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Black – Chapter. 16
Shifting her feet slightly, standing inches closer to Alice.
“Don’t you get it Shane?! You’ve been with her for ten fucking years okay!! And you’ve been with me… for three fucking months… how the fuck am I suppose compete with that?!? You have ten whole years of history together… no matter how much you say you love me or care for me… I know I could never have the love that you’ve shared with Carmen… you will always think of her as the love of your life… you will always think of her as the girl that stole your heart and that you married to… you will always think of her as the girl that gave birth to your beautiful daughter… and no matter how much you try to deny it Shane… I know you will always have her in your heart…” Said Alice her tears spill out from her ears. She grabbed Shane’s hand put place the watch and the earrings in her hand, she closed Shane’s hand and looked up at Shane.
Shane was quiet. She knows that every single word that Alice just said is somewhat partly true. No matter what it is, she’ll always have that feeling of affection towards Carmen.
“Tell me you don’t love me… tell me you never have… tell me that you hate me with every single might in your body… look at me, look at my eyes…and you tell me you don’t ever want to see my face ever again…” said Shane with big teary eyes.
Alice looked at Shane almost like she’s insane. “I can say all of those things to you… right now. I can act like you don’t mean a thing to me anymore… but I’ll be lying to my self and that’s something I don’t do. You are the best fucking thing that has ever happened to me… and right now, you are the worst.” said Alice.
“Tell me what I have to do to make it up to you. I’ll do anything…” said Shane. Shane looked at the far corner of the bathroom and saw two girls standing there, eyes fixed on them. Watching and listening carefully with the drama that’s happening. Shane realized that the two random girls have been standing there from the start. Shane’s eyes darts back to Alice, giving her that look that Alice use to love and now hate.
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(36 votes, average: 3.69 out of 5)
This story is really really good! I`m looking forward to the next chap, hopefully you post soon!?
Yay for you!!! I love this story and check the site a couple times a day just to see if you updated. It’s great that Helena filled everyone in on what’s going on with Shane and Carmen, and I hope Alice can forgive Shane and give her another chance. Carmen better stay away from them….grr lol, I am WAY too overprotective of Shane.
I love this fiction and I know that someone is probably gonna kill me for what I’m going to say…I miss Carmen or it’s better saying that I miss Shane and Carmen as a couple.good job.I’m looking forward to the nex update.bye
WOW!!! that was really great chapter!! I’m happy to see Helena cleared the whole thing for Alice and everybody else! I’m addicted to this story! I hope that Alice helps Shane by moving on and please don’t stop this story!! PPS!
Yay, an update!!!!! I love it!
Hey, excellent chapter Blox !! Well done :D
This story really is my newest fanfic addiction! I’m so glad Helena clarified things on the marriage of Shane and Carmen. I hope Alice is willing to help Shane moving on (she needs to get past the feeling of being the ‘second lady’ to Shane). I’m looking forward to the next update!