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Breathe– Chapter 19
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“I have been alone for so long.” Bette started almost in a whisper, emotion choking her voice and making it difficult to say what she wanted to so desperately.
“But I never really felt lonely.” She raised Tina’s hand to her lips and held it there, feeling Tina’s cool skin on her warm cheek. “In less than two days, you’ve changed all that. You’ve changed me,” she continued, not letting her mind interfere with the sharing of these simple truths.
You have ruined the house for me,” she said, smiling weakly. “I can’t imagine being there alone again. I would miss you, and for the first time in a long time I know that I would feel totally and hopelessly alone.”
She paused letting the full impact of her words wash over both of them. “I don’t know if I can do that again.” she finished quietly, returning her eyes to the road and waiting for Tina’s response.
“Then why?” Tina asked quietly.
Bette sighed heavily, knowing the exact meaning of Tina’s question. She thought of delaying the inevitable by asking for clarification, and then realized that Tina deserved nothing less that her complete and total honesty.
“Tina, I don’t want to talk about this in the car. I need to be able to hold you, touch you and focus on nothing but you,” Bette offered quickly, not wanting Tina to assume she was avoiding a delicate subject. “Can we wait until we get home?” Bette asked, hoping Tina could hear the sincerity she felt in her voice.
Tina paused and then shook her head. “I think we need to talk about this before we go back to your house,” she responded, her voice cracking and betraying the calm control she was trying to project.
The color drained from Bette’s face as Tina’s serious and determined tone sent her thoughts everywhere and nowhere all at once.
In a moment of clarity, she suddenly realized that it didn’t take something as dramatic as death to result in her losing the beautiful woman in front of her. Her own words and actions could result in just as much pain, just as much hurt and just as much loss as the actions of any madman.
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Welcome Back!! i couldnt wait for u to post it was an excellent chapter as always cant wait for the next one!
Oh my god!!!!! That was way beyond beautiful. The love and emotion wa so real, I could almost feel it flowing straight from the screen and right into my heart. Just when I think your chapters can’t get any better, they do!
Thank you
I just realised i forgot to comment on the MC-17 it was very well written especially since it was ur first time!!
holly shit!!!
I was certainly in a state of withdrawal during your three day hiatus. I am glad all went well for you and your fundraising efforts. Nonetheless, I am glad to read your story once again. While you were gone I must have read and re-read the previous 18 chapters at least 10 times. Thanks again for the update. It is much appreciated. The beauty of their emotions is so well developed and the actual sexual interaction may need a bit more detail net time, but all and all it was great, as usual.
Absolutely perfect. Congrats on the fundraiser.
wow . 3 days have never felt so long but sure worth the wait. Your writing is so smooth, so touching, it draws the readier into their world. Beautiful writing – pls keep themc coming. And, congratulations on your fundraiser – what a wonderful turn out. peace :)
WOW… what an ending… at first i thought that bastard was watching them… i can’t believe he hit again so fast… not his MO… i have another feeling it’s a copycat… he studies his victims… this was too soon… or maybe i just watched to many “Law and Order” or “Cagney and Lacy” TV shows…
Anyway … the sex… hmmmmmmmmmm… nice…real nice… love the out door effect and how they pleased each other at the same time… great job… love how they showed they do love each other…
Now i know bette has to go back to playing a cop… and i know you will keep tina safe… and the dog… he will keep that bastard away from tina… and hopefully tina remembers the guy in the boat… love your story…please continue
how could you keep me waiting for so long!? well it was totally worth the wait. you did an amazing job on your first NC-17 story. congrats on the fundraiser. and i hope you post the next chapter very soon cuz i cant wait for three days again. great chapter!!
3 days? It felt like 3 years. Thank you for such a beautiful chapter. You also handled the NC-17 perfectly. It’s you. please post soon
3 days is too long…although, it sounds like your time was very well spent, congrats on raising so much money…wonderful job and wonderful writing….you posted just in time, I was about to have to track you down myself!
Wow, way to go on the fundraiser! You are obviously very good at what you do, with your job and your writing. Fantastic job with both, congratulations!! This chapter was so real and beautiful, but also reminding the reader that Bette has an important job to do. Every action has a reaction and you’ve done an impeccable job showing that in your writing. I enjoy and look forward to this story every day..okay a few times a day (i’m offically addicted) and I can’t say it enough, this is amazing please don’t stop writing any time soon!
sox – im so glad your event went so well. your an amazing woman.
im floating. im so happy that you posted. i knew youl needed some rest. what a beautiful chappy. i really appreciate intelligent dialogue. not people flipping all over the place. now bette is gonna get her kojak on and save the world. cant wait for another one. thanks
Glad to hear your event went well. This story is simply brilliant, and the love scene was emotional and intense. Looking forward to more :)
Great chapter. Cant wait until the next one
Fantastic! I can hardly wait for the next chapter.
Before she became completely lost in Bette she was able to barely whisper , “Oh God baby, I have been ready for you my entire life.”
Oh my God…I felt that all the way down to my toes! Bye the way…that little park in Magnolia is one of my favorite places to take people who are visiting Seattle. It is without a doubt, the best lookout over downtown Seattle there is. Thanks for reminding me of how beautiful that is.
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was going to put a apb out for you this was great post please post soon I am so glad that you were able to raise so much money!!!!!!
Wow, that was great, but a eerie connection between Bette and Tina, and the poor young lady that just lost her life. Ms. Porter, needs to get her hind in gear, so that she can keep her woman safe.
sox – I love your story, I love your take on Bette and Tina love from their first encounter and then how their different losses create the fearing they feel in that love . I liked your going for the NC17 chapter and found much of it very moving however I just didn’t buy these two characters who have just gone through such a trauma and then a day of piecing that story together deciding to have sex for the first time in a public place. I hate sounding critical because I think you have created a super awesome story and this chapter had such wonderful writing but I felt that aspect was the first note that didn’t seem right to me.
I appreciate your writing very much and look for your posts every day. I agree with whoever it was who said you are the supreme multitasker. And one incredible writer as well.
That was amazing!
Fantastic job on both your fundrasing and your update. You don’t have to worry about getting to descriptive with the NC-17 we could all feel it and thats all you need. I do agree with the others, its time for Bette to get back to business and kick some butt. Looking soooooooooo forward to your next update.
It seemed like forever glad your back…Hope your fundraiser went well…Our GIRLS ARE IN FOR SOME TROUBLE…..PLEASE POST WHEN YOU CAN…..THANKS…..
Gorgeous, you wrote this chapter so beautifully, I was blown away, so emotive I feel this story grows, strenghtens and becomes more awe inspiring with every fathomless word you write. Thank you so much for this, and oh heavens take care of our ladies…
So glad that you’re back. Nice to hear that your fundraiser went so well.
OK, you just about killed me with that last paragraph. My eyes were welling up…you just can’t to that to my sinuses! Bittersweet, that was.
The huge void that was left in each of their hearts because of love. One having it and the other one not, was skillfully represented. So much more to discover about how wonderful it can be for them. They will have to give themselves over to trust before they are completely on the same page.
Interesting that you chose to have them finally make love in such a public setting. Metaphorically exposing themselves, making themselves vulnerable. I loved that choice, by the way. As for not being an over the top ‘porno puppy’ (LMAO), that too was a good choice. Their union and it’s description really was all about ‘less is more’. Well done!
I am always delighted to read one of your chapters. There is so much too them, so much more than just what’s on the surface. You can’t stay away that long next time. I simply can’t find a Sox1 detox center close by!
Please make this the last victim; I’m feeling so sad for all the girls.
Great love between Bette and Tina.
Also, I’m glad your fund raiser did so well. Kids are so special!
Thanks for saving some energy for us!
wow, this is very intense. Fantastic.
BEAUTIFUL, TENDER, LOVING!!!! And then the ending was sad.
Thanks so much for giving us this amazing tale when your life is so busy. I am amazed at how much you give thanks. Your story is the most breath taking I just can’t wait to read. I saw that you had posted and almost didn’t post myself as I wanted to read you story so bad. Thanks so much for sharing your talent.
WHOA! that was so Amazing really Great thanks Please continue post soon.
Amazingly hot!! More soon
i was totally hanging for this chapter, you have truley outdone yourself, absoutely amazing. Cant wait for next chapter
Sox, I was grinnin’ ear to ear when I saw you posted tonight. I’m glad to have you back in the fold. ;)Congratulations on your fund raising! That’s some strong multitasking there.
OMG, this chapter mad me cry. It was so beautifully written. I love the love they have for eachother. I was afraid you stopped posting! I’m glad you’re back, please post again soon!
Enjoyed it fully Sox. I like the idea of MC-17 ha.I don’t need all the details to enjoy B and T’s erotic encounters.Waiting for the next chappy.
Wow, this was simply incredible. Love this story!
Sox, your story is so well written, so beautifully told, and full of its own sensuality, that you dont need to “be one of those detailed lips partin, clit smacking, lick the drippings off the fingers kind of NC-17 writers…”
If I could rate this chapter alone a 10, you would have it. QQg forward to the next 1.