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Brief Encounter Chapter 10
My alarm went off at 6:00 AM. I had ordered breakfast in bed to be sent at 7. This should give me time to get ready. I sat up in my bed and looked at the empty space next to me. This time years ago, I never wouldve thought Id be in this position, where I would wake up to an empty bed without her lying next to me. It used to be me waking up to soft kisses she place on me, her lips nibbling on my ears, her hands running up and down my aching body as both of us enjoy our wake up rituals. But now those are all just a past life.
I had a long hot shower. The water felt good on my tired skin. Why do I feel so tense today? Surely Ive done this so many times before in my life. Ive never felt nervous about this before so why start now? Ive thought about my plan of actually meeting her today. I wonder if she still feels the same way about me. Maybe Im hoping too much. Of course she doesnt anymore. Shed moved on and Im still stuck in the past still wanting her.
I dried myself off and had breakfast alone in my hotel room. I had a glass of orange juice, and grabbed a bread roll. I dont know why but I ordered enough food for two. I guess the habit is still there I really didnt feel like eating…I walked over to the window to look at the view. When was the last time we stayed in a hotel only to want to stay in bed the whole day? It had been too long
I remember when I was on one of my business trips and I brought her along at this time Id already be up, usually will be drinking my coffee sitting next to the hotel bed looking at her sleeping. She was beautiful then and Im sure she still is beautiful now. I remember leaning in kissing her cheek while she sleeps and how she slowly opens her eyes from the soft touch of my lips on her skin.
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(48 votes, average: 3.98 out of 5)
I had a feeling you were going to do that to us. Please, please, post soon. I think I’m more pumped up to see Tina, than Bette is. I will die if Tina is in New York. Someone please, let Bette know where Tina is, so that Bette, (and us) can prepare ourselves for this bit of information. Thumbs, PLEASE?!!!
You had me fooled. I thought that was Bette’s POV! Great job. Please get the two together soon!!!
Well! That was a surprise! I assumed it was Bette talking.
Bette was the one who wanted the distance? Wow?
i sit at my computer with my mouth gaped open. I honestl didn’t see that coming. great twist. post soon please.
that was beautiful. where’s the rest of this story? post soon!
I totally thought that was Bette’s POV. Where is Tina living? or is she in NY while Bette’s in LA. Looking forward to the next.
Please don’t keep us hanging so long for the next update, love to know what is happeing soon, just let the loving begin between our two favorite characters.
NO! Tina can not be in New York while Bette is in California! Are they in the same city? Great story! I kept thinking Bette – nice curve ball! Can’t wait for the continuation of this story. *smiles* Thanks!
Very nice Thumbs….but way to SHORT. You can´t leave us hanging here to long you hear. Post soon with some good news for B&T.
Thumbs you have captured all of Bette’s doubts so well. I can’t wait for the meeting. What’s the plan and who is the mystery admirer?? I’m hooked
No words can express how u stirred up feelings inside me with ur writing. So I’m just gona say a heartfelt thank you for writing all these beautiful chapters. Thanks.
Short but oh so sweet…..You had me fooled too!….So are we going to see Bette and Tina come face to face….soon right thumbs???Thanks for another awesome chapter…please post soon.
I wasn’t expecting that! That was really insightful as well as beautiful…Thanks again.
Great story! Please let them find one another….and soon. Keep up the good work.
Perfect
Thanks for another great chapter. They’re going to talk soon, right?
Hi Thumbs, with a big smile on my face, that chapter was so so good, especially the last sentence.
Thank you.
OK I’m not the total idiot, I meant Tina but still Thumbs you have me blown away.
beautiful twist there, never expected that, very very good Thank you
That was beautiful, I hope you will post soon
Awww!! What … Tina! that was just to cool and slyly done thumbs!!FANTASTIC!!!!!!!
GO GET HER BETTE…hurry..great post..don’t leave us hanging too long..
God I don’t know this is good or bad because where is Tina stay and how she gonna meet Bette. Please let them see each other. Post soon, thank you!