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Bette — Plan B; pt. 39
It was upon that blissful moment that
Two, maybe, as long as one was good, did her homework, and gave me some quality time with her mother.
Regardless of how long it’s been since Tina and I are together, it always seems far too long that we’re apart, and far too short we’re together.
Of course, I would stop all of those things and return to
It is too much to hope that I stay forever?
Along with the kisses, Tina and I did get moments to speak with each other. She asked what I thought of her. Aren’t my feelings for her apparent in the fact that I’m here?
Not apparent to Jess, of course. Or if it was, she wouldn’t admit it. I’m still the enemy. The one to be feared. Right now, she’s less than interested in spending time with me, and far less interested in me spending time with her mother.
There must be something that can again break through that exterior. I would call it a tough exterior, but I believe Jess is quite a bit like Tina. She might be able to hide a lot on the outside, but she’s feeling it inside, even if she’s not admitting this to herself.
“What’s up with your gallery, Bette?”
Shane’s question drew me back to the conversation. “I’ve been training an assistant. He’s flying solo in the near term.”
“Bette Porter, delegating?”
I wadded up a napkin and playfully tossed it at
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(79 votes, average: 3.42 out of 5)
great update I think I have a clue what going on I will pm you to ask if I’m right.
bon bons! bon bons!
Wonderful chapter; can’t wait for more!
I’m hoping that T needs Bette to look after Jess for a month or more because she has to go away on business. That would give them some time to bond.
Great chapter. Glad to get more inside Bette’s head. And a nice cliffhanger to boot. Thanks.
sorry i’m back in my cast for over doing it with my story. So this will be short. or actually long now. trying typing with one hand. lol… Gosh i love this story. It brings a cheer to my heart and a tear to my eyes. But i really really love it so. Sweet dream my P..
I’m ready to hear what she has to say. Update soon. Good Job.
Excellent chapter as ever pseud. Thanks
I know I shouldn’t do this, but I find myself “ranking” the various POVs in terms of whose I want to hear most about. All 3, for sure, but since Tina has the most complex decision to make I most want to know what she is thinking and what her conflicts are. Next is Bette but I (seem to) have a better sense of her. Jess is always amusing and interesting. As I said – I want all three POVs, but to me Tina’s is the one where I most look for insights and little details. Under what circumstances will she walk away from this, I wonder. Bette’s assyness and Jess’s non-acceptance, yes, but what type of assyness and what degree of non-acceptance? I am enthralled. Thanks, Pseud, for such a rich story.
“Now if I can get her to accept my entry into more of her life.” Is that how we’re referring to ‘it’ now? Heh…
K
Great chapter. Can’t wait for more. Hope Jess comes around soon.
I love the varying points of view in your story as it allows us great insight into the minds, thoughts, feelings of the main characters! Great job and please don’t keep us waiting too long!
I liked hearing Bette process what is going on. It seems realistic that she would vacillate between wanting to have a family and wanting to just have Tina. This is foreign territory for her and the fact that she freely admits her insecurities about being a parent, or even being part of their lives is touching. Jess smiled…just a bit, that’s a start. A small step, but a step nonetheless. Maybe Shane’s view next? She knows Jess the best outside of Tina…and she knows Tina. Hmmm, yeah – that could be interesting.
And you little missy…are you deliberately trying to make my night’s sleepless with that cliffhanger? Oy vey!!
i hope that too…great chapter post soon
Good chaper and let see what’s next!