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    Bette Forgets 39

    Story written on June 21, 2005 by rebakathy.
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    The surprises just keep on coming!

    Opening the passenger door I take Tina by the hands and pull her up. I guide her to the spot I know will cause the most awe and take off the headphones.

    “I love you T.”

     

     

    *Tina*

    “I love you T.”

    Thats the first thing that I hear when the headphone are removed and I can hear again

    “I love you too,” I respond with immediately

    “What do you hear?”

    In my temporary blindness I have to focus on my other senses. Listening intently I hear…birds singing, the sound of water near bye and nature. Realizing that I hadnt said anything out loud I speak.

    “Nature,” I speak softly

    “Yes,” Bette says from slightly behind and to the left of me, “What do you not hear?”

    That was certainly an odd question. What do I not here? Noise. I realize this with a smile. I dont hear noise.

    “Noise,” I spoke again

    “Yes,” I hear Bette say, “No sounds of traffic, Alice yammering at us, babies crying, lawn mowers…nothing but the sweet sounds of nature.”

    I smile at this. There are a handful of places that one could go where you would get away from all of that. I feel Bettes hands on my shoulders and then I feel her hands on the blindfold.

    “Keep your eyes closed when I remove this. Promise?”

    “Promise.”

    Bette removes the blindfold and I close my eyes. After a beat I feel Bette turn me ever so slightly.

    “Open.”

    I open my eyes and am immediately overwhelmed by what I see. The sun is setting in blues, purples, yellows, oranges and gold across the mountains painting the most beautiful picture I think Ive ever seen. Tears come to my eyes as I take in this beauty realizing that my love brought me here, this was her doing. Oh I know she wasnt responsible for the sunset but she may as well have been.

    I turn to see Bette smiling at me. Her eyes are sparkling and I cant help the overwhelming feeling of love that overcomes me. I pull her to my body and hug her tightly.

    “I love you,” I say against her hair, “I love you so much.”

    “The night isnt over yet T,” Bette whispers

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    6. Hey, I have been following your 4 stories, but am just getting the time to comment. You are a really great writer. I eagerly await each posting. I have been checking all day to see the next chapter of “eyes of the Beholder”. Can’t wait.

    7. Ahhhhhhhhhh…..Nice contended sigh. That was a wonderful chapter. So loving and romantic. Bette really outdid herself this time. Thanks for sharing such a heart-warming chapter. Can’t wait for the next one. =)

    10. Love the chapter… love the story. Amazing how 2 words as simple as “come here” can convey so much. Can’t wait to see where you take us from here!

    15. Morning.. Yes i’m up early. Wahhoo.. What a great suprise for Tina. That was simply Awesome. I can’t wait for more. That was truly the best way to go to sleep last night reading it. Where ya taking me next? Ok so B&T will be there but hey I’m game. LOL..

    16. Hey kiddo, that compliment was really sweet. brilliance of it. I’m not sure about that but thank you for having faith in me. OK so I’m shy. Thanks you deeply for the compliment. (blushing) later Twin

    23. I don’t know how you manage to do it…write so many different storylines at the same time. You would think that by having so much on your plate, that one of the stories would suffer…but that is totally not the case. They are all fabulous…all fresh…all equally as inticing. Your talent is such a treat to be a part of. Thank you for sharing so much with us.

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