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Blind (Chap 10)
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Bette
“Al… stop pushing me already… I can’t walk that fast with this cane and with my condition…” Alice pushed me hard into Milk entrance so that I had no time to turn back.
Once inside, it was kind of packed… Alice tiptoed and scanned through the crowd…
“There they are…” she shouted on my face…
“Gee Al, will you please calm down…” She looked like all giggling up schoolgirl who can’t wait to meet her better half…
“Excuse me… give way please… we have a handicap here…”Alice shouted and made way through the crowd.
I wished the earth would just open up to swallow me in at that very moment…
We were approaching the seating area… there she was… sitting, smiling and laughing timidly with Dana… the disco light shone on her once in a while… wow… it simply took my breath away… her wavy blond hang loosely down her left cheek while the other tucked at her right ear… face flushing a little, her lips moving… the thumping music faded away… all but her faded away… my heartbeat getting louder… but until a point… I felt like it stopped for a beat together with my breathing.
Again I felt a push at my back towards the table. Dana starting to get up… while Tina looked at me… her eyes brightened and looked like she was taken back a bit as well… slowly she stood up… she is really beautiful… I looked at her like it was my first time seeing her… but it really felt like it was the first time seeing her… butterflies swirling in my stomach… looking into her eyes… and lost in it once again.
“Bette? You remember Tina? Tina Kennard? The nurse who’d taken care of you when you were in the hospital?” Alice’s sound brought me back out to reality…
“I know who she is Al…” I turned to said it a little hard on Alice then turned to Dana who was hugging Alice… “Hello Dana… it’s nice to see you again.”
Dana came over and gave me a warm hug. Then I turned to Tina… I took a deep breath and pushing my feelings aside… “Hello Tina, it’s nice to see you again.” I gave her a big smile but then things started to get awkward… I didn’t know whether I should lean in to hug her…
“Hi Bette… it’s good to see you too.”
“Hey Tina…” Alice went over and gave Tina a hug… Tina was looking at me while hugging Alice… I started to kick myself in my mind to not to give her a hug… I so wanted to feel her in my arms…
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2 weeks of not seening each other and all they give each other is nice to see you? oh come on!!!Zabo, make them wake up and see what is in front of them. and of course i’m in for the ride. thanks looking forward to next chapter
God, how dare you to call your beautiful story a “humble” one ? (*Hmm… trying hard to frown here, when in fact I’m smiling !*) Let me tell you that, dear Zabo : for me, nothing written succeeding to truly touch its readers’ heart should never be called “humble”. Because giving life to any deep emotion, “come rain or come shine” – as my favourite singer sang many years ago – , is the real meaning of writing. Give me tears or smiles, comedy or drama, but give me emotions ! That could pretty be my reader’s motto ! ^_^ — “I’d never taken my time to realise that simple thing like looking up to the sky… with the stars shinning could be so beautiful” : that could be called the awakening of true emotions in the wake of this everlasting miracle that falling in love is : everything around us suddenly takes a new beauty and a new meaning… A simply beautiful all-senses phenomenon. — “it first sent warmth to my heart… but then the warmth scared me, so I pulled away” : ah, this eternal feelings’ crossover that so easily brings misunderstandings ! One can be emotionally moved and however acting as if turning the gesture down… that’s the ‘blur’ we spoke about together, isn’t it ? (*wink*) — “my eyes watered, blurring my sight to capture Tina beauty for the last few moment before seeing her again… will I see her again?” : I love that. An other meaning to all the ways one can interpret ‘see’ : right away Tina’s face was finally brang to light for our Bette, her presence will soon be removed – something tears’ blur already shows. Pretty painful ! — And finally, here’s the ultimate misunderstanding : Tina ‘masked her pain’, ‘chickened out and never gathered up enough guts to ‘stay in touch’ with Bette’, a ‘confusion and indecisiveness’ behavior that also masked her feelings and will certainly make Bette think that the lovely blonde of her dreams doesn’t care about her… One of life’s worst traps, I think ! But of course, drama would not have been so intense here with a better observer at Bette’s bedside instead of Dana (ha ! to observe, to acknowledge, to realize… so much variations around your ‘see’ thema ! ^_^ ) and so it’s definitly blur time now, I’m afraid ! Fortunately, Alice’s precious observation’s skills are already on the march and her bond with Dana will be the priceless hyphen between our two still unconfessed lovebirds. Go, Alice, go ! ^_^ — Dear talented author, this update truly delighted me : I missed this great story of yours so much ! (… and, my dear justloveB+T, if you read me now, please try your best to delight me too with your three stories’ updates, as soon as possible !! *adding my best puppy eyes here*). And even if you unconciously didn’t pay attention to the surrounding of all this ‘see’ thema, let me tell you how perfectly you express its variations from the very beginning ! Uncounciously to you, but nevertheless present – I mean it. Many thanks from the deepest of my heart for such a powerful story ! – Faithfully yours – your more than ever happy reader.
LOOK Bette take T to your candyhouse already!!!!!!!! lol !!! they/you are driving me crazy here, they better get 2gether real soon and post soon huh!!!!!
just go and give her a hug…those two need to talk, or they might lose something special that is between them
How can you not fall in love with either woman. Both women are trying desperately to hide their feelings from other and possibly themselves.
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Oh man these 2 neet to be together, I agree with B&TForever and let see whats next, thanks!
Maybe she missed out on the hug the first time around but Bette will get Tina into her arms before the night is finished (you know, the hug thingy). I take it that Tina was also a little surprised when she saw the out of the hospital Bette.
Ya gotta love Milk! Looking forward to your next chapter!
Wow these 2 ladies fail bigtime. Hey, what’s that in your mailboxes, B&T? It’s a reality check! Anyone with half a brain could tell something was there when Bette was still in the hospital. Aww and Tina pulled her hand away? So mean. :( Thanks for finally posting again! lol
Can we hit Bette with the cane? she hadn’t seen Tina in a while and all she can say is “It’s good to see you again Tina”??? even with that wonderful smile it’s not enough! LOL
1st brb
Its hard to be the brave one and make the first move. I think it should be Tina.
They are so smitten with each other. I like the slow burn with these girls. They will figure it out maybe with some help from the others.
They’re so cute, and suddenly our Ms. Porter is so shy. Tina should definitly make the first move since Bette is being overly cautious. Can we get more please.
Hmm… very nice, Zabo. Two weeks is a long time, isn’t it, Tina? At least enough to realise that you have got someone under your skin… Come on girl, just go with the flow! I don’t think Bette will make a single move if she doesn’t get at least a hint from Tina… Thanks zabo!
Is Bette able to slow dance with Tina? Please let them try and post more often.
They should really get a grip on themselves… This is just killing them both if you ask me. Thanks for posting and I hope you’ll post again soon. I love the story :)
Whats up with Tina….why didn’t she call and send a text for 2 weeks, thats not nice. More please….
Thanks for the update..this story just keeps getting better.