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Brief Encounter Chapter 10
Hey baby she said. Two words HEY BABY. My heart just melts. I just want to hold her and stay there with her… I would love nothing more than to be with her and ditch whatever meetings I have that day. I would go straight back to the hotel as soon as the meetings were over so I could once again be in her arms. It didnt take a genius to see how in love I am with her and how she too felt the same way. We were never able to keep our hands off each other.
The times when I see her waking up, as her eyes fluttered open, those few seconds, thats what I crave for. I want to be the first person she sees when she wakes up and the last as she sleeps. But I dont have either of that now. Having her in my life is something that I had taken for granted. If I could have anything in the world, Id ask for her to be back in my life. No matter how bad things were before, whatever they were I am willing to work on them. I hope when I finally see her today, if I ever get a hold of her, there would be a slight chance that she too feel the same way. I sighed
I got ready and looked at myself in the mirror. You will see her today. And you will tell her how much youve missed her. You will also tell her how much you love her and how much you regretted your life these three years. You have to tell her how sorry you are to have caused she be apart from you. You have to tell her how every night you think of her and dream of her and how much you want for her to be the first thing you see when you wake up and the last as you both drift to sleep. And the one most important thing, you have to tell her you are willing to work things out. Yes thats what Ill tell her. Tell her all these things and make her see how beautiful we would be together again.
I walked out of my hotel room and closed the door behind me. But as I neared the elevator my mind went overdrive with doubts
What if she doesnt want to? ***** what if she doesnt want me? Am I to believe that I can walk away for the second time? Can I do that? Can I walk away again? To see her turn her back on me, on us? Can I handle that? I know I said Id forever leave her alone if she didnt want me back but I just I dont know if I can take it. Im too scared to know what her answers would be. Would she even want to see me? Jesus! Maybe this is a bad idea after all. I walked back to my room pushing the key into the slot.
Never give up on something you believe in Shanes words kept ringing in my ears. Never give up Never give up I sighed. Shanes right I do believe in us. I did but what went wrong? How did I lose faith in us? Does she feel the same way? Does she still believe in us? I thought about it for a moment as I slowly pulled the key out. I guess if I dont try then Id never know
As I stepped out of the hotel, I felt hope. I breathed out the huge air that I held in my throat. Breathed in the fresh air Right! Today I will tell Bette once and for all
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(48 votes, average: 3.98 out of 5)
I had a feeling you were going to do that to us. Please, please, post soon. I think I’m more pumped up to see Tina, than Bette is. I will die if Tina is in New York. Someone please, let Bette know where Tina is, so that Bette, (and us) can prepare ourselves for this bit of information. Thumbs, PLEASE?!!!
You had me fooled. I thought that was Bette’s POV! Great job. Please get the two together soon!!!
Well! That was a surprise! I assumed it was Bette talking.
Bette was the one who wanted the distance? Wow?
i sit at my computer with my mouth gaped open. I honestl didn’t see that coming. great twist. post soon please.
that was beautiful. where’s the rest of this story? post soon!
I totally thought that was Bette’s POV. Where is Tina living? or is she in NY while Bette’s in LA. Looking forward to the next.
Please don’t keep us hanging so long for the next update, love to know what is happeing soon, just let the loving begin between our two favorite characters.
NO! Tina can not be in New York while Bette is in California! Are they in the same city? Great story! I kept thinking Bette – nice curve ball! Can’t wait for the continuation of this story. *smiles* Thanks!
Very nice Thumbs….but way to SHORT. You can´t leave us hanging here to long you hear. Post soon with some good news for B&T.
Thumbs you have captured all of Bette’s doubts so well. I can’t wait for the meeting. What’s the plan and who is the mystery admirer?? I’m hooked
No words can express how u stirred up feelings inside me with ur writing. So I’m just gona say a heartfelt thank you for writing all these beautiful chapters. Thanks.
Short but oh so sweet…..You had me fooled too!….So are we going to see Bette and Tina come face to face….soon right thumbs???Thanks for another awesome chapter…please post soon.
I wasn’t expecting that! That was really insightful as well as beautiful…Thanks again.
Great story! Please let them find one another….and soon. Keep up the good work.
Perfect
Thanks for another great chapter. They’re going to talk soon, right?
Hi Thumbs, with a big smile on my face, that chapter was so so good, especially the last sentence.
Thank you.
OK I’m not the total idiot, I meant Tina but still Thumbs you have me blown away.
beautiful twist there, never expected that, very very good Thank you
That was beautiful, I hope you will post soon
Awww!! What … Tina! that was just to cool and slyly done thumbs!!FANTASTIC!!!!!!!
GO GET HER BETTE…hurry..great post..don’t leave us hanging too long..
God I don’t know this is good or bad because where is Tina stay and how she gonna meet Bette. Please let them see each other. Post soon, thank you!