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Blisters in the Sun: Part 2
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“We’re running out of names for mommies.” Jun Ying added seriously. Tina thought that was hilarious and they discussed a number of variations on the concept.
Meanwhile, Alice, Shane, Jenny, Nikki (Ninny) and Tasha had walked into the café and sat themselves a few tables away. Alice and Shane waved shyly and were met with excited responses from the children. The three seemed un-phased by any tensions between the adults, but more than that, their presence was already causing a thaw in relations, and it looked as though Alice and Shane were considering coming over.
“I should go say hello.” Helena’s question wasn’t really addressed to Angelica, but the little girl nodded. She looked over at the grownups, her mommies’ friends, and smiled. Then she spotted Shane’s shoes, which were the same black trainers she had worn once before, and Angelica remembered that day when they had all been together in this very place, and when she had seen…
“Puppies!” Angelica asked, looking around for what she hoped would be the same animals she saw on that day.
“AHHHHH!” Shane screamed and leapt upon the table, having overheard what she thought was a warning.
“No baby, there aren’t any puppies today.” Tina tried to reason with the excited girl, while all hell broke loose at the other table. Alice tried to coax Shane off the table while Tasha sat staring at them all as though they had gone mad. Ninny giggled and made comparative notes and observations about their friend’s lack of butch behavior.
The rest of The Planet’s patrons were unaware of the meanings of this interaction.
Angelica, meanwhile, had grown disappointed. “No puppies.” She shrugged.
“Do you want some actual puppies?” Helena asked thoughtfully. Before Tina and Bette could leap upon her and shut her up, Angelica nodded, happy again.
“What’s going on here?” Kit wandered into the front section of The Planet, looking curiously up at Shane who still stood on the table, frantically searching every corner of the café with her eyes. “What kind of shit has she been smoking?” She whispered to Bette, before suddenly remembering that she wasn’t speaking with Bette. The sisters exchanged sheepish, tight lipped smiles.
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That TBC (with no question mark) makes me very happy. So does the fact that Ninny managed to snag themselves a sperm donor; if they screw up parenting as badly as they screwed up “Lez Girls,” it’s comforting to know the framily is there to serve as a safety net. I love the Bette/Helena/Tina triangle and this story’s non-angsty celebration of free love. One worry: if Tina continues to write bad poetry, will Jenny feel threatened by the competition?
Hmmmm HB I love your stories but the threesome of Bette/Helena and Tina just don’t do it for me….not sexy at all. I prefer couples. Why does Helena have to hang with boring Bette/Tina why not Shane/Alice? When I say Alice and Shane I mean friendship not sex.
i had to laugh when tasha and alice got caught in france,lol…tina needs to do something to get out of this funk she is in…. needs to see dr. dan.lol oddly i can’t get into bette and helena stories, to me an odd pairing but this one of the three i find so well written and amazingly funny in its own way. jenny and nikki are so funny together…. please… tina needs to give up writing bad stories and what not… jenny is bound to go wacko on her sooner or later…lol… rofl at shane and puppies.. great update :)
The trio seems to be growing together despite any hesitations Helena has. I am glad to see there has been a thaw from the iciness of the girls. I look forward to seeing where you take us next.
I’ll admit I haven’t read it yet but I’m happy to see it. I’ll read it over the weekend. I see from the comments there is lots to think about.
So “Lez Girls” was a flop. Given Jenny’s creative *abilities* (don’t tell Sofa I stole her asteriks) that’s no surprise. Given same, I truly hope Ninny doesn’t attempt procreation, either. Isn’t the world a fucked up enough place without Jenny’s offspring roaming about? The thought along makes me want to retch. And since it was France, why didn’t they simply put the security video featuring Alice and Tasha on as a objet and offer cocktails and hors d’oevres for the debut instead of giving them the sort of warning more typical of American morality? (It’s that goddamn Puritan streak, I tell ya) And what’s a well muscled guy doing wearing a Ramones shirt? It’s not like Joey was any paragon of physical beuaty-in fact he was one of the ugliest guys I’ve ever layed eyes on-God rest his soul. Well, it’s good to be back. It’s good to see you back. I’ll be in touch when there’s slightly less shit hitting the fan-may I make it through the last 2 weeks of school. I don’t think this particular story needs any werewolves. And I’m so glad you canned the ?
And you’re right about Shane’s reaction to the “puppies”. Any self-respecting butchish street urchin would have stood her ground and not got all girly-squealy about some nice, clean, wellgroomed stunt rats. And Angelica was wrong about the “puppies”, too. When I saw a tourist couple walking on W. 52 St. react to the rat scurrying away from the heap of garbage bags late one night, I smiled at them as I passed and said “nice kitties”.
I love your sense of humour. Jenny and the knife.lol. Tina drinking red wine and writing bad poetry lol. And I think Alice In France. lol I love your threesome. I am going to read again. I love it you did amazing..
Hey there, you do know you are only a 4 hr drive away… and if I have to walk I will make it in 4 hours or die trying to make sure you never give up on the writing… yep… you will be writing as long as me and well I think that might be forever :wink:… hehe… as for this story… lets see… when these three actually find there barings and well just start acting like more of adults then little Angel well then hehe… they might be deserving of their fates… but right know… let the healing come and love and passion are certainly ingredients for healing :wink: :wink:… you rock and roll my beautiful friend. Hugs, JC
I love the little snippets about the other couples–public sex for Talice, sperm choosing for Ninny :).
Ok Finally read it. Cracking up as I thought I would. Hmmmm would love to hear more about Talice’s adventure…I wonder about Shane and Helena’s little tryst and if this story of free love might we expect a foursome or some other threesome combo’s….Great story Co-captain…(One comment on the comments…Beachlife I thought you liked my Bette and Helena story…Hmmmm Things that make you go hmmmm)
Oh God. Ninny (HA! xD) creating a child together? *shudder* Dammit now I’ll have that Ramones song stuck in my head AGAIN. lol Sounds like Tina really had it rough growing up. I’m not sure what’s worse: depression and anxiety that rear their ugly heads at an early age, or stay dormant until then come crashing down unexpectedly.
Helebette, this was so good! I think there is more room for another Shane/Helena one night stand. Can’t wait to read more!