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Bisous; #20
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My senses seemed more sensitive since I lost my sight. Every sound, touch, taste and smell seemed to be magnified; and this kiss was so different from all the kisses I had felt on my lips before. I could feel the softness of her lips and the warmth of her breath; I felt the rough, yet gentle touch of her tongue on mine as she slipped it into my mouth, deepening the kiss.
She pulled away and I think my expression of shock remained unchanged.
She laced her fingers through mine, as she leaned in close to my ear and whispered, “I love you, Helena.”
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I sat amongst the leaves, not quite believing what I had just heard Bette say. I reached my fingers to my lips, brushing them, unsure of how to react to her words. I smiled, trying to stand; Bette took my hands into hers as she pulled me up.
“Did you hear what I said, Helena?” she asked, her voice softer and more gentle.
“Yea, of course,” I said smiling, trying to mask my surprise, “I love you too, Bette. You’re my best friend, of course I love you.”
“No, that’s not how I meant it…”
“Come on,” I said, cutting her off, “I’m tired, could you take me home now?”
I heard Bette sigh as she led me back onto the wheelchair. The entire walk back was misted with an awkward silence.
I had to admit it was hard to ignore the fact that we had just kissed, but what she said. She couldn’t possibly love me. Right now, that was the last thing I wanted from her. In my condition, I wasn’t…I just wasn’t good enough for her. She deserved to be with someone who could see, who wasn’t handicapped.
I don’t know; I just couldn’t bring myself to hold Bette back from what she really deserved, and she deserved someone so much better than me.
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Mummy was at my apartment when we got back, which saved me from being alone with Bette, at least for the time being. I just couldn’t deal with talking right now.
The walk must have done some good because for the first time in days, I felt energetic and told Mummy that I would try to take a shower on my own. I wanted to try to get a hang of this blindness, whether temporary or not.
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Whooooo Hoooooo!! Squirly is doing the happy dance…..OK now time for the big OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!….Loved it. Alrighty I won’t be mad at you anymore. Unless you throw us a curve ball let our girls be happy. PLEASE!!!!Can you see the big Squirly smile smeared all lover my face…;-)
Oh Cuz… you did it again… you have brought me to that place of forever memories… that place where memories and the words exist and transcend each other… you never cease to amaze me with your incredible gift… you ability to reach so deep within yourself and pull out something so purely magical… the pain and suffering are nothing when we have that bond of ever lasting love… and when we are able to take it in that is when the healing truly starts… both these ladies have lived and suffered… and they both deserve a new beginning within each other… you are and always will be amazing my beautiful Cuz… love and hugs, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels and truly blessed to call you Cuz)
i’m gone for 2 days and this is what i come back to? ABSOLUTELY AMAZING stuff!!! Seriously. I wish someone would talk to me the way bette talks to helena when i’m feeling worthless. As for a collabo, I would love to, but it would have to wait based on the fact that I don’t have a lot of time to put into writing by myself anymore, wouldn’t want to burden another writer…but i’m open to the idea when the right moment arises! anyway, pps!
Okaaaaaaaaaay! Almost there! You be fixin’ it…! Tearing me up inside on the way…but I trust you! Hear that? “Trust you!” So don’t disappoint my poor heart! Give Hel her eyes back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thankyouverymuch…kay, euni? Um…did that sound too demanding? Sorry! :P Heheh … Soon please :)
ok i dont have much time to comment properly so forgive me…lovely and sweet end to that chapter…just for my bday eh lol…please update soon.By the way what happened with Tina and Bette….wheres my Tasha???lol Love always Caramel.xx
You are on a roll! I heard someone shout with joy and relised it was me. This was just too sweet. So if you feel a need to post again tonight, please do! Until then I’ll be waiting.
Dag, was Helena dreaming about Jenny’s writing from season 1? lol! I’m so glad Helena and Bette are listening to their hearts! You can most definitely come out of the bomb shelter! Nothing but appreciation on this side! :) PPS
Once the strees is gone,Helena will wake up one morning and she all her dream,hope and future laying beside her will be the most beautiful sight in the world,Her Bette. thanks
Finally Bette and Helena follows their hearts. Hopefully Helena will stop feeling sorry for herself. Haven’t she heard of Stevie Wonder that man does it all.
Oh ya I forgot to say I will be mailing the bill for the oxygen.
Finally! Helena finally listened! Thank goodness! I’m glad we’re able to chase your Monday blues away. :) You have a nice week ahead! >–(“,)–
YAAYY..I’m first;)Ok…Eu..am I sensing a riviting next chapter there..I know you can do it girl;)What a fantastic update…you have been a busy girl…blessing us with 2 chapters in 2 days…does it get any better than that? Thanks for a lovely chapter sweetie…and yes…that’s right..you heard me shouting..”Go get her Bette..”OUCH;)
Oh goodie, no Monday blues for me, look where I’m starting my day, YES INDEED. So sweet Euni, now maybe they can both start their healing process. So plese, lets see where you process this next. Thank you, Md
Yay Helena finally put aside her stubborness and decided to listen. I had a hard time reading this trying to swallow my own tears. You write their emotions so wonderful Euni, you really do. Now let’s see where they take it from here.
who needs a cup of coffee, that’s a great way to start the day…it is amazing what happens when people talk and listen…really listen with their hearts not their heads!!! Awesome update…is it safe to say my torment is over???
D@mmit EU! You are just intent upon making me cry aren’t you? LOL! That was so beautifully written. My heart felt every bit of that exchange between them. I am SO going to run out of compliments for this story! Gosh, I feel so much, but there are just not enough words to express it all! I understand why Helena is trying to turn Bette away now, but I hope Bette sticks with her anyway. God, girl, you have written an extremely lovable version of both of these characters! I feel like a big group hug or something. LOL! You’re making my eyes well up with tears… but at least they are happy ones. I am going to hate seeing this story end. However, it would appease me greatly, if you’d consider creating another awe-inspiring tale with my girls. Just so you know, I’ll be on board for another B&H beginning. Thanks for the wonderful update! I am a very happy camper right now! Oh…uhhhhh… PPS!