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Bette Forgets 39
*Tina*
I am wondering just where in the heck that Bette is taking me. She wouldnt even let me pack my own clothes for the trip. She kicked me out of the bedroom and when she came out she was carrying two duffel bags. One mine and one hers.
She seems ever determined to keep where we are going a secret from me. When mom had shown up she had hugged us both and then went to check on the boys. A few minutes later my parents showed up with an overnight bag between them.
“Are you sure about this,” I asked Bette already missing the boys
“If we dont go now,” Bette shoved my bag at me, “We arent ever going to go.”
We had already said our long goodbyes to the boys. Bette turns to our respective parents.
“We really appreciate you doing this for us,” she states with a smile, “I uh…there should be enough milk in the fridge. I pumped enough for a small army earlier,” she states with a grin, “We love you…and…goodnight.”
With that she pushed me out the front door closing it behind her. What is up with that?
“Sorry for being so abrupt,” Bette said, “But what I said is the truth. We have to make a run for it now or we wont ever leave.”
I nod my head as I head toward the SUV. Bette grabs the back of my shirt to stop me. She points to her Saab which is sitting at the end of the driveway. I smile at this. I havent been in this car in quite some time. It isnt big enough for two boys and all their toys. Bette grabs my bag and walks down to the car throwing both bags into the back seat. She opened the passenger door for me and waited till I was seated to close the door.
She gets into the drivers seat and I see her smile widely when her back hits the soft leather of her precious car.
“Missed this have you,” I ask already knowing the answer
She turns to me and gives me the cutest smile, “I know its just a car but I really missed this.”
“Youll have to drive it more often,” I state taking Bettes hand and kissing it
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(51 votes, average: 3.59 out of 5)
Damm what a way to start the morning. great update, why can’t I have a house like that??
I soo love Bette :) WOW great chapter..simply the best! Post soon!.
Reba…just read your last 10 chapters of your 4 wonderful stories. And this one to finish up with. Great work and do keep posting.
Excellente!!! You are a great writer.
omigawd that was good. cold shower coming up, nam’sayin?
Hey, I have been following your 4 stories, but am just getting the time to comment. You are a really great writer. I eagerly await each posting. I have been checking all day to see the next chapter of “eyes of the Beholder”. Can’t wait.
Ahhhhhhhhhh…..Nice contended sigh. That was a wonderful chapter. So loving and romantic. Bette really outdid herself this time. Thanks for sharing such a heart-warming chapter. Can’t wait for the next one. =)
oh wow…….this is wonderful…..absolutely excellent…..
Haven’t been able to comment in a while. But let me tell you what a wonderful job you have done with this story on all the other ones. Loving them!!
Love the chapter… love the story. Amazing how 2 words as simple as “come here” can convey so much. Can’t wait to see where you take us from here!
LOVELY LOVELY LOVELY…………..
Wow beautiful and amazing, love it. Post soon, thanks!
I agree the come here says it all. Beautiful chapter.
Rebakathy I am in awe at the beauty of your discriptions. Such warm tender love and yes the come here says it all thanks
Morning.. Yes i’m up early. Wahhoo.. What a great suprise for Tina. That was simply Awesome. I can’t wait for more. That was truly the best way to go to sleep last night reading it. Where ya taking me next? Ok so B&T will be there but hey I’m game. LOL..
Hey kiddo, that compliment was really sweet. brilliance of it. I’m not sure about that but thank you for having faith in me. OK so I’m shy. Thanks you deeply for the compliment. (blushing) later Twin
REBA… that was beautiful… and i also love this story…and the COME HERE…oh yeah… beautiful simply beautiful
Wonderful chapter, so sweet and loving. thank you………more soon please.
Very nice chapter .. Really enjoying your story.
And once again I’m off to a cold shower! Thank you for another great chapter.
Beautifully written and you conveyed their emotions perfectly. Damn, where is that house, I want it!
great chapter i´m off to shower now..lol..post soon please
I don’t know how you manage to do it…write so many different storylines at the same time. You would think that by having so much on your plate, that one of the stories would suffer…but that is totally not the case. They are all fabulous…all fresh…all equally as inticing. Your talent is such a treat to be a part of. Thank you for sharing so much with us.
K
Wonderful chapter. They are so loving and sweet, I just can’t get enough. Can’t wait for more, LOVE this.
hey there- still catching up on your story but wanted to let you know how much i am enjoying it, and of course this chapter as well!