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Brief Encounter Chapter 19
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Tina: See what I mean?
Sarah: Yeah I guess youre right. She cant be too weird. Shes just Noooooo you sidetracked me from my story again Tina!!!
Tina: What? I did not!
Sarah: Did too!!
Tina: Ok well, please continue then
Sarah: Thank you. As I was saying I went on the school trip and we went to two galleries. To cut the story short… We went to The Porter Gallery.
Tina: You did?
Sarah: Yes and I met Bette.
Tina: You did?
Sarah: Yes. And I talked to her.
Tina: You did?
Sarah: Yes and please stop saying that!
Tina: Saying what?
Sarah: Never mind. Well anyway. She promised to see me this afternoon. Ive made an appointment to see her. But Im not going to see her cos I want you to take that slot to see her.
Tina: You did what?
Sarah: Yeah you heard me. Ive booked a slot for you to see her. Arent I just the sweetest thing?
Tina: You did what?
Sarah: You said that already Tina. Geez!! So you will go there and see her this afternoon ok?
Tina: Youre not coming with me?
Sarah: Of course I am. I like Bette. I want to see her again.
Tina: What was she like?
Sarah: Shes beautiful Tina. Youre lucky.
Tina: I wouldnt say Im lucky Sarah. I dont have her with me
Sarah: Yet! But you will this afternoon ok?
Tina: Yeah I hope so
I gave Sarah an appreciative smile for her help and sipped my latte.
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Sarah: So are you ready?
Tina: Im never ready but always up for it when it comes to meeting Bette.
Sarah: Ok. Well, here goes nothing
We crossed the street towards The Porter Gallery. There was no traffic. No cars were honking their horns like they usually do. People are smiling as they walk on the sidewalks. Couples walk hand in hand chatting away. No one was rushing to go anywhere. It was a calm scene. Too calm that I felt something was about to go wrong.
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You are so mean! I knew you would do that, have Tina in NY and Bette in LA! I’m just not sure which is worst, this or Candance!!!! Ha, ha.
Great story, Thumbs. I like how you use Sarah to draw out Tina. So, Tina was stalking Bette? Hmmmm.
I always look for your updates. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you!
It’s so nice to see you post again, i was and still hooked with this story, i love how slow you’re making things..
Two Thumbs up for another great chapter.. ;)
Great chapter. I think Bette went to LA because of a frantic call from Alice saying she was missing. Oh well back to LA where paths will finally cross! Thanks!
What how could you do that to us post soon please
Just loving it Thumbs as you know – love the pace you write in and please don´t go fast on your story here. Can´t wait to see why Bette is in LA. Maybe something to do with Peggy. Please post soon and yes I´ll try to update my story soon but has been away for the past week. Very nice update Thumbs. Talk to you later.
So happy so see some updates. Love this story. Hope the writers block doesn’t keep you down for too long, but hey, it happens to all of us. Anxiously awaiting your next chapter!!
Good chapter. This is gonna be fun and can’t wait to see Bette and Tina see each other again. Post soon, thanks!
Thumbs thanks so much for not doing the wham bam thing. I love your story and have been an avid reader from the first. Take your time and come when you can I will wait. I know that life and other issues can take priority and that’s just the way it really is. But know we thank you for what we have already. Thanks and great story. I love Sarah and her ingenous young mind.
Okay still stalling, but i’ll let you off. Good Chapter T, Now hurry up and quit stalling. LOL.
Geeezz..why are you make this encounter so hard???…lol..please FIX this… i´m about to have a stroke..lol..and that will be your foult…amazing chapter post real soon
Brief encounter, indeed! Please get the to be on the same coast and the same state for more than a day. Thanks for the wonderful chapter!
Thumba, great post, but why are they playing cat and mouse. Get them together soon plz?!?!?!Ok ok Im done. I really cant wait to see where this goes next.
Great chapter Thumbs. I hope u won’t have exam for a long time, I really missed u’re story. Please, keep posting, I’m already waiting for the next update. Thanks you.
Dang Thumbs, where was the encounter? Shit why did Bette have to be in LA! It is a great story and I couldnt wait until I got to the last page, only to find out that Bette wasnt there. I hope in the next chapter that they WILL meet up, or are you going to leave us hanging again. Glad you posted again, I missed your stories, Damn that writers block shit.
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Great chapter, can’t wait to see what happens.
mine was alrite.. :) BTW,you are a great writer..take things slow,don’t give up!!!! :) i love your stories.. pls do continue posting.. thx for this great update!
Hey Thumbs, take your time with your story…no need to rush, writers block is a pain in the backside and when you have other things going on in your life fan fic sould be the last of your worries…we will still read when you post..get some sun, kick back and enjoy life.
Again great update.
No more deux ex Sarah? Perhaps Tina can fit her in the overhead bin.
So…people think Tina’s missing…and Bette’s in LA. Could these two things be related? Looking forward to more, whenever.