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Bisous; #19
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“I want to take care of you now, Helena, will you please just let me do this for you?”
I turned to my side as the tears ran down my cheeks.
“I’ll be outside if you need me.”
I felt her move out of my room as I finally let out a sob. I felt my entire body tremble with emotion as I closed my eyes and hid under my sheets, hoping that Bette couldn’t hear my cries.
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Time seemed to slip past me; I didn’t know what time or day it was anymore. Mummy made arrangements with TBWA, and they sent me a huge bouquet of flowers with their well wishes. It seemed quite redundant to me to receive flowers since I couldn’t even admire them. Marina was surprisingly understanding towards my situation and told Mummy that she looked forward to having me back once I was better. To be perfectly honest, I didn’t quite see a point. The fact remained that I might never regain my sight again.
I had no appetite to eat, no energy to do anything but lay silently in my bed. People came in and out of my room to talk to me, but I learned to selectively shut them all out.
Mummy would come in every afternoon and evening to help me take a shower. Bette brought me my meals and helped me do the little things like brush my teeth. Other than that, I had no determination to do much else. I felt as if I was wasting my life away, trapped in this in infinite darkness. I felt myself slowly dying inside.
“Helena?” I heard Bette call out, “Tasha is here to see you.”
I didn’t answer as I heard the door open.
“Babe?” Tash said as she sat down beside me, stroking my arm, “How are you feeling today?”
I shrugged.
“Has Bette been taking good care of you? You have everything you need?”
“What are you doing here?” I asked, my voice rough and croaky.
“I just came to see how you were, babe,” she explained.
“I don’t understand why you came, after everything,” I said very matter-of-factly, “You don’t need to care…”
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That was so beautifully writen and much needed laughter for the both of them. I hate the fact that Helena is blind but sometimes a tragic moment can bring people closer together. Bette and Helena have loved each other from the start neither had the courage to confide in the other….maybe now they are starting to see what is important and can be happy together.
wow ok love is it then…im glad i came back to check on new updates tonight.I love the leaves part so romantic and sweet. i guess its true about the fact that when you lose your sight you become more prone to all your different senses…and Helena has indeed.I think you should post more on Sundays lol.You made me feel happy because i was feeling kind of down tonight so thank you hun…please update soon, does Helena actually still love Bette or does she love Tasha?I dont know im totally feeling what she would be right now totally confused. Yes my gf is a TiBetter she thinks that BeLena are too alike to ever work out but i disagree they are both strong women and i think thats what both of them want. They dont want someone who will be a pushover in the relationship like Tina is made out to be when shes with Bette. What do you think? Oh great update by the way just in time for my b’day as my bday is tomorrow so please update 2moz just for me huh?Love always Caramel.x
Very sweet. It will be interesting to see what Helena’s response will be to this second kiss and this confession of love. Hopefully she will be open to it because I am waiting for the massive orgasm that she has never had to happen or is that too much to ask.
Eu..You never disappoint..i get the biggest smile on my face when i see a post from you.the emotion you portrayed was so visual and heart felt and thats only thanks to your amazing writing.i really cant wait to read the next one.keep up the fabulous writing.xxx
Damn that was good! This story just keep getting better. You do a fantastic job in writing this. Please post more when you can!
*pat pat pat*…Good euni…Good girl! :)
How many of us have fallen into leaves as young peopl. and in the OLDEN days would burn them such a wonderful smell. I hope Bette is being trueful with Hekena, Only Bette can get her on her feet and into the real world again. Once the stress is over she will see again with those beautiful eyes. thanks
one word HAPPY…and a few more…your writing was so vivid, I closed my eyes to reflect on the words…LOVED IT!!!!!
See… Good things happen when I’m gone. ;) So sorry, E. I usually have very busy weekends and to top this weekend off my internet was acting up. I’m heading to the forum now to face your awful questions. :P Great chapter, as always! :)
Oh, EU! I can’t tell you how much I LOVED that chapter! My smile can’t get big enough! That was wonderful! Now, I am all warm inside. LOL! =) You have an excellent way of putting me right in the story with everything that’s happening. I felt as if I was walking with them and watching them interact. I can’t explain how good that feels! with Helena falling into the pile of leaves, I was taken back to my childhood when I used to do the same. Gosh, my cheeks hurt from smiling so much! You are truly a great writer, girl! I am now looking forward to more stories from you once this one is completed… Not that I am rushing you or anything. =) I think you are spoiling me, because you post on a regular basis and I know I won’t have to wait forever for another brilliantly written chapter. Thank you so much for giving me such a captivating story to read. I have experienced a myriad of emotions while reading this and I am glad that I did. I love stories about Belena just as much as I love them about Tibette. Like I said before….. YOU ROCK, EU!!!
OOOOOOHhhhhhhhhhhhhhEEEEEEEEEE, bout time Euni,I hope Bette really means it and is not feeling like she is for sympthys sake. Somehow all the relief of this chapter scares me with you as the author, maybe they can just stay happy for a short while??????? Please. Thank you, Md
Hey Cuz… yay… I loved this chapter from despair to the ultimate love… weeeee love it so much… you… you… jezzz you just blow me away… with each and every stroke of your magical pen you create tapestries of amazing color blended with amazing emotions ending with amazing passion… you are simply the best my beautiful cuz… and well yeah one day I’ll be as good as you…one of these days… love ya, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels and Cuz to the exceptional E)
It’s hard for all of them. Sure Helena has the biggest burden but to see a beloved suffer is nearly as hard as to suffer personally. I hope this trip in the park is not only a short break but a breakthrough. I’m looking forward to read more from you. :)
REFRESH… HAHA LOVE YA, JC
Very nice…You know, its funny: One of the clear emotions that Helena seemed to feel was loneliness. It is wonderful that there is actually so much love around her! Will our lovely lady really “see” this? What a beautiful day for her and a lovely walk in the park. PPS
this was so beautiful. I loved it how Bette was being Hel’s eyes and made her laugh. I loved the tender moent between them in the park and I really hope they can go from there. You’re doing so great sweetie, I love every moment of it, now what about the Teenage one?
Yeah Cuz… what about the Teenage one huh… :P… hehe…REFRESH… huggles, JC
Fantastic!!!! I loved it!!! Just keep getting better. Can’t wait to read the next chapter!