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Bitter Endings, Sweet Beginnings: Part Three
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“Answer’s simple,” Veile said, taking a long drink of his beer and
grinning around it. “Me, Tyler, Davis, and Roderick all got the same
damn first name. So it’s just easier going by the last name, you know?
Instead of being like Mike V, Mike T, Mike D, and Mike R.” He snorted
and this and muttered, “I hated goin’ through that stuff in grade
school. ***** annoying.”
“But why call Helena by her last name?” asked Alice, playfully pointing
out a flaw in their logic. “And what about Mitchell? His first name is
Robert not Mike.”
“Solidarity!” called Davis from the upper deck, where he was preparing
his reel. “If we have to go by our last names then they have to do it
too.”
Alice frowned and looked as if she was going to bring up yet another
flaw in their logic but Helena appeared at her side and whispered in
her ear, “Best to accept their insanity, darling. It’s really quite
futile to try and argue against it. They don’t deal well with change.”
“Yeah, like Roderick and his shoes,” said Mitchell, laughing and
pointing his beer at the other man. “Susan threw out his sneakers he’s
had for like… what was it Rod?”
“Ten years,” Roderick groaned, casting his line as the ship slowed and
Davis chose their fishing ground. “I had them broken in perfectly and
everything. Then one day she decides they’re too dirty for me to wear
anymore and throws them out. Too dirty!” he exclaimed incredulously.
“How can a shoe be too dirty? It’s a shoe! And they were sneakers.”
“That sucks,” Davis called from the upper deck as he casted his reel.
“If Maggie threw out my sneakers I’d go nuts. I hate shopping for
shoes. It feels weird when the people in the shops try to put them on
for you. Makes me feel like I’m in preschool again or something.”
“You mean you aren’t?” asked Tyler humorously. He wandered outside and
stopped to take notice of Helena and Alice on the starboard side of the
ship where the heiress was helping the other woman to cast her reel.
Walking over to Mitchell and Veile then elbowing the latter, he
remarked, “Check it out. You sure they’re just friends?”
“That’s what Peabody said,” replied Veile, taking another swig of his
beer and watching as Helena murmured something in Alice’s ear, making
the blonde burst into easy laughter. “Carol wants me to hook Helena up
with that cousin of hers, you know? But I wonder if maybe that’d end up
being a waste of time now,” he mused.
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I really have to stop reading all of Helena’s parts in a British accent. I’m annoying myself….dreiser, you rock.
Thanks for such an endearing Helena, its far too easy to get bogged down by the cannon Helena but your tale takes me far away from that and into the realm where I quite like her and the lovely Alice together. Keep up the tension and please never stop giving us loyal and loving fans more!!!
can i say that i love that you use the right terminolgy in the right settings. Seems like such a small thing, but it isn’t. Like a tennis match, not game. Helena’s quarters, not room. You always make the right reference in the right place. And the details do not go unnoticed, thanks – it makes for such great flow and reading.
A human catch and a human reeling it in – wonderful analogy with the fishing and the pending hook-up. loved it dreiser.
Alice and Helena together are so cute!
So much sexual tension!!!!!!!! Its driving me crazy. Both you and Sulky still have not even let Alice and Helena kiss!!! Someone let my girls be happy please! By the way, I love you, you are the greatest writer ever. I wait for like two weeks for this story, its kills me but when it gets here… bliss. Keep it up babe and thanks.
I loke Helena and Alice together. Lets keep then that way.
alicesgirl – you are too right
I’m loving your story dreiser.
I love this budding romance. I will look for an update as soon as I get back from the Mich Fest.
It’s so true you and Sulky are killing me, please I need to read happy helacious. Mmmm I just wrote that? Well in my danish heart there is some place to this ship too, and it’s all your fault :P . Thanks.
WOW! that was really tense. i dont think i can take much more! i hope they hook up really soon.