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Bitter Endings, Sweet Beginnings: Part Six
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“And my lady, she went downtown,” Helena sang along, returning Alice’s
smile as she looked into dancing brown eyes. It was things like this
that made her love being with Alice so. She had never met anyone in her
life that could make the most inane and everyday events into something
fun. “She bought some broccoli. She brought it home…”
The women took a joint pause then sang together, “She’s chopping
broccoli. Chopping broccoli, chopping broccoli, chopping broccoli.”
They trailed off into giggles, pressing into each other and completely
unaware of the attention they were getting from the other shoppers.
“Okay,” said Alice through the giggles, grinning at Helena. “Maybe you
should get some broccoli just so I can watch you chop it up. Seeing
that might be worth having the trauma of that most evil of vegetables
in my apartment.”
“You mean to say that you support the premeditated murder of what you
would consider your vegetable enemies?” asked Helena, sounding
thoroughly shocked at this information. Shaking her head sadly and
making a tsk noise under her breath, she said, “One can never really
know someone until you discover their most dark of desires.”
“Wanting to see a nasty vegetable chopped up isn’t a dark desire,” said
Alice huffily, pushing the cart forward to bump into Helena’s rear
again in a form of harmless retaliation.
At this, Helena yelped and jumped forward. Her eyes narrowed
decisively and she studied Alice’s overly innocent expression for a
moment then walked over to her. Standing behind the blonde, Helena put
her hands on top of Alice’s and ducked her head down to murmur in her
ear, “You require help steering, don’t you? That must be it because why
else would you continue to drive madly about, ramming into my posterior
every other second?”
“I can steer fine. Is it my fault that your butt makes a perfectly
shaped target while wandering through the produce aisle?” said Alice
mischievously, tilting her head back and grinning up at Helena who had
taken over steering the cart.
“I was unaware that a target existed on such parts of my body but I
thank you for telling me, darling,” said Helena in a humorous drawl,
moving the cart down the bread aisle. “You still have yet to inform me
what you wish to have for dinner. And do say something that doesn’t
contain thousands of artificial preservatives and could survive the
horrors of a nuclear war.”
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Great job on the portrayal of Veronica..I could soo see and hear her…it was kinda eerie..lol, but none the less great. You and sulkygeek have some kind of helacious conspiracy…you write them soo well and it just makes me like them a little more every time. Like how you put Dana into play, checking up on Alice and it’s obvious she still loves her. Ohh…i’m soo torn…the danish or helacious in this story is soo hard to choose
This was my favourite chapter of this story so far – perhaps because we got close to Helacious. But it might also have been that I can’t think of much better than going to an Augusten Burroughs reading at Book Soup with Gabby!
Wow i love this chapter, and the story overall so far, hope you post soon!!!
Dreiser – choppin broccoli!! I’m telling you I sat in history class my junior yr of high school the monday morning after that episode of sat night live singing it with my friends!!! God im old.
Veronica was so dead on, i could actually actually cameron manheims voice.
alice and helena? unbelievable cuteness. “Thank you for being what everyone else is not.” I actaully swooned!!!
great update – loved it. it was so good, i couldnt come up with a philosophical reference good enough!
OMG..’Im Luvin it’ I JUS..I LUV YOU 4 WRITING THIS STRY..the way u write – 2 cute..I like that you wrote Dana out 2 b a stocker as Alice had once been an obsessive stocker of Dana&Lara fiasco..GREAT chapter..Alice&Helena’z relationship seemz 2 be progressing niceli – closer&closer 2gether..’Young Luv’..I always look forward 2 reading your wrk..thnx 4 writing, dun stop..PLEASE mst Post so0N..
*melts* Full credit to your writing abilities!!!! I love the cuteness and dorkiness of Alice and Helena. It’s beautiful
Dana is by no means a stalker in this story. She’s simply still in love with Alice and wants to make sure she’s happy.
I have to say that the danish fan in me it’s hurt when I read the Dana’s part but you made unbelievable loving the helacious part too, so I can’t stop reading your work. Thanks. oh and I love Veronica too :P
I like Helene in this, Alice bring out the true person. she and Helene are very dorlie and very loveablem also. Wish she could show this side to others. thanks for a remarlablr chspter.
Oh dreiser, thank you for this latest chapter. The choppin’ broccoli song in the supermarket had me laughing my ass off. I love how close they continue to get and just hate knowing that it will be at least another two weeks before you pick up where you left off with your evilly planned ‘to be continued’. Your such a tease!
Though i am not a big shane or carmen fan, they were both very cute as you said they would be (i think i can handle things like that in small doses). But the best bit about that whole scene was Gabby fucking Deveaux! I can’t express how much i love Gabby. She’s a complete bitch, she’s got a wicked/sarcastic sense of humor, she’s fiercly intelligent, she uses words to cut people down in just nano-seconds… and she does it all with her ‘whatev’ blase attitude. Call me sick, but there’s just something about all that that makes her so damn hot. And its just so adorable that little ol’jenny gets her all embarrassed with her smiling pixie ways. I do hope that you intend to have more Gabby/Jenny flirting going on.
I like dana more in your story than in sulky’s… which is not to say that i think one of you is a better writer than the other, i enjoy you equally ;). But as i was saying, i do like dana better in this because she isn’t all stalkerish and super clingy… and she acknowleges helena being good for alice, and even sees that she is not what one would automatically assume she is.
Those are my comments for now, love your work.
woot that was really good… Hope you’ll come around and write some more of that…;)