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My body immediately tensed up and she knew in that moment that she had uncovered the secret of all secrets that I hid away in the shadows of my soul.
My breathing became more rapid as she hastened her movements.
I cannot find the right words to better express the next few seconds after. The explosion that coursed through my entire body; it felt as if every single one of my nerves had been awakened by this eclectic electricity. I grabbed onto Bette, pulling her close to me; I could feel her body completely damp from the heat of our love making.
“Oh gawd, Bette…Bette,” I cried out as I felt my entire body start to tremble uncontrollably, releasing a final combustion of desire.
Bette held me close to her; goose-bumps appeared on my skin as I felt another wave of pleasure rush over my body.
“I love you,” Bette murmured into my ear as she continued to massage my velveteen layers until my body finally fell limp into her arms.
She moved beside me and she cradled my body with our limbs entwined. I used whatever energy I had left to snuggle up into her nook, closing my eyes with a smile of sweet satisfaction on my face.
She stroked my cheek with her hand, “What are you all smiley about?” she asked. Although I couldn’t see her, I could feel her grinning back down as she looked at me.
“Wow,” I replied, wrapping my arms tightly around her, “I…I have no words.”
She laughed softly as she dropped a light kiss on my forehead. I felt her lean backward onto the pillow, as she stroked my arm.
I sat up using my fingers to trace her eyes.
“What are you doing?” she asked, taking my hands in hers and placing a kiss on each of my palms.
“I’m just checking if you’re going to sleep now,” I replied with a cheeky grin.
I heard Bette yawn, “I was going to,” she said, “Why?”
“Coz I’m not done!” I exclaimed.
“What do you mean you’re not done?”
I twisted back my long mane before I used my hands to feel her body, moving down her sides as she fell onto her back. I gently spread her legs, moving myself carefully in between them as I used my fingers to find her folds.
“Wha…what…what…are…you…doing?” Bette squirmed as my fingers carefully opened her up.
I could feel her pulsating with desire as I gently placed my mouth over her clit, using my tongue to take her every drip of her lust.
“Oh gawd, Helena,” she cried out as she raised her hips slightly to my touch, her hands gripping onto mine.
I slowly moved my tongue down from her folds, sliding myself into her as I felt her entire body tense up with pleasure. I moved my tongue in light circles before I moved back up to her clit; I skillfully slipped two fingers into her, curling them up inside to hit her rough sensitive spot.
I felt Bette grip onto me tighter, calling out my name, “Helena…Helena…don…don’t stop…I’m so close, baby.”
I quickened my pace, thrusting faster in and out of her, my tongued adding more pressure against her center tracing each curve and concave. Until she finally let out a loud cry of surrender with her walls crashing down on me as I felt her contract tightly against my fingertips.
When she finally went limp, I slowly followed the lines of her body back up to her again. She turned to kiss my lips, her own taste mingled with our tongues, meeting in a dance of requited passion.
“I love you, Bette,” I whispered to her after our lips parted.
She held me close to her bosom, running her fingers through my hair as she replied, “I love you, Helena.”
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That night, we drifted off on lover’s sighs and I slept more soundly than I ever had; just knowing that Bette was beside me through the night made me feel safe. Every time I roused from my slumber, I felt her fingers laced through mine and for that temporary moment, nothing else really matter but having her there with me.
The intensity of Bette’s love had shone a light into the dark abyss of my blindness, filling me with hope that maybe, just maybe, tomorrow might be the day that I will be able to open my eyes and see everything clearly again.
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Awesome chapter i mean i felt like i was there…now that would have been something to see or join in lol.Words cannot express how beautiful that was hun…Hope your okay!Well Tash (Grin) not to cause trouble i hope.Words cannot express how i when i come home from work i love for a new chapter into a world away from my own.So i thank you personally from the bottom of my heart.Well…Bette wasnt expecting more, i think it was brave of Helena to delve into something sexual when she is unaware of how she feels and is getting used to her disability. But good on her for reciporcating Bette’s physical passion.And Bette loved every minute of it. Helena’s first orgasm wow and what a big one too…we always remember our first lol well i dunno if i do but hey Helena definetely wont forget.Dont forget to update asap ok make sure you do…by the way i had a feeling about your username and i was right.But i though E stood for the first name of your uni so how good am i.Here’s your round of a appalause from me here in lil my little bubble. Forever Loyal F@n.Caramel AKA Charly xx
:) Heheh! Eyes! Need eyes!!! o_o
Damn! I’m speechless and horny. :-)
Oh Euni don’t ever think you don’t put a smile on my face, even when I’m growling at you. Don’t you read your comments because I’m thinking your not feeling your worth in this writing world. If I could write one page that had collective thought, well I would write it about all the authors here that keep me entertained so beautifuly. P.S. your right on that list. Thank you so much. Md
P.S. I will send you the invoice for the oxygen.
That was awesome. Her never having a organism before. You know it was really a buisness with her and not about sex. bravo to you thanks
oh damn…I need another shower…this was beautiful…please tell me there is lots and lots more…oh my this was awesome…now that’s something to be thankful for!!!
REFRESH… LOL… love and hugs Cuz, JC
Let me just catch my breath here for a second…OK…Shoo…Eu, I am so proud of you…you have blown me away with your beautiful imagery “It was like a burst of a million supernovas, brilliantly lighting the darkness I had been trapped in.”…just reading that sentence sent me into her dark world…and left me reveling in her wonderful experience…I love being right…you can write the most sensual, amazing love scene…WOW again and BRAVO…so no more shyness…bring them on girl!!!Thanks for the post:)PPS
Whoa! I forgot to breathe. There. Better! You never fail to amaze me, E! That was so great. The writing, the words, THE everything! Thanks for the post. It’s awesome! :)
You know you have some happy readers with this chapter, don’t you? You should not only pat yourself on the back or head, but I giving you a standing ovation. That love scene was tender and hot. And when Bette said “There’s a first time for everthing” All I could think about was damn I need a smoke. Which is strange because I don’t smoke. And just like Helena, I do hope she get her sight back real soon. This was just an excellent chapter! You have done well my little chef. I guess it’s fair to say you were cooking?
That was a nice way to wake up…For me..Of to work and a full comment later…
Aw my feelings are hurt, I didn’t get a personal shout out, I feel so left out cry cry cry. just kidding :) This was one very hot chapter and I can only imagine how the sensations must feel when you can’t see. great chapter sweetie !
Oh, EU! That was so sweet! You couldn’t have been more tender if you tried! Your words paint such beautiful pictures. I loved this update so much that I went back and read it again! =) I seem to be doing that a lot with this story! I love immersing myself in your words and floating through your story, watching the characters and the scenes unfold. Bette was so loving and gentle and absolutely the most perfect person to give and experience Helena’s first orgasm! That was just breathtaking to read. I felt as if I was there hearing and seeing everything without interrupting the mood and flow. You really are a talented li’l soul. I’m glad that you are brave enough to share your creativity with us. Keep up the great work, girl! You know I’m loving it! Thanks updating. PPS! I know… I know… I always say, ” PPS” but you know what they say… You can never have too much a of a good thing!… So….ummmmm…. ahem… =)
That was wonderful. I just hope Helena will enjoy and don’t fight against their love. She isn’t a burden for Bette respectively a little one (if you can say so) that Bette is more than ready to shoulder.
Oh Cuzzie Cuz… that was just so very beautiful… and shush you… you cannot be thought to highly of… cause you are just completely inspiring… you have created such an amazing portrait of ‘love’ each side showing just how and how much they can love the other… Bette bring Helena to a place where she can trust and believe again… and then Helena without sight adapts… but more so comes full to life when she is able to show passion to the one person she has loved for all eternity… you my beautiful Cuz are just completely inspiring… and yes we shall catch up soon… chat with you later… love ya, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angel)
That was amazing!!! Great chapter! I really hope Helena will be able to see again soon! Keep up the great work!! I’m loving it!
i love ur writing. The way you weave words is amazing. You use the right words and phrases at just the right time to convey this beautiful image. Its sensual, its beautiful, its just great! And thanx for your support, I know u and JC have my back lol
i just got back to town and i couldn’t wait to get caught up with this story, but you surpassed all my expectations, great, great job!!!!!luved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!