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Black – Chapter. 16
“… It’s over…” Alice said suddenly as she wipes her tears that continue to roll down with her hands, wishing she could just vanish from this world at the moment. She looked at Shane again not believing what Alice just said.
“You don’t mean that…” Shane said in a serious voice.
“Yes. Yes I do Shane…. It is over between us. Whether you like it or not, I’ll always be the second lady…” Alice said as she tries not to cry anymore.
Shane cannot believe her ears, So many thoughts running through her mind. Suddenly she felt hot flash of anger coursing through her body.
“No. You don’t mean that Alice… It is NOT over between us. Don’t say that baby…” Shane pleaded. She looked at Alice who is nodding her head, being certain with her statement she just said.
“It is Shane… It is. Please don’t call me baby okay…” Alice said her voice breaking in different tones still trying to hold back her tears. Alice starts taking off the Rolex watch that is on her left wrist. She also took off the earrings she got from Shane. Her arms stretching to Shane, giving her gifts back to Shane.
“NO! I’m not taking that back, that’s for you!” Shane almost shouted taking a step back from Alice.
“I don’t want it Shane!! I don’t want anything that is going to remind me of you, anything that will remind how stupid I was to ever fall in love with you, anything that will make my heart aches so fucking painfully okay!! So please take it fucking away from me!!” Alice shouted at Shane, her arm still stretched out shaking it to Shane to take it away from her.
“So that’s it?! You really fucking ending this???” asked Shane.
“Alice… look at me… look at me Alice.” Said Shane. Alice slowly faces Shane, her face and eyes are red.
“I’ll end it… I’ll end it Alice” Shane said to Alice, her head shaking no, from left to right. Her hands on her hips, with one of them containing the watch and earrings.
“I’ll go to her hotel tonight… and I will tell her that it’s over between us. Please baby…”
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(36 votes, average: 3.69 out of 5)
This story is really really good! I`m looking forward to the next chap, hopefully you post soon!?
Yay for you!!! I love this story and check the site a couple times a day just to see if you updated. It’s great that Helena filled everyone in on what’s going on with Shane and Carmen, and I hope Alice can forgive Shane and give her another chance. Carmen better stay away from them….grr lol, I am WAY too overprotective of Shane.
I love this fiction and I know that someone is probably gonna kill me for what I’m going to say…I miss Carmen or it’s better saying that I miss Shane and Carmen as a couple.good job.I’m looking forward to the nex update.bye
WOW!!! that was really great chapter!! I’m happy to see Helena cleared the whole thing for Alice and everybody else! I’m addicted to this story! I hope that Alice helps Shane by moving on and please don’t stop this story!! PPS!
Yay, an update!!!!! I love it!
Hey, excellent chapter Blox !! Well done :D
This story really is my newest fanfic addiction! I’m so glad Helena clarified things on the marriage of Shane and Carmen. I hope Alice is willing to help Shane moving on (she needs to get past the feeling of being the ‘second lady’ to Shane). I’m looking forward to the next update!