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Bette Forgets 20
I often wondered that myself. We turn to Julia to see her sigh.
To keep up appearances of course, Julia states, To the outside world Melvin Porter was coming to visit his poor, sick wife. This way he could keep better track of me. What happened after you saw that I wasnt in fact dead?
I didnt know what to do, I stated, I just realized that my beloved father had been lying to me for years and that you were really alive. It was a lot for a fifteen year old to take in.
You were fifteen when you found out, Julia asked
I nod my head, Yes, why?
Julia shakes her head, No particular reason. Id already been in there for seven years by the time you found out that I was alive.
Wow. This was certainly something.
I took a cab home, I state finishing the story I knew they were dying for the answers of, And when dad got home I told him where I went and that I knew that hed been lying to me on how my mother, you, had died.
Julia looked surprised by this, What did he do?
I ***** my head to the side, I cant remember.
Your memory loss shouldnt be that far back though, Tina interjects with
I know but…I can remember confronting him and seeing the fury in his eyes and then nothing.
Whats the clearest memory you have after this, Julia asks
Uh…my sixteenth birthday.
Thats like a year that you dont remember.
More like six months, I interject with, But yeah. Weird.
Maybe we should talk to Stacy, says Tina
I nod my head, When did you get out of Cravenwood?
Last week, Julia states
I raise my eyebrow at this, Last week?
It took me this long to find you. I finally threatened to sue the Center for false imprisonment if they didnt tell me where you were.
So they knew that they were holding you against your will, Tina asks, And that you were perfectly fine.
They did indeed. Melvin had been paying them off for some time. When he passed away there was no one to help pay to keep me locked up. They had no choice but to let me go.
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(53 votes, average: 3.77 out of 5)
Wow, really really surprising chapter. I love it, do continue.
<3
Wow, that was a very interesting chapter. I loved it.
Beautiful, touching, deep, I LOVED IT!! Looking forward to your next post.
Interesting turn of events.
Good stuff!
Well, THIS is a new development! Can’t wait to see where you go with this.
AHHHH……YOU ARE GOOD….AND THIS IS WONDERFUL…I LOVE IT…SEX IN THE CAR…MEETING BETTE’S MOTHER…OH WOW……I WISH ILENE CHAIKEN WOULD COME TO THIS SITE FOR IDEAS ON BETTE AND TINA STORIES….WOWOWOWOWOW….
That was really intense-incredible-fantastic!!! Thanks…you’re so good at this!
Damn this is so incredible and excellent chapter. Wow what a surprise meeting and a surprise happy too, love it. Post soon, thanks!
Very interesting indeed! Incredible chapter. Loved it. Love your writing!
This has been one of my fav. stories to read.. it just keeps getting better and better… I get giddy when I see you have posted.. thanks… more please:)
Bette’s mom is alive huh! Maybe now (with some memory gained) she’ll be able to confront her prior trust, relationship issues and inability to share her innermost feelings.
Beautiful chapter.I loved it.please post soon
WOW…what a chapter!! LOVED IT!! Bette’s dad sucks, I can’t believe he did that to Bette’s mom…omg, I wonder what missing from Bette’s memories, you know, from the time she confronted her father to the time she celebrated her 16th birthday…I get the feeling that it’s something bad! Loved it REBA!! Update soon please!
OK where is the next chapter. * days I’ve been waiting. :( Pwease….
Fuck me her mother. I’m speachless;-)
Her mom that was a twist, anyways melvin is eviler then I though. He like a guy off a soap opera. Anyways I want to hear more about the dreams, and though bette has been having.
Very interesting twist from the twisted author herself! Thanks for the update!!!
Great! I really like your story…please continue!
Reba…that was so beautiful and touching. Keep up the great work. Post soon
So far I like this series. Please don’t keep us waiting long!
Reba…your mind is just way too creative. I can’t believe her mother was locked up like that. I also find Bette’s character interesting because she seems to have had a lack of maternal influence in her life. This would help explain why. Are they still going on the trip?