
Both of her eyes widened slightly at this, From…
The attack yes.
She seemed to take this all in if her silence had anything to do with it.
Do you know what youre having, Julia asks after a moment
A boy, says Tina
How long have the two of you been together, Julia asks of Tina
Nearly eight years, Tina answered
Julia smiled at this, Thats wonderful.
We lapsed into silence once again. While this was happening I was gazing at this woman, my mother, really looking. I thought this beautiful woman was dead. For damned nearly all of my life I thought she was dead. Quite suddenly I felt tears prickling at the corners of my eyes.
*Julia Porter*
I was trying to take in all of what my daughter, Bette, had just told me. I cant believe that my little girl was attacked. Well shes not my little girl anymore. Shes an adult with a house, a wife and a baby on the way.
It doesnt surprise me too much that she turned out to be a *****. Its wonderful. She and Tina have been together eight years. Thats longer than Melvin and I were together before we separated and he hauled me off to Cravenwood.
I look up startled when a sob escapes Bette. Shes crying. When had she started crying?
*Tina*
I felt it before it happened. I had been holding on to Bettes hand. When small tremors started in her body I knew something was about to happen. Just what exactly I didnt know. Looking over to her I see her eyes shining with unshed tears. With a sob the damn broke loose and a river of tears cascaded down her face. Looking over to Julia I see her with tears shining in her eyes as well. Kissing my loves hand I let go and leave the mother-daughter to be in peace.
**Narrative people**
As Tina left the room Julia slowly moved over so that she was sitting next to her daughter on the couch. Ever so slowly she reached out with a hand and placed it on the small of Bettes back. Bette launched herself into her mothers arms sobbing in earnest now while Julia made soothing motions over her back and whispered words of love.
Youre alive, Bette sobbed, Here with me.
I wont leave you ever again my sweet Elizabeth. Never again, Julia stated finding herself crying as well
Bette held on to her mother even tighter and cried out the emotions of finally having her mommy back.
TBC…:)
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Wow, really really surprising chapter. I love it, do continue.
<3
Wow, that was a very interesting chapter. I loved it.
Beautiful, touching, deep, I LOVED IT!! Looking forward to your next post.
Interesting turn of events.
Good stuff!
Well, THIS is a new development! Can’t wait to see where you go with this.
AHHHH……YOU ARE GOOD….AND THIS IS WONDERFUL…I LOVE IT…SEX IN THE CAR…MEETING BETTE’S MOTHER…OH WOW……I WISH ILENE CHAIKEN WOULD COME TO THIS SITE FOR IDEAS ON BETTE AND TINA STORIES….WOWOWOWOWOW….
That was really intense-incredible-fantastic!!! Thanks…you’re so good at this!
Damn this is so incredible and excellent chapter. Wow what a surprise meeting and a surprise happy too, love it. Post soon, thanks!
Very interesting indeed! Incredible chapter. Loved it. Love your writing!
This has been one of my fav. stories to read.. it just keeps getting better and better… I get giddy when I see you have posted.. thanks… more please:)
Bette’s mom is alive huh! Maybe now (with some memory gained) she’ll be able to confront her prior trust, relationship issues and inability to share her innermost feelings.
Beautiful chapter.I loved it.please post soon
WOW…what a chapter!! LOVED IT!! Bette’s dad sucks, I can’t believe he did that to Bette’s mom…omg, I wonder what missing from Bette’s memories, you know, from the time she confronted her father to the time she celebrated her 16th birthday…I get the feeling that it’s something bad! Loved it REBA!! Update soon please!
OK where is the next chapter. * days I’ve been waiting. :( Pwease….
Fuck me her mother. I’m speachless;-)
Her mom that was a twist, anyways melvin is eviler then I though. He like a guy off a soap opera. Anyways I want to hear more about the dreams, and though bette has been having.
Very interesting twist from the twisted author herself! Thanks for the update!!!
Great! I really like your story…please continue!
Reba…that was so beautiful and touching. Keep up the great work. Post soon
So far I like this series. Please don’t keep us waiting long!
Reba…your mind is just way too creative. I can’t believe her mother was locked up like that. I also find Bette’s character interesting because she seems to have had a lack of maternal influence in her life. This would help explain why. Are they still going on the trip?