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Breathe- Chapter 7
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Bette hesitated, not wanting the darkness to return to Tinas bright eyes. So you were saying you were the only child of only children.
Tina nodded, knowing where she had to go next. So, I lost my last grandparent when I was 10, and then two years later I lost both my parents in a car accident. Tinas voice broke at the memory.
Tina, I am so sorry. I wish Id known you then, Bette said sincerely, I would have taken care of you. Tina smiled as if Bette had just given her a precious gift.
Thank you, she said. I spent so much time being passed around the foster care system, that it is nice to hear that someone, anyone, would have really wanted me, even though youre just being nice.
Bette took her hand and let her continue. Marc.., she still couldnt say her name. I know, Bette said, her steady eyes giving Tina the courage to continue. She was the daughter of the last couple I lived with.
Oh god, Tina started trying to sit up. Her parents, oh my God, her parents dont know. Somebodys got to tell them.
Tina had swung her legs over the side of the bed and was getting ready to stand. Bette placed her hands on her shoulders and looked into her eyes to get her attention. While you were sleeping on the way to my place, I made a few calls. A Ralieigh Police Officer and the Priest from their local parish told them, Bette paused and looked at her watch, about seven hours ago,
Tina sunk back to the bed, suddenly overcome by the fatigue and exhaustion that had been her companion all day. Thank you, thank you, she said absentmindedly as she let her head sink back into the pillow.
Bette resumed stroking her bangs and forehead to help her relax. So the two of you were just friends, roommates not.. Bette stopped letting Tina fill in the meaning without Bette having to use the words.
Bette knew she was more invested in Tinas answer than just establishing her relationship with the victim, but she didnt expect the relief that washed over her when Tina blurted out Bette, oh God no.
Tina sighed heavily, trying to find the words she had been hoping to avoid. Considering recent events, I know this is going to be rather hard to believe. The nervousness in Tinas voice had garnered Bettes full attention. But, Im not *****. You are the first woman I’ve kissed.
TBC
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Sox,
Absolutely awe inspiring!
The little details that you capture so well have made this a breath taking story. The elements of attraction have been selectively and seductively sneaked in. I am wearing a big cheesy and goofy grin at Tina’s declaration “But, I’m not gay.†I think she has denial, big time.
The way this story has developed with Bette potentially charging over the line just proves how much the heart can rule the head. And how when a chance at happiness comes your way you just have to grab it with both hands, hang on for dear life and be damned of the consequences. Usually there are many but if you are with your soul mate then any storm can be weathered.
I am sitting in purgatory, waiting for Bette’s response and the test results. Will Bette tell Tina that she was the intended victim? What is the murderer’s motive?
Given your talent and hard work, I am sure that these will be answered real soon.
Thank you for this tour de force.
Your Loyal Fan.
My mind has been working overti8me.was someone after Tina or her room mate? Why Tinas picture,was it a warning or what. I will wait for the next chapter. Thanks
“But, I’m not gay.” Oh my.
I guess I was the only one who knew she was str8, ok so I only thought that because she asked to be kissed, she sounded unsure of her self. so she has no family, but I think the foster care is the perfect set up for shane to come into your story. can’t wait to see what bette does not. and to find out what she was drugged with and what form was used.
A very great and interesting chapter. Thank you
soxey – I’m lovin’ the story.. well done! I’m a sucker for the “you’re the first woman I’ve kissed” Can’t wait to see where you’re taking them. -clammy
Great chapter as always, I wonder how Bette is going to tack the news about Tina not being gay and her being the first women she has ever kissed.
OK,,AS USUAL WONDERFUL JOB IN WRITING THIS CHAPTER, YOU ARE AMAZING..NOT GAY…(YEAH RIGHT)..PLEASE POST SOON, AND THANKS
I believe you are officially the protege of Katherine V Forrest……..great stuff.
“I’m not gay” My ass your not gay Tina, Bette would turn the straightest girl gay. I hope things start to work out and that Bette will find the basterd!!!!!!!!!!! Please post soon.
Sox1,
you are now officially in my favorite authors list…please keep it coming! i love your story so much…10 bright stars for you my friend!
I think this is my first time commenting on your story. I just wanted to let you know that your story has really captured my attention. The idea is great and you do an excellent job of writing .. I am looking forward to see where you take us with this one.
OK, I have to hurry and get to work, but I had to comment. This is sooooo great. I constantly look for your updates. Great job.
oh my god, soxy, that little I’m not gay revelation was such a surprize within your story here. You are amazing me and this story is so fine, Write on but do sleep and don’t let the bedbugs bite.
Great story, I can’t get enough! Keep writing!
Traci
Excellent Sox. Bette as a flawed character is much more interesting to me. Her emotional weakness makes her more real.
Well, I had a whole theory in my mind, but with Tina’s revelation… it kinda falls apart, lol.
Anyway, great chapter, but please, please, don’t turn it into a love story, keep the mystery coming too :)
But I know you’ll find a way to juggle with the two just fine ;)
xxx
officially on my favorite authors list–that’s a good way to put it. ditto!
i’m on my way to work also. but had to comment. i waited all day yesterday hoping against hope that you’d post. this morning my wish fulfilled. love the dialogue. i’m a detail kinda girl and you give it in spades. love the background, finally, on tina. my ass shes not straight. loved their bonding moments. please post soon. wow mr. sox better appreciate your considerable talents.
I love the way this story is such a different Bette and Tina!
Very nice.
Great update I like that bette is a flawed person in the beinging it makes her more human. Can we get 2 post in one day PlEASE!!!!!!!!!!
wow.. this is my favorite story. i wait every day to read a new one so please pst soon
Tell Mr. Sox that he can’t kick you off the computer…your fans await your next installment. Better yet let me send over one of my extra laptops. That way you can write anywhere. I simply love this story.
Great story. I like how your moving it along just enough without rushing it. I know Bette will get the guy, cos she’s gotta save Tina. Tina well, girl its too late now your on your way over to the other side. Looking forward to the next update.
OK I can’t wait to fine who is the SERIAL KILLER? Please continue Thanks.
I agree with cnick It’s Kate Delafield – but better. Tina will just have to remember that “resistance is futile”:0)
To me it seems perfectly reasonable that Tina has never kissed a woman before. The trauma that she has gone through and the fact that Bette has been her life line has to affect her feelings for the brunette. I am not saying that they wouldn’t have gotten together in other circumstance, but I think Tina’s willingness to be so open with Bette is because she has been so shockingly reminded how fragile life is. That’s my take, and Sox I am like a broken record, your skill is amazing.
That was great!