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Black – Chapter. 24
“I love you Alice…” I let out instantaneously still catching my breath. She smiled at me and place little and soft kiss on my lips. “I love you too baby…” She said.
Our foreheads were stuck together as our hands roam each others body. I felt Alice’s hand went down to my waist and pulled down my tight jeans. I grinned at her as I wait for her to please me. She pulled down my already unbutton shirt off of me and stroke my arms. She traced the tattoo that I have inside of my arm that says “Love holds you to me” the tattoo that I got for my late daughter. I looked at her hand tracing along the line of the letters. She cupped my face and kissed me. She broke the kiss and stared deeply into my eyes, as if telling me that it’ll be alright. And I know it’s going to be alright.
KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK!!!!
Our heads turned to the direction of the door. We were both wondering who the hell it could be. “You got to be kidding me…” I said.
“Did you ask Ed to come??” She asked me.
“No… I’ve already met him today….” The knocking kept going and this is so not the time for company. “Yeah, Coming!” I yelled. “Get dressed…” I looked at Alice and pulled my jeans up and buckle it and button my shirt to what there’s left.
Alice grabbed my hand before I left to get the door. “Hey, we’re not finished missy…” she grinned sexily at me. I snickered at her and made my way to the door. I was positive to who it was going to be and thought it should be Ed. So I didn’t bother to look into the peek hole.
I unlocked the door and sing the door open and I was totally weren’t ready to meet who was in front of my door.
“Carmen…” Hey eyes were red. Her skin color was much paler than her natural skin. I don’t know how she found my place, but she did. She probably called Ed. I saw the familiar face behind her and it was Tasha.
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(18 votes, average: 3.72 out of 5)
A very powerful chapter. I love this story! Later
I was waiting for your upgrade ’cause I think this story is really amazing…post soon
Great chapter!. Im glad Shane said the truth to Carmen..now make her disappear :P
Another awesome chapter!!! PMS!!
wow this is some seriously emotional and powerfull stuff you have going on here. If I were in Shane’s position I don’t know if I would ever be able to forgive Carmen. I mean it’s not like it was a simple accident, Carmen was driving like an idiot. I’m curious as to what is going to happen to Carmen now, especially since Alice and Shane realy seem to be in a very good place.
Whatever happened to this story? I miss it. I love your other one too – Badlands.
oh my god… no, poor Carmen! I know, she’s been bad, very bad… but… she’s still my favourite!! But, you know… in this story she doesn’t fit very well. Well. I feel bad saying this, but… suicide… it would be very “romantic”… and a good way to make Carmen go away. *cry*I know, I’m a psycho… sorry ^_^