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Blind (Chap2)
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Previously:
With desperation and frustration, Bette wanted to scream out but couldn’t find the strength, but with all her strength that she could manage and at the edge of tears spilling “Am I blind?”
Chapter 2
Time seemed like slowing down… everything was slowing down… but my head started to spin faster and faster… Without realization my grip on that wrist grew tighter and tighter while waiting for the response for the answer that I had been dreading for a ‘No’ assurance.
“Oh great you’re awake…” I loosen the grip and exhaled the breath that I did not know I had been holding.
“Well bab… Tina… why didn’t you page me?” I could feel the wrist that I had been holding began to throb and gone cold.
Tina tried to convey the message by narrowing her eyes to her wrist
“Oh…” came from the guy … “I’m Dr. Palmer… Eric Palmer… I’m your doctor since you are brought in to the California Medical Institution.”
I let go of my grip but was gripped by this rough hand… well I mean Dr. Palmer’s hand.
“Well Ms. Porter… do you remember what happened?”
I tried to think hard… I was confused but the last thing I knew was getting into my car on my way back to LA after ‘tracking down’ a potential sponsor for my art show.
“I… I…”
“Don’t worry Ms. Porter, Kit will be on her way and we’ll explain everything to you…” After a ticking sound of a pen and scratching sound of the pen on a board… “Glad to see that you found your way back… we almost lost you… but no worries now… you’re in great care.”
Tina rolled her eyes in irritation with this ‘Palmer ego’.
“Well Tina, can I talk to you for a second?”
Tina brushed her hands on my arms, “I’ll be right back.” I tried to nod and suddenly felt a great lost without her by my side.
They were standing what I assumed was outside my room, but I could still hear them…
“So what about dinner after our shift then go home and watch a movie?” Oh… I felt my heart dropped that instantly, ‘Are they married? A couple? Most of all… she’s straight and taken’
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Eric,[excuse me Dr Palmer] A$$ hole is Bette Dr. Want take Tina long to get rid of him. Thanks god for Kit thanks
Eric is such a JERK!!!! I hope Bette will be OK. TIna needs to Eric to the side of the road. THank god for Kit. PPS
Bette’s already started using her ears more whether she knows it or not. And a monkey ran into the road? Maybe it was a sign she’d meet Tina. ;)
A B&T beginning all because Curious George decided to make a mad dash across the PCH. I love it! And Eric needs to become extinct ASAP. Great job!
i already hate Eric…Tina is going to be a really good nurse and spend all her time with Bette…i hope her eyes will be better soon
Good chapter! i wanted so much kick Eric buttom is so arrogant! and it seems to me like Tina has another interest!
cool start longer
God, Bette really did a number on herself. Even though she got hurt badly she still showed concern for the others including the monkey that were involved in the accident. Tina seems to be falling for her charge instead of the irritating Doctor.
I do not like this Eric character…he has to go…looks like Tina is coming to that same conclusion. I have every confidence you will restore Bette’s sight. So when will her friends appear or will it just be Kit in her corner for this story?
of course nurses are great especialy blonde. As to Bette’s blindness blame it on the monkey lmao. Post agian soon. =)
Eric is such a pain in the ass. Why does Tina put up with that jerk. Hey, I love the monkey! Where did that thing come from??
BTW I’m glad you finally decide to post this, it’s great.
Oh another great twist to the story…Eric is Bettes Dr., Tinas boyfriend and a JERK!!!! This just got more interesting, post soon….
OK Tina dump him and spend the night taking care of Bette
I am enjoying the story and hope you post soon.
Eric is an asshole and want to kick the shit out of him, what a moron docter. Please don’t let Bette blind and hope her eyes will be better soon, let Tina take care of Bette. Oh let her dump eric as soon as good. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Waoow, Zabo, this story starts really great. So looking forward to see where you’re taking us! So funny to see that Bette, in spite of her condition, still has her brain reeling about Tina’s marital status and relationship to Eric! So ‘in’ character! I’m also excited about how you’re going to show the chemistry and the mutual (I hope) attraction without those soul-reflecting beautiful eyes of Bette… well, i guess Tina could still read them, but Bette won’t read Tina’s eyes (temporarily I hope). It’s such a usual way of communicating between them that I’m looking fwd to see what other ways they’re going to use. Anyway, you girl got me onboard! Thanks!
Erik as always a suitcase without a handle.
5 stars