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“Was going to be my next question.”
I hear another laugh at this.
“The answer isI don’t want anything with you.”
I frowned at this, “You have me shackled to a wall blindfolded. If you don’t want anything to do with me you certainly have a funny way of showing it.”
I don’t get any kind of response from this. I shift slightly and feel pain shoot through my left shoulder.
“Does that hurt,” the Voice asks
I wasn’t going to answer that but figured I didn’t know what kind of psycho this was and that I should probably answer.
“Yes.”
Silence.
“You don’t know what true pain is.”
This is said very softly and I almost don’t hear it.
“This hurts pretty badly.”
The Voice snorts, “True pain is to see a child grow and prosper only for them to be ripped from you life, a child born of you and the one you love. That is true pain.”
I said nothing to this.
“You may have children, yes, but you know not what it is to give birth, to carry a child for nine months, see them grow and prosper.”
I can’t help but flinch at this.
“You will never know that painTina.”
I bow my head in remembrance of my son, mine and Bette’s son. The thought of Bette gets my mind back on track.
“What do you want if it’s not anything to do with me?”
“You are a means to an end Tina,” the Voice speaks
“Means to an end?”
“I want Bette,” the Voice speaks, “I thought long and hard on how to get Bette and the answer presented itself in the form of you. What better way then Bette to come and rescue her beloved Tina? Isn’t it genius? Once she comes for you I will have her and you will be released.”
This person was insane and with a jolt I realized who it was, well not really who it was butthis person, whoever it was, is Bette’s stalker.
“Do you know where you are Tina,” the Voice asked me
“In a room shackled to a wall.”
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Yes I know I am insanely evil but you should learn to expect the unexpected from me by now. Trust me. You must repeat those words over and over. TRUST ME!
i don’t know if evil is a word that i would choose for you right now. that’s just down right hateful to leave us hanging!!! lol. can’t wait for more
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Jewt was right great chapter you had me on the edge…NOW don’t keep us there.. Now I think I am really not sure who it could be…POST SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
dayum girl. i first thought it was someone else. then im freaking that it was bette by the way you were writing this. now i dont know who the hell it is. whats with the us stuff. is it more than one. you best not be leaving us hanging. and jwet was right. thanks for the update.
THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!You are such a good teaser…Jwet was so right on this chapter..THANKS JWET……as for you rebakathy all I can say is FABULOUS AND POST SOON PLEASE THANKS…………….
IS IT BETTE’S MOM??????????????
Well Damn! I cant even comment….
Holy Crap…..could it be Kit? Has she flipped?
The first thought that popped in my head while reading this chapter was “where’s Detective Porter from ‘Breathe’ when you need her?! Oh yeah, protecting the OTHER Tina!!!”. Apparently there’s a lot of that going on, huh? =P
I really liked this chapter! I immediately jumped into the guessing wagon =D
At first I thought Shane, you know, because of the voice… – totally off topic, but I love her voice! – however I think Shane would have a thing for Tina, not Bette.
Then I thought, no way this could be one of the girls. So… Tina’s mother? By the way, that is another thing that seems to be happening a lot lately, I mean, Tina’s family showing up.
Anyway, as I said, I really like this chapter, very intriguing!
I know its Foxworthy isn’t it!?! No no no its Kristen Shepard! Wait no she shot JR…dayum post soon…I’m dying here.
Evil!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THAT WAS WICKEDDDDD …. its sooo alice!!!!
Damn this is bad and who the hell is that person, maybe Candace noo ore Bette’s mother. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Since you have a thing for Shane and Bette together I’m leaning toward her.
In this chapter at first I thought it was Bette’s mom (that would be way twisted) but she wasn’t around to know all the crap that went down with B & T. Then I thought my previous guess of Bette but it can’t since Tina says ‘the person that Bette and I both trust’. I think it’s either Shane or Alice.
HELLO REBA!! I’m rubbing my hands together so fast I think I might start a fire, I just beyon happy you posted and this is fucking kick ass!!! damm I’m so lovin it.
WOW……that’s one hell of a cliffhanger!!!
Evil is a good word. I know its pretty bad to be left in the dark until you decide to write again we will wait. but bad word will be said about you. Okay WE TRUST YOU are you happy now? Thanks
Thanks for the lead in but you know it’s all good and boy this was good. Go girl I love this and yes you are so wicked to leave the cliff hanging right were it was. He He He (Evil laught)
great chapter. love the cliffhanger. cant wait for next post. i think its Bettes dr
Yes I trust you, I’m sure we all do, but you are driving us crazy here!!! I could swear that this would have been the chapter that we find out who the stalker is. Now Tina knows, but we still don’t. How much longer will you keep us in suspense? Pleeeeaaaaassse let it be next, I am dying here!!! Really great chapter though.
Totally awesome idea and it turned out perfect. When it is all said and done the readers will have truly enjoyed this. Excellent post K.
I CLICKED ON THIS STORY BY MISTAKE. NOW I HAVE TO BACKTRACK AND READ IT IN ITS ENTIRETY. I AM INTRIGUED. WHATEVER HAPPENED TO THE IDEA OF BETTE AND TINA FOREVER, IN LOVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER. ONE AUTHOR KILLED TINA, ANOTHER GAVE BETTE A HEART ATTACK, ONE MADE BETTE AN ALCOHOLIC, ONE HAD HER ALMOST DIE IN AN AUTOMOBILE ACCIDENT. CURSE ALL OF YOU! AND CURSE MY ADDICTION TO FANFIC. YOU GUYS ARE GREAT! SHE SAID WHILE BACK TRACKING AND DIGRESSING
OMG..on the edge of my seat wondering who the hell is the stalker. Oh man, hope Bette outsmarts the stalker and doesn’t get caught. Can’t wait for the next chapter… ;-)
you are so bad… and so fucking good… well i can only hope you post who this asshole stalker is before i go on vacation… hint hint… come on i will be gone almost 2 weeks…
anyway i love your story… and you better keep tina safe… i know bette will find her and all will be right again…
i wonder if its the doctor…hmmm… or the cop… i hope its not either of them…
K
Well shit. You can NOT stop there. YOu better post soon. Great chapter.
OMG! Evil doesn’t even begin to cover it. You’re killing us here!!!!!!!!