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“Besides that?”
“I’m blindfolded and drugged how am I supposed to know where we are?”
“You have fire, no wonder Bette is with you, although you don’t deserve her but I can still see what she sees in you. My dear Tina you are in the place that our beloved Bette was tortured.”
The dawning realization of this simultaneously sickens me and brings a great despair. I also realize what the smell is. Blood. Dried blood. Bette’s blood.
“Whatwhat,” I manage to stutter
“You heard me,” the Voice speaks, “You are in the place where Bette was held. It’s a condemned house on the outskirts of town. I was able to get in, wasn’t that hard. Had to pry a few boards loose, but other than that it was a piece of cake.”
“Why would you bring me here?”
The Voice laughs a sinister laugh, “I brought you to the scene of the crime to show you something Tina.”
“I’m blindfolded.”
“Which is how you are going to stay Tina.”
“What did you have to show me then?”
“That Bette being in this place, her being hurt so much, was your fault.”
This person really was off their rocker.
“My fault,” I repeated, “How was this my fault? I wasn’t the one that kidnapped her.”
I feel the owner of the Voice testing the shackles holding my writs in place and I feel their breath on my face. The person steps away from me after confirming that the shackles were strong.
“If you hadn’t left none of this would ever have happened.”
“That’s warped logic even for a crazy person.”
I feel the sting of a hand across my face.
“I may be crazy yes, but my logic is sound.”
I moved my jaw around, as it was stinging.
“When you left Bette was a shell of a human being. She would go to work early and work late. If you’d been home she wouldn’t have done that. She would have done anything in her power to make you see that she had changed, including going to work on time and coming home early. If you’d been home she wouldn’t have been at work late at night and she wouldn’t have been taken.”
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Yes I know I am insanely evil but you should learn to expect the unexpected from me by now. Trust me. You must repeat those words over and over. TRUST ME!
i don’t know if evil is a word that i would choose for you right now. that’s just down right hateful to leave us hanging!!! lol. can’t wait for more
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Jewt was right great chapter you had me on the edge…NOW don’t keep us there.. Now I think I am really not sure who it could be…POST SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
dayum girl. i first thought it was someone else. then im freaking that it was bette by the way you were writing this. now i dont know who the hell it is. whats with the us stuff. is it more than one. you best not be leaving us hanging. and jwet was right. thanks for the update.
THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!You are such a good teaser…Jwet was so right on this chapter..THANKS JWET……as for you rebakathy all I can say is FABULOUS AND POST SOON PLEASE THANKS…………….
IS IT BETTE’S MOM??????????????
Well Damn! I cant even comment….
Holy Crap…..could it be Kit? Has she flipped?
The first thought that popped in my head while reading this chapter was “where’s Detective Porter from ‘Breathe’ when you need her?! Oh yeah, protecting the OTHER Tina!!!”. Apparently there’s a lot of that going on, huh? =P
I really liked this chapter! I immediately jumped into the guessing wagon =D
At first I thought Shane, you know, because of the voice… – totally off topic, but I love her voice! – however I think Shane would have a thing for Tina, not Bette.
Then I thought, no way this could be one of the girls. So… Tina’s mother? By the way, that is another thing that seems to be happening a lot lately, I mean, Tina’s family showing up.
Anyway, as I said, I really like this chapter, very intriguing!
I know its Foxworthy isn’t it!?! No no no its Kristen Shepard! Wait no she shot JR…dayum post soon…I’m dying here.
Evil!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THAT WAS WICKEDDDDD …. its sooo alice!!!!
Damn this is bad and who the hell is that person, maybe Candace noo ore Bette’s mother. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Since you have a thing for Shane and Bette together I’m leaning toward her.
In this chapter at first I thought it was Bette’s mom (that would be way twisted) but she wasn’t around to know all the crap that went down with B & T. Then I thought my previous guess of Bette but it can’t since Tina says ‘the person that Bette and I both trust’. I think it’s either Shane or Alice.
HELLO REBA!! I’m rubbing my hands together so fast I think I might start a fire, I just beyon happy you posted and this is fucking kick ass!!! damm I’m so lovin it.
WOW……that’s one hell of a cliffhanger!!!
Evil is a good word. I know its pretty bad to be left in the dark until you decide to write again we will wait. but bad word will be said about you. Okay WE TRUST YOU are you happy now? Thanks
Thanks for the lead in but you know it’s all good and boy this was good. Go girl I love this and yes you are so wicked to leave the cliff hanging right were it was. He He He (Evil laught)
great chapter. love the cliffhanger. cant wait for next post. i think its Bettes dr
Yes I trust you, I’m sure we all do, but you are driving us crazy here!!! I could swear that this would have been the chapter that we find out who the stalker is. Now Tina knows, but we still don’t. How much longer will you keep us in suspense? Pleeeeaaaaassse let it be next, I am dying here!!! Really great chapter though.
Totally awesome idea and it turned out perfect. When it is all said and done the readers will have truly enjoyed this. Excellent post K.
I CLICKED ON THIS STORY BY MISTAKE. NOW I HAVE TO BACKTRACK AND READ IT IN ITS ENTIRETY. I AM INTRIGUED. WHATEVER HAPPENED TO THE IDEA OF BETTE AND TINA FOREVER, IN LOVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER. ONE AUTHOR KILLED TINA, ANOTHER GAVE BETTE A HEART ATTACK, ONE MADE BETTE AN ALCOHOLIC, ONE HAD HER ALMOST DIE IN AN AUTOMOBILE ACCIDENT. CURSE ALL OF YOU! AND CURSE MY ADDICTION TO FANFIC. YOU GUYS ARE GREAT! SHE SAID WHILE BACK TRACKING AND DIGRESSING
OMG..on the edge of my seat wondering who the hell is the stalker. Oh man, hope Bette outsmarts the stalker and doesn’t get caught. Can’t wait for the next chapter… ;-)
you are so bad… and so fucking good… well i can only hope you post who this asshole stalker is before i go on vacation… hint hint… come on i will be gone almost 2 weeks…
anyway i love your story… and you better keep tina safe… i know bette will find her and all will be right again…
i wonder if its the doctor…hmmm… or the cop… i hope its not either of them…
K
Well shit. You can NOT stop there. YOu better post soon. Great chapter.
OMG! Evil doesn’t even begin to cover it. You’re killing us here!!!!!!!!