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Bitter Endings, Sweet Beginnings: Part Six
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“My only wish is to sustain your good spirits,” said Helena, a smile in
her voice as she stopped the cart and picked out a carton of eggs.
Placing them gently in the cart, she gave the blonde a lopsided grin
and drawled, “Help me, help you, to be healthy. Help me, help you,
Alice.”
“Goof,” accused Alice soft and fond, pushing a lock of curly black hair
out of Helena’s eyes, her hand falling to cup the other woman’s cheek.
“I thought I was mean?” questioned Helena, leaning in closer and
putting their faces only a breath apart. “Which is it, darling? Am I
mean or am I a goof?”
“You’re not mean,” Alice said quietly, looking at Helena with dark eyes
that were absolutely honest in their intent. A grin tugged at her lips
and she said, “But you are such a goof.”
“I think I rather enjoy being a goof,” remarked Helena, returning the
grin and causing Alice to delight in the twinkle showing up in her
bright blue gaze. Moving to stand behind the writer again, she pushed
the cart towards the aisle where the flour was sold because she was
almost a hundred percent sure Alice didn’t have any in her apartment.
And if she did, it wasn’t enough to a proper meal out of it. “Though I
must confess I only behave in such a manner while I am with you.
Perhaps because I find myself so comfortable in your presence.”
Blinking at this and feeling strangely exhilarated, Alice knew what she
was about to say was stupid and girly but she couldn’t help herself all
the same. “Really?” she asked shyly, tilting her head back to look up
at Helena.
“Really and truly,” said Helena in reply, gazing down into Alice’s eyes
with an earnest and unwavering expression. The writer faced forward and
Helena sighed and rested her chin on top of Alice’s head as they pushed
the cart through the aisles. “I think it’s because you don’t seem to
feel as if I should be a certain way. When I’m with you there is a
tremendous lack of expectation.” Helena chuckled wryly and said,
“Something which is a rarity in my life.”
“What do people expect?” asked Alice with a frown, not at all liking to
hear that people were constantly treating Helena that way. “For you to
be a ***** or a snob or something?”
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Great job on the portrayal of Veronica..I could soo see and hear her…it was kinda eerie..lol, but none the less great. You and sulkygeek have some kind of helacious conspiracy…you write them soo well and it just makes me like them a little more every time. Like how you put Dana into play, checking up on Alice and it’s obvious she still loves her. Ohh…i’m soo torn…the danish or helacious in this story is soo hard to choose
This was my favourite chapter of this story so far – perhaps because we got close to Helacious. But it might also have been that I can’t think of much better than going to an Augusten Burroughs reading at Book Soup with Gabby!
Wow i love this chapter, and the story overall so far, hope you post soon!!!
Dreiser – choppin broccoli!! I’m telling you I sat in history class my junior yr of high school the monday morning after that episode of sat night live singing it with my friends!!! God im old.
Veronica was so dead on, i could actually actually cameron manheims voice.
alice and helena? unbelievable cuteness. “Thank you for being what everyone else is not.” I actaully swooned!!!
great update – loved it. it was so good, i couldnt come up with a philosophical reference good enough!
OMG..’Im Luvin it’ I JUS..I LUV YOU 4 WRITING THIS STRY..the way u write – 2 cute..I like that you wrote Dana out 2 b a stocker as Alice had once been an obsessive stocker of Dana&Lara fiasco..GREAT chapter..Alice&Helena’z relationship seemz 2 be progressing niceli – closer&closer 2gether..’Young Luv’..I always look forward 2 reading your wrk..thnx 4 writing, dun stop..PLEASE mst Post so0N..
*melts* Full credit to your writing abilities!!!! I love the cuteness and dorkiness of Alice and Helena. It’s beautiful
Dana is by no means a stalker in this story. She’s simply still in love with Alice and wants to make sure she’s happy.
I have to say that the danish fan in me it’s hurt when I read the Dana’s part but you made unbelievable loving the helacious part too, so I can’t stop reading your work. Thanks. oh and I love Veronica too :P
I like Helene in this, Alice bring out the true person. she and Helene are very dorlie and very loveablem also. Wish she could show this side to others. thanks for a remarlablr chspter.
Oh dreiser, thank you for this latest chapter. The choppin’ broccoli song in the supermarket had me laughing my ass off. I love how close they continue to get and just hate knowing that it will be at least another two weeks before you pick up where you left off with your evilly planned ‘to be continued’. Your such a tease!
Though i am not a big shane or carmen fan, they were both very cute as you said they would be (i think i can handle things like that in small doses). But the best bit about that whole scene was Gabby fucking Deveaux! I can’t express how much i love Gabby. She’s a complete bitch, she’s got a wicked/sarcastic sense of humor, she’s fiercly intelligent, she uses words to cut people down in just nano-seconds… and she does it all with her ‘whatev’ blase attitude. Call me sick, but there’s just something about all that that makes her so damn hot. And its just so adorable that little ol’jenny gets her all embarrassed with her smiling pixie ways. I do hope that you intend to have more Gabby/Jenny flirting going on.
I like dana more in your story than in sulky’s… which is not to say that i think one of you is a better writer than the other, i enjoy you equally ;). But as i was saying, i do like dana better in this because she isn’t all stalkerish and super clingy… and she acknowleges helena being good for alice, and even sees that she is not what one would automatically assume she is.
Those are my comments for now, love your work.
woot that was really good… Hope you’ll come around and write some more of that…;)