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    Breathless Part 8

     

    "Very funny Dane. As if you are any better than us." Shane smirked at Dana.

     

    "Ok I’m sorry." Dana said. She cleared her throat and filled them the information they wanted.

     

    "So after I met her girlfriend I said goodbye and took a cab back to the airport. I felt stupid." Dana sighed and rubbed her temples. Shane and Bette looked at each other. They shook their heads. How could they have such a goof in their player’s team?

     

    "Dana." Bette said.

     

    "Huh?"

     

    "From what you told us it looks like you are running away from her."

     

    "Huh? So what am I supposed to do?"

     

    "Fight Dana fight. You cannot just sit here and act as if you have never met her. You gotta fight for someone you like."

     

    "I just….I just don’t know. I know I like her but she has a girlfriend already. I don’t want to be a home wrecker. "

     

    "Did she introduce her as her girlfriend?"

     

    "Nope but they kissed in front of me. Oh god I don’t want to think about it anymore. It hurts."

     

    "Dana come on. You said she pulled away and kept a distance from the women. Would you do that to your girlfriend?"

     

    "I don’t know. But they look like an item."

     

    "Ok, if they are an item why was she alone in London? It was her vacation right?"

     

    "That’s what she told Tonya."

     

    "I mean will you leave your girlfriend behind and go on a vacation on your own?"

     

    "No. But if I need to think or be alone then I would."

     

    "What do you mean you need to think or be alone, that’s your girlfriend remember?"

     

    "Well when you are not in love then you probably wouldn’t mind if she is there or not. I mean if you are in love with someone you would probably want her to be around you all the time. I would even cancel the holiday if the person I’m in love with couldn’t make it with me. I would rather stay by her side here in LA than going to a boring holiday missing her everyday."

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    Comments

    1. I have to say, you are writing Danish very well. I understand Dana’s hurt, but, I am glad Shane and Bette were there to help her put it in perspective. And I think it is a good plan to try being friends first. It looks like Dana doesn’t plan to give up, but, Alice is going to have to meet her halfway, I think. I hope the Michelle thing gets resolved soon. Thanks, uhhuh!!

    2. I can just picture D rubbing her temple and feeling all frustrated. She could be so goofy! Excellent job, uhhuh, Thank you for having Shane and Bette to help D to analyze the situation. That was a very well written scene. lol several times with D’s answers. Then A was equally adorable with her cell phone. And finally their conversation was pretty funny too. All in all a great update. Thank you very much!

    3. nice chapter…i love it when Dana sometimes play dumb and Shane and Bette have to explained to her everything so she can see things in different prospective…so cute of her…pls. post soon…

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