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Blind (Chap2)
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“Eric, I’m so tired… I need to get home… MY home to have a real good rest… I’ve been on two shifts straight in a row… please?” ‘Looks like she’s trying to get away…’
“Oh… please Tina… I haven’t been with you for days… the only time we get to see each other are while working…” ‘Oh, pout-ty boy’
“Eric… please?” ‘Pure irritation… oh gosh… why am I such a busy body… this is so not me and so uncool’
“Oh baby sis!!”
‘Kit?’
“Kit!!”
I reached out my only moveable arm and finally something familiar and warm feeling reached me.
“Oh baby sis… don’t you ever do this to us again… I’m so worry sick about you…”
I never could control my vulnerability when I was around Kit, she has always been a great big sis who look after me and taking care of me.. everything would turn out to be ok and safe… my tears started to run down my cheeks freely…
“What happened to me Kit?”
Kit turned to look at Dr Palmer and he gave her a nod to go, but moving his hand indicating her to go slow (light)… Kit tried to be careful, not to upset Bette too much while observing her sister…
“Well Bette… remember you’d gotta go look for this potential sponsor somewhere out of town?”
I nodded to affirm that I still remember that particular detail.
“But… something happened on your way back…”
I started to anticipate and panicked a bit…
“You’d gotten into a quite terrible accident… according to some witnesses… you were trying to avoid hitting into a crossing animal on the freeway and went into the opposite land… then you ran into this carrier…”
‘Oh gosh…I remember, I was speeding on the freeway and suddenly a monkey came running across the road…I swift to the left… then the carrier’ I seemed to relived that moment… then my whole body jerked when I hit the carrier ‘again’…
“Bette? Baby sis…” called Kit while touching my arm…
“Bette…” She was getting worried when she got no response from me… I heard her calling but I was still shocked… shocked of what happened… then suddenly I snapped out of my daze…
“Are there anyone else hurt? Is the monkey ok?” Cold sweats spilling out from my pores on my forehead.
“Don’t worry baby sis… nobody is hurt… not even the monkey… Lord knows how happily the monkey is now.” Stated Kit trying to enlighten her sister’s mood.
Bette released a sigh of relieve but was followed by panic again when “What about me?… How’s my condition? Am I really blind?”
Everyone looked at Doctor Palmer expectantly… well of course except for Bette who could not see.
“Well Ms. Porter, we will do a full check up on you later to see if your condition allows your operation to fix your retina later. We will try to get you into the operation room as soon as possible. Well about your eyes, there is some internal bleeding causing some injury in your retina. And some blood have blocked out your optical nerve head as well. And about the others, we have successfully stopped all the internal bleeding, and the others are just some scratches or minor cuts which have been stitched… and your broken knee has been fixed and cemented… well that’s about all.”
‘Gosh, could he be more irritating… explaining in such pain staking way’ thought Tina while silently listen to Eric Palmer’s explanations.
Bette was silent trying to let all the details sank into her mind. Speaking about cuts and scratches, I could feel tight and throbbing skin on my forehead, cheeks, left arm, abdomen and legs… and oh ya, the heavy thingy which I presumed is the cement on my right knee. I was overwhelmed… afraid… happy to be still alive after all these? Again tears streamed down my cheeks…
“Oh baby sis.. .you’re gonna be ok… everything will go back to normal in no time.” Assured Kit while gathering me in her arms.
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Eric,[excuse me Dr Palmer] A$$ hole is Bette Dr. Want take Tina long to get rid of him. Thanks god for Kit thanks
Eric is such a JERK!!!! I hope Bette will be OK. TIna needs to Eric to the side of the road. THank god for Kit. PPS
Bette’s already started using her ears more whether she knows it or not. And a monkey ran into the road? Maybe it was a sign she’d meet Tina. ;)
A B&T beginning all because Curious George decided to make a mad dash across the PCH. I love it! And Eric needs to become extinct ASAP. Great job!
i already hate Eric…Tina is going to be a really good nurse and spend all her time with Bette…i hope her eyes will be better soon
Good chapter! i wanted so much kick Eric buttom is so arrogant! and it seems to me like Tina has another interest!
cool start longer
God, Bette really did a number on herself. Even though she got hurt badly she still showed concern for the others including the monkey that were involved in the accident. Tina seems to be falling for her charge instead of the irritating Doctor.
I do not like this Eric character…he has to go…looks like Tina is coming to that same conclusion. I have every confidence you will restore Bette’s sight. So when will her friends appear or will it just be Kit in her corner for this story?
of course nurses are great especialy blonde. As to Bette’s blindness blame it on the monkey lmao. Post agian soon. =)
Eric is such a pain in the ass. Why does Tina put up with that jerk. Hey, I love the monkey! Where did that thing come from??
BTW I’m glad you finally decide to post this, it’s great.
Oh another great twist to the story…Eric is Bettes Dr., Tinas boyfriend and a JERK!!!! This just got more interesting, post soon….
OK Tina dump him and spend the night taking care of Bette
I am enjoying the story and hope you post soon.
Eric is an asshole and want to kick the shit out of him, what a moron docter. Please don’t let Bette blind and hope her eyes will be better soon, let Tina take care of Bette. Oh let her dump eric as soon as good. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Waoow, Zabo, this story starts really great. So looking forward to see where you’re taking us! So funny to see that Bette, in spite of her condition, still has her brain reeling about Tina’s marital status and relationship to Eric! So ‘in’ character! I’m also excited about how you’re going to show the chemistry and the mutual (I hope) attraction without those soul-reflecting beautiful eyes of Bette… well, i guess Tina could still read them, but Bette won’t read Tina’s eyes (temporarily I hope). It’s such a usual way of communicating between them that I’m looking fwd to see what other ways they’re going to use. Anyway, you girl got me onboard! Thanks!
Erik as always a suitcase without a handle.
5 stars