Fan Fiction
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Black – Chapter. 8
Shane: yeah… she’s really cool with it… I told her that I uhh… fancy you… and yeah…
Fancy you?! Are you serious shane… Fancy you?? What the hell happened to you… you’re a way smoother than this… c’mon man put you’re A game in it…
Shane turned away couldn’t help but blushed at what she just said. Alice had a big grin on her face, realizing what Shane just said.
Alice: oh okay… cool… so… you uhm fancy me… is it?
Shane: yeah… it’s a Brit slang for… like… or uhm you say it when you’re into someone… like uhm if you have this girl that…
Alice: I know what it means Shane…
Shane: okay…
Alice stood closer to Shane, her hands went to hold onto Shane blazer’s flaps. Her head slowing getting closer to Shane, almost grazing Shane’s lips teasing her slowly and painfully. Alice licked her lips.
Alice: so… Ms. McCutcheon… you really fancy me…
Shane: that I do… do you Ms…. Uhh… what’s your last name again?
Alice: oh… Pieszecki…
Shane: okay… so uh Ms. Pes…Pez…
Alice: PEE – ZACK – KEE
Shane: alright… it’s hard to pronounce… Ms. Pieszecki, do you fancy anyone in particular…
Alice: oh yeah… there’s this girl that I’ve been seeing… she’s uhh this big shot hairstylist… who have this sexy smoky eyes and one hell of a smile… and a gorgeous kid named Lily…
Alice was stopped by Shane’s lips on hers. Alice was quickly melting into the kiss; letting Shane took control of the situation. Shane slowly eases her tongue into Alice’s mouth, swirling and dancing away with it. Shane stopped abruptly suddenly remember that her kid is there and also a couple of people that is still waiting for her.
Shane: uhh I would love to continue that kiss but uhm… I think we should keep it a PG rating for a while and I think Ed is ready to kick my butt for making him wait that long… uhm… do you mind waiting for while, I just have some stuff to choose and talk about the store… all that jazz…
Alice: yeah I’ll wait… don’t be too long, I still want to finish that kiss…
Shane walked backwards and turned around and head to Ed. Shane was once again was bombarded with questions. The designers took her around the store, their hands waving right and left passionate on what the store is going to look like. While Shane just stood there and trying to take it all in, nodding at all the suggestions that was coming her away. While Alice watch all of this happened, she sat on the stool that was near the corner, couldn’t take her eyes off Shane with a big goofy smile on her face.
Alice looked at her right where she felt something was coming, and it was Lily.
Alice: Hey ya…
Lily: Hi…
Alice: So… uhm… do you like Los Angeles so far?
Lily: yeah… I saw Lindsay Lohan in our hotel yesterday…
Alice: Did you?? That’s pretty cool…
Lily: yeah it was… Do you like my mum?
Alice: uhm… yeah… I do… I really do… I hope that’s okay…
Lily: it’s okay… it’s just that my mum really likes you too and I just don’t want to see her sad anymore…
Alice: I’ll promise you that I’ll try my best to keep her happy…
Alice investigative mind was working away with what lily said. She knew that Shane has a lot of baggage with her… literally and metaphorically… Alice wonder if it was time to unpack those baggage’s. Alice held out her pinkie finger to Lily.
Alice: pinkie swear…
Lily took a step closer and took out her pinkie finger and curled her finger with Alice’s.
Lily: okay…
While this was going on, Alice and Lily doesn’t realize that Shane was staring at them, wondering at what they were talking about, with several other voices keep in talking behind her back.
TBC… whaddaya think??
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(25 votes, average: 3.28 out of 5)
the story is really cute and different..i really like it alot..pps!!
I really like this story…Sorry I haven’t replied, but I was on vacation in Hawaii for a week…I LOVE this story, but I agree with komakino- I’d like them a little bit longer. Great story though and keep up the good work..PPS
very sweet. loving the added bonus of shane with a kid of her own. she’s turning out to be a rather charming mum and alice looks to have some potential too. hoping that you will continue.
I think it’s good, I think I want more and I think you should try to make your chapters a little bit longer. Well, maybe I should ask nicely ! Pretty please ? ;)